~!!*FF Maine Pyar Kiya *!!~RR~*CH 5,Pg 17

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@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Yaar ttune kamal kardiya yaar phir se. Good keep it uppppp. RAgvir to lajavab hai and you are the best.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Well done
Preet..

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preet

@preetgurti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

thanku meeta ,Ammu ,suku

for your kind and lovely words

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481744

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

preet i was such an idiot tht i missed ur this ff,U know this is d best ff on ragvir,eternal love story,yesterday night i read ur MPK ff n i was picturising ragvir in all scenes,yaari fell in luv with ur ff ,Plz yaar post in rajan shahi blog may be he can take idea from ur this ff for KIRNUL movie,

honestly speaking even more thn anmol n anamika i love this bittu n mithu love story of RAGVIR .This is an eternal love story,this indeed is a story of two soulmates RAGVIR.yaar after i m so curiuos to know wht hppns next in bitti mithu love story tht i cant wait any more so plzzzzz yaar do update ur next chapter soon.

yaar I really want ki is story pe KINRUL ko lekar ya tho show banaya jaaye ya phir ek movie

i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv this story

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗t

thnx for such a beautifu RAGVIRl FF

Edited by vanilla24 - 15 years ago

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preet

@preetgurti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: vanilla24
preet i was such an idiot tht i missed ur this ff,U know this is d best ff on ragvir,eternal love story,yesterday night i read ur MPK ff n i was picturising ragvir in all scenes,yaari fell in luv with ur ff ,Plz yaar post in rajan shahi blog may be he can take idea from ur this ff for KIRNUL movie,
honestly speaking even more thn anmol n anamika i love this bittu n mithu love story of RAGVIR .This is an eternal love story,this indeed is a story of two soulmates RAGVIR.yaar after i m so curiuos to know wht hppns next in bitti mithu love story tht i cant wait any more so plzzzzz yaar do update ur next chapter soon.

yaar I really want ki is story pe KINRUL ko leak ya tho show banaya jaaye ya phir ek movie

i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv this story

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗t

thnx for such a beautifu RAGVIRl FF

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanku so much yaar tune pada and u liked thanku dear

waise i am falling in love with these characters all over again

😃😃😃😃😃

yaar srsly itni acchi lagi tujhe

😳😳

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481744

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: killerkinrul
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanku so much yaar tune pada and u liked thanku dear
waise i am falling in love with these characters all over again

😃😃😃😃😃

yaar srsly itni acchi lagi tujhe

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yaar achi ???????????jaisi xcitement mujhe anmol anamika love story mein hoti thi usse kai zaada ragvir ko imagine karte hue is story mein ho rahi hai.Its a suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb story

yes yaar ur this story making me falling in luv with RAGVIR once again.

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priya

@pankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

~*~ Part 2 ~*~

Very sweet FF preet.👏👏👏👏

SANJU-RAN's naughty icecream fighting was cool and funny. RAN is too much. He was teaing SANJU😆😆 And AMMU's audition was so confident. Wow AMMU is in RAN's troup😳😍.

Mera No. kab aayega....???😭🤣. RAN is very ahppy to get one dancer like AMMU. And SANVIR's behaviour with AMMU was so casual. I like it. And SANVIR name is very cool 😎👏👏

But best part is RAGI-RAN's part 👏👏👏👏👏.

When RAGI entered in temple and prayed for MITTHO😳. Her love is pure just like a crystal water😊. And when RAN prayed for BITTO 😍. Haay main toh mar jaawa apnbe RAGVIR ke pyaar par ☺️☺️☺️.

RAGI was tying the mannat dupatta for RAN and RAN for RAGI😳. OOops RAGI was nearabout to fall😲 but our hero RAN was there to hold her. Finally first time they ee to each other and their eyes r locked. And BG song----EK DUJE KE WAASTE and snow fall😳😳 . RAN tied his chunni with RAGI's chunni..........ye galti nahi GOD ka ishara hai..ki bahut jald ye dono milne waale hai (like BITTO & MITTHHO).

ROAD is blocked due to snow fall.........our RAGVIR will spend more time with each other. And CHUHA's sccene was very funny🤣. RAN ne RAGI ko 2-2 times bachaaya hai...😳⭐️.

Very sweet FF daer. I loved it. well edited 👏👏 and executed👏👏. Keep it on 👍🏼.

