FF: I HATE LUV STORIES: chapter-13 pg 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: LuvRagvir

this is awesome....... hpe u cn rite tha next chapters n quickly!!!



thanks and wow what a wonderful pic of lovely ragvir truly beautiful 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik


yup yup yupp.. canttttt waitttttttttttttt 😆 😆



hey sana i am updating it today .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHAPTER -2
Gayatri dadi goes home and tells her son omi about her meeting with ragini ,she says she sort of resembled his friend sekhar kapur's daughter. Then omi says hmm maybe ma she was 4 yrs old when we left india a sweet girl .let me ca;ll sekhar and ask him about her then he calls sekhar and asks her how he is? sekhar replies he is fine and asks about ranvir,priya and shalini( ranvir's mom) and gayatri dadi. Omi replies they all are fine and asks about ragini then sekhar says that she came to london only she is on a vacation but she is on her way to airport and is returning back home and then omi says so true u know ma met ragini today ,u ask her to come wait at the airport i want her to spend some time with us and u also come i want to celebrate my company's anniversary with u all ,sekhar says fine i will ask her. Then omi tells his mother that she indeed saw ragini only ,gayatri smiles and says my eyes don't cheat know send ranvir to get her home. omi tells ranvir to go and pick her and ranvir goes to the airport . Omi then calls shalini and informs her about ragini's arrival ,shalini gets super excited.
DELHI:
Sadhana takes alekh to her house and her mother opens the door and does alekh's tilak and says nice jodi and all .Alekh looks confused then sadi interrupts and says well my mom is obsessed about getting me married so she every guy she sees thinks as her future SIL so be careful and goes inside. Alekh goes to his room and checks out the place and opens the window , then he sits on the bed and is about to relax when the bed along with alekh falls down. sadi is at the door with tea in her hands. she smiles seeing alekh and says "humpty dumpty had a great fall" and puts the tea on the table and then gives alekh a hand. while pulling him up she also falls on him and they share a major eyelock😉.
LONDON AIRPORT:

Ranvir buys some flowers as per dadi instructions and goes in to the terminal where ragini is waiting. He sees her from the back and says she must be the girl and pats on his shoulder and says Now common loverboy it is time for u to charm some girls and he taps on her shoulder ,she turns around and they both stare at eachother for some time and the song " jab mila tu " song starts playing at the background. Ranvir gives a small killer smile ( must say girls will definitely go crazy here) and ragini also smiles back and then ranvir clears his throat and says hi again i am ranvir she says hi ranvir and then ranvir says k this is like a telephone convo now lets get u home come is this your luggage, ragini says ya this is then ranvir gives her the flowers and says oops i almost forgot here beautiful roses for a more beautiful girl with a radiant smile. Ragini says charming and thanks him. then someone hits ragini with their luggage trolley and ragini loses her balance and is about to fall down when ranvir holds her and again they both share a major eyelock and the song " jab mila tu " plays again. ranvir says are u alright ragini says i am fine and then ragini says ahmm then ranvir helps her stand and leaves her. Then he says lets go home and takes her to the car and drives home. Ragini says i still remember our childhood days do u rememeber, ranvir pretends he remember's all and says ya ofcourse then ragini says i gave u a nick name when we were small do u remember it then ranvir says no i don't remember u only tell then ragini gives naughty smile and says no so soon now i will give u clues u have to guess it alright. ranvir says fine. They both reach home.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
hey all new chapter posted . do check it out and give me feed back.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
wow priya..that was beautiful..
hmm so the relationship came out..
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved the ragvir scene..
adorable haan,,,,
loved it sweetie..
update soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: KinchuKiPari

wow priya..that was beautiful..
hmm so the relationship came out..
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved the ragvir scene..
adorable haan,,,,
loved it sweetie..
update soon..



thanks yaar. ya the relationship finally came out and there is more to come . ya i will update soon.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
hi!!!!!!!!!!! u r an awesum story writer 👏 . we r atleast able 2 see their luv storys in this way(which dey hv stopped showin in the serial long bak💔). ragvir were rocking ,salekh were cute👍🏼 i just wished dat u were a part of bidaais ct so dat we cud hv atleast seen der luv story.no words 2 express ur talent 👏👏👏👏
Edited by kinrul4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
oyee hoyeeeee priyaaaaaa rocking chapter.. loved it.. major eyelock 😆 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Wow Ragvir childhood frnds.. thts so cute.. luved the airport scene.. thanx a lot for the PM..do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinrul4ever

hi!!!!!!!!!!! u r an awesum story writer 👏 . we r atleast able 2 see their luv storys in this way(which dey hv stopped showin in the serial long bak💔). ragvir were rocking ,salekh were cute👍🏼 i just wished dat u were a part of bidaais ct so dat we cud hv atleast seen der luv story.no words 2 express ur talent 👏



Thanks for the complements i really enjoy writing it is my passion from child hood and seeing so many people enjoy is a great feeling 😉. thanks again. keep reading and keep commenting😉.

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