NEW FF: SaAlekh 'Painting'/'Waist touching scene'

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: saathiya93
*sigh* wah! very good!
the last sentence made me laugh "You're not off the hook just yet". haha! that's exactly what alekh's gaze seems to say!

I think it's a very good idea to portray sadhna's feeling like that.

very good FF!!

but if I must add something, then it would be when alekh slid his fingers on sadhna's waist, when I watched the scene, I really felt that sadhna felt electricity running down her spine, and then she closed her eyes in bliss... I waited to read a line like that in your story...

anyways I love it!

please do the SR! haye!! I'm already all blushing😳

Ah, nice suggestion. Yaar I was feeling the same way as Sadhna writing this...so it was hard to gather all of my feelings...I tried to convey is as best as I could... the slipping his fingers down her sari thing was my own addition...I wanted to spice it up..😉

SR- I'm terrified of the SR! lol...because when I do it, I plan on doing it in both Alekh and Sadhna's POV...that was a huge night for Alekh too...it's time to get inside Allu ji's head...so I'm gonna have to think pretty hard...getting inside a guy's head at a moment like that...plus that moment must mean SO MUCH to him, right? He can finally be with his wife...finally feel what she feels...and show her the love...

Yeah if I'm gonna dive into the SR...I will have to add a bit more spice...and describe the already sensual scene that we all saw...I'm gonna change it up though...I plan on him having something for her outside but bringing her BACK INTO THE HOUSE for the big moment...