Sorry for late reply😳😃. Very soon I will read ur 3rd part😳

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priya

@pankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

~*~ Part 3~*~

Again super sweet FF daer. MAin khud ko rok nahi payi 3rd padhne se.

Very sweet FF daer. RAN is fully dedicated to his work. Isiliye itne kharaab mausam mein bhi wapas jaane ki jidd👏👏. And RAGI wants to pay back karz. So innocent.

But RAGVIR fell down from cliff😲 but after this their eye locking scene😳😳. RAGI was upon RAN...covered with snow...RAN was shivering....RAGI hold him tightly....whole night they were like this😳☺️😍 . But in the morning RAGI walked out from there without uttering any single word..And RAN was serching her. They both were feeling something different😳😳. They both were crying on their ways and praying for their loves⭐️👏. APPU's entry was brilliant. Her performance was appreciable. BTW which song it is. it is from which movie?? And SANVIR's decision to take audition in APPU's school is appreciable👏👏. RAN is talking to BITTO😳. but APPU is confused to see it😆😆. This is calledDIVINE love. Pure & innocent. And RAGVIR's flashback scene were bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt 👍🏼. And when RAN said in flashback BITTO u danced for RAB stole the whole epi😳😍.

RAN was smiling by recalling PAST night memories😳😆. PRECAP is good. Now next one is DHARAA 🥳 I loved it. ❤️. Gr8 job. Keep it on. I loved ur each & every single word of FF👏⭐️.

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preet

@preetgurti

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: pankhi

~*~ Part 3~*~

Again super sweet FF daer. MAin khud ko rok nahi payi 3rd padhne se.

Very sweet FF daer. RAN is fully dedicated to his work. Isiliye itne kharaab mausam mein bhi wapas jaane ki jidd👏👏. And RAGI wants to pay back karz. So innocent.

But RAGVIR fell down from cliff😲 but after this their eye locking scene😳😳. RAGI was upon RAN...covered with snow...RAN was shivering....RAGI hold him tightly....whole night they were like this😳☺️😍 . But in the morning RAGI walked out from there without uttering any single word..And RAN was serching her. They both were feeling something different😳😳. They both were crying on their ways and praying for their loves⭐️👏. APPU's entry was brilliant. Her performance was appreciable. BTW which song it is. it is from which movie?? And SANVIR's decision to take audition in APPU's school is appreciable👏👏. RAN is talking to BITTO😳. but APPU is confused to see it😆😆. This is calledDIVINE love. Pure & innocent. And RAGVIR's flashback scene were bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt 👍🏼. And when RAN said in flashback BITTO u danced for RAB stole the whole epi😳😍.

RAN was smiling by recalling PAST night memories😳😆. PRECAP is good. Now next one is DHARAA 🥳 I loved it. ❤️. Gr8 job. Keep it on. I loved ur each & every single word of FF👏⭐️.

Thanku Guys Priya ye tum sabki comments aur love hai towards my ff thanku yaar

ye Song Maine pyar kiya movie ka title track hai yaar Raj ne choose kiya tha appu ke liye

Thanku so muchhhhhhh

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

@KinSanj

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

okay sorry for the late comments here jaan..

hehe

okie let's begin 😃

sabse pehle toh i loved the starting mere RagVir 😍

echare ragvir dono thand mein...awww... mera dost ranvir raat bhar thand mein kaamp raha tha...and both have hugged each other tightly 😳

main aur ranvir rehearsal hall mein rehte hain? really hehehe..gud 1...

i can imagine the dil toh paagal hai hall in my head.hehehe waise hi hai kya? 😳

Ragini uthti hai ankhen khulte hi kuch ajeeb mehsus hota hai aur woh bas cup chap chali jaati hai jaise kuch alag ho

I cn soooooooooooo imagine ragini here..srsly that feeling is just weird yet it gives a diff feeling..i have had that feeling b4 😳 it just can't be described

Ee lo...appu ko bhi select karliya..hehehe

3 select hogaye hai... amu, appu tum dono ki khair nahi..mere under kaam karogi na..hahahahahaha chun chun ke badle lungi 😉

aaye haaye ranvir and ragini thinking bout last night...awwwwww... Ranvir kitna cute cha lagta hoga na. 😳

oh ho dharaa ne bhi entry maar li...aaja bache aaja..hehe dekhe tera danace.. hehehe dance nhi danacse dekhenge 😃

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preet

@preetgurti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

CHAPTER 4

Gharonda (Ragini's house)

Khale mithoo teri pasand ke mirchi wali pakode hai ,dekh jaldi se khale thande hojaayenge phir mat bolna chal mooh khul ab mujhe der ho rahi hai ,Kya hua Ragini ,dekhiye na babuji ,mithoo pakode nahin kha raha kitne pyar se banaye uske fav hai na ,mujhe dede main khalo nahin aapko mana hai samjhe accha to ek nahin ek bhi nahin chai pijiye bina shakar ki 😆ab mooh khol bhi de na mithoo tu na mere mithoo se bilkul alag hai sunta nahin meri aur woh meri har baat manta tha ,arey wah khol liya mooh pata tha mujhe le kh kaise lagey kuch bol to sahi (mithoo her pet parrot jise usne apne mithoo ki yaad main liya )chal ab hum jaa rahe hai ghar ka khyaal rakhna theek hai ,Ragini ji bauji boliye kab tak karegi intezaar jo woh na aya to ,ayega bauji jab tak uski bitto ki saanse hai woh zaror ayega jis din ye dil dhadkna band karde aap samjhlena ki uske bhi dil ne dhadkana band kardiya hai aur yahan nahin to kahin aur milenge hum zaror ,chale ab tu chal main ata hoo ji.hey Bhagwaan kyun kar raha hai aisa itna pyar itna bharosa darr lagta hai kahin toot na jaaye bas inhe milwade inka pyar ki kahani pori karde inke saath hi ab tere hone ka saboot dega mujhe in do sanson ko ek dhadkan ki mala bana de inhe milwake bas 😭

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Rehersal hall

Ranvir sitting alone (watching bitto and hers old pics )tumhe pata hai aaj bahut thak gaya main has kyun rahi hoo itna kaam tha waise ek good news humein ek aur lead milgayi 3 fix hogayi bas 2 more to go happy now ,accha tumhe pata hai aaj mujhe mirchi ke pakode khane ka mann kar raha hai ,sanju bolo kya 😃ab kuch bolo na tum bhi na accha ye suno maine nayi dhun banayi kaisi hai ,Sanju ye ranvir abhi bhi akele apne aap badbada raha hai jhalla hogaya nahin appu jhalla nahin kamla hai kisi ke pyar main kya ,ammu dekh ranvir ko arey sanju ise kya hua tum dono daro mat ranvir bitto se baatein karraha hai ab ye bitto kaun hai ,hmmm bittto Maine pyar kiya ka dil hai ,matlab bitto ranvir ke bachpan ki saathi hai is kahani ka dil aur hum log is kahani ki dhadkan 😳😊abhi tak mujhe yahi pata hai jab humein pori cast mil jaayegi tab ranvir kahani sunayega Awwww tab tak tum dono neeche chalo humein auditions ke liye appu ke school jana hai haa chal tu ranvir ko le aao phir haan ,oye Ranjhe chale agar apni heern nal tuhadi gallan hogayi ho taa ,tu bhi mazak uda rahi hai nahin aisa ho sakta hai kya kabhi ammu aur appu pooch rahe the accha tune kya kaha wahi jo sach hai accha aur kya sab bata diya ki aaj ka din kaisa tha haa aur ab mirchi ke pakode khane hai tujhe kaise pata tu jab order de raha tha tab suna😆tujhe pata hai jab main aur bitto mirchi wale pakode khate the na tab na unme itni mirchi hoti thi ki bitto bahut roti thi use dekh ke mere ansoon bhi apne aap girte jaate the aur use lagta tha ki mujhe bahut mirchi lagi woh bhagti thi aur gud laati thi rote rote mujhe khilati thi aur mirchi use lagi hai bhool jati thi😭accha haan phir ,phir main samajh jata tha aur use gud khilata tha aur phir hum dono bhaag kar jaate the aam totne wow na 😊chal ab chale pehle aaj ki audition leni hai phir jana hai appu ke school haan chal tu main aya ,theek hai bitto main chalo ab love u zindagi bhar ❤️

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Audition

Appu yaar ye ranvir kisse baatein karta hai ,haan ammu humesha hi na apne aap hi laga rehta hai lagta hai kisi se bahut pyaar karta hai haan ,karta hoon apni zindagi se zayada aur tum dono ko bhi bataonga zaror pakka haan pakka sanju kidhar gayi main aagayi ye lo sabke liye mirchi ke pakode ranvir ne order kiye chalo khaaye aur saath main auditions bhi le wow sanju tusi great ho ,thanku girls 😊Auditions started but humesha ki tarah ranvir is not impessed as this time he wants a character with lots of fun jiska dance bhi bas khushi de use bhi aur sabko Now Dhara enters (white small skirt with a babypink top and open hair looking very stunning )Lights off song start (Mere khwabon main jo aye aake mujhe ched jaaye usse kaho kabhi saamne to aye ,http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogDz-IhlK0g

She dances beautifully like a doll everyone claps 👏👏👏👏👏bravo you are tooo good your expressions were so natural i love every moment of your dance srsly u are the girl we are looking for the bubly chubby girl who dance for happiness and for her love happiness is character ki ek sapno ki duniya hai jo tumne dikhayi great haine sanju haan ranvir she is brilliant and very beautifull sweet looking girl haina kyun ammu ,appu yaa you are awesome so whats your name Dhara wow dhara nice name myself ranvir she is sanju my best buddy she is ammu ,and she appu our new members like u but now my freinds😃😳nice to meet u all so i am selected haan you are congrates thanku waise tusi punjabi ho ,no nahin ohh tuhanu punjabi samajh aandi hai haan thodi thodi aur bolni bilkul nahin koi nahin hum sab seekhade kyun ammu haan appu 😉chale ab appu ke school haan tum bhi chalo dhara humein final lead wahi mile shayad okay waise appu school hai kahan hmm maal road se first cut andar jaake hai dance school mera to chale phir haan chalo

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Nritya aangan

Chalo baccho sab line main khade ho okay mam (its Ragini appu teacher her face is towards the children so no one can see her Ranvir sees her from behind )chalo baccho jaante ho hum naachte kyun hai kyunki ise humara Rab khush hota hai to sab pehle ankhen band karke apne apne Rab ko yaad karo (Ragini also close her eyes and sees mithoo )she is smiling 😊didi aap khush kyun ho rahi hai isliye kyunki main jiske liye naachti hoon woh khush hota hai jab main naachti hoon chalo ab sab bheto aur jo mere saath kal compettion main jaanewale hai agey aajao hum apni akhri rehersal karenge theek hai baccho ustad ji aap tyaar hai na ladke ke lines aap gayenge aur ladki ke main aur chorus bacche dekhiye ustad ji table ki thap aur taal na ruke arey beetiya ye tere jeewan ka sabse bada pal hai tapasya hai tere jeewan ki tu dekhna jab tak meri thap aur taal tere per bhi naachenge ashirwaad hai mera ji

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Appu hum yahan kyun khade hai woh ranvir jo teacher hai kal ke competiton ki rehersal karrahi hai to hum ruke arey yahan dekhega nahin kuch agey chaley sanju agey nahin jaasakte appu peechey se dekhlenge saamne nahin jaayenge chaley theek hai chalo phir par agey nahin jaayenge theek hai

Ragini is wearing (cream anar kali suit with gold border dupatta looking very beautiful )she close her eyes and says 'mithoo mere jeewan ka har naach ,har taal sirf tera hai aur aaj bhi tere liye hi bas aajao ab der mat karo intezar badta jaa raha hai (Der na hojaaye kahin der na hojaaye ,aaja we ke mera mann ghabraye der na hojaye kahin der na hojaye )http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=28m1u6cIPT0

While performing she is crying and seeing all past moments of her and mithoo and crying alot😭😭😭then suddenly in flashes she sees last night insident in snowfall with ranvir she still dancing aur uska haath vase pe lagjata hai aur vase toot jata hai still she is dancing and crying uske per se khoon araha hai cut pad gaya but still she is not stoping and while dancing she is also angry how just for a second she thought of ranvir and not mithoo at last she is about to fall Ranvir sees this and caught her in his arms everyone is shocked😲😲Ragini littel unconcious ranvir uske baal peeche karta hai and sees her ace she sees its Ragini jisse ye raat ko mila Ragini also sees him both looking at eachother bina palk jhapkaye suddenly Ragini behosh hojati hai 😲sab shocked hai to see this Ragini is in Ranvir arms 🤢🤢

Precap : Ranvir is trying to explain Ragini About Play😳

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