~!!*FF Maine Pyar Kiya *!!~RR~*CH 5,Pg 17 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
ohk so this one is pending..
chocochip..abhi i'll read it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
okie padhle jaldi se
i am waiting .........
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Posted: 15 years ago
preet di
sorry for late reply😳
Read all chapters and they r amazing😳👏Got to read something different after a long time. And ragini in ranvirs arms hayeee😍☺️
once again fantastic chapter👍🏼waiting for next one😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!
chocochip...whats dis??
u killed me di..
its the best chapter till date..aslso i liked the one when ragvir got covered in snow,,
but this one is fantastic...
Dhara welcome to the gang girl..lol..
di u r simply awesome...Woww..ragini is my teacher...oolalala..m loving it..

While performing she is crying and seeing all past moments of her and mithoo and crying alotthen suddenly in flashes she sees last night insident in snowfall with ranvir she still dancing aur uska haath vase pe lagjata hai aur vase toot jata hai still she is dancing and crying uske per se khoon araha hai cut pad gaya but still she is not stoping and while dancing she is also angry how just for a second she thought of ranvir and not mithoo at last she is about to fall Ranvir sees this and caught her in his arms everyone is shockedRagini littel unconcious ranvir uske baal peeche karta hai and sees her ace she sees its Ragini jisse ye raat ko mila Ragini also sees him both looking at eachother bina palk jhapkaye suddenly Ragini behosh hojati hai sab shocked hai to see this Ragini is in Ranvir arms

actually saying----->this is the best part...
aww my ragini faints..god her foot is bleeding....and yeah ..here comes her romeo...
di just can't wait anymore..pls update ASAP,,,
😍 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

First of all I m SORRY..... Maine aapka FF bahut pehle padh liya tha..but I had no time 2 comment..jab waqt mila toh SPA ki celebration mein hi reh gayi mai...SORRYYYYYYYYYY😃😃

Very sweet roamntic update dear. 👏👏👏.
I have tears in my eyes 😭😭😭. Thats called true love😳😳.
MITTHOO (parrot) scene was too cute. She is really adorable and fully dedicated to his love -life👏. U know PREET aise bahut kam loge hote hai dinuya mein joo itna sachchha pyaar karte hai.. 😊 Our RAGVIR is representing those real love making proud peoples😳👏⭐️.
And RAN's convo with BIITTO's pic....his mirchi ke pakode ki yaadeiin....his throught day experience convo...his emotions ...feelings...way of talking was raelly sensible & touchy....... After RAGVIR's true love (in BIDAAI)....this story is succesfully touching my heart😳😭.
SANJU is really best buddy...best friend of RAN...She is superb...👏👏
DHATAR's audition was too cool dear. A lady in short skirt and song is MERE KHAWAABO MEIN JO AAAYE...siuited her personality😉😳.
Finally ARN is going to take audition in RAGI's school. Best part was RAGI's dance....👏👏👏
Everything was there....😊 Love...(for MITTHHO)..sadness ...(MITTHO is not there).......Happinessss(bcoz dance is puja**worship** for her).......sadness (bcoz of RAN's aattachment).........Bekaraari...(to meet his love).......everything was there my sweetheart...Awsome work...good selection of word 2 express RAGI's emotion......I can imagine it😍 Her feet was bleeding😭😭 she was in pain😭
It is BEST PART of ur FF 👍🏼 She fall in RAN's arm and everyone is shocking to see it.😆😳
And preview is awsome...RAN is trying to make RAGI understand for show😉. I will wait for upadte😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanku priya for liking and for anylaysing love your anylasis everytime
posting next part very soon
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CHAPTER 5

Nritiya aangan
Koi batayega ki rest room kahan hai ye sab aise shocked khade rahoge dekh nahin rahe ye behosh hogayi hai ustaad ji aap hi bataiye .beta woh seediya hai upar rest room hai (Ragini still in Ranvir arms )woh use upar le jaa raha hai and he tell everyone to stay there only Sanju tum log yahi raho neeche bacho ke paas okie ,theek hai Ranvir ,while going Ranvir kept looking at Ragini face and curious that why she dont stop herself from dancing 😳Ranvir use room min lake bed pe letata hai and sees that her both foot are injured badly and blood is not stoping he calls doctor then he cuts his mufler in two peices aur uske chot pe bandhdeta hai and seeing all this he is crying also and thinking 😭koi aisa bhi karta hai rab ji itna pyaar itni shidat jaise dance nahin ibadat kar raha ho aise log hote hai kya aaj bhi itna dukh aise logon hi kyun milta hai 2 baar mila hoo bas par lagta hai sadiyon se jaanta hoon haar baar miltey hi lagta hai pal ruk jaaye waqt teher jaaye 😭aap hi batayiye koi apne liye ya phir kisi ke liye itna karta hai ke apni chot na dikhe aise logon ko kya kahe tera noor ya tera farishta 😳Doctor comes ayiye doctor uncle Ranvir ye kaun hai ye hmmm ek dost accha par ye itni kaise lagi woh aapko baat main samjhaonga pehle aap zara dekhli jiye chot gehri to nahin hai ,Ranvir bahut bada cut hai dono per pe awww ab main pati kardeta hoon but inka bahut khyaal rakhna padega okie doctor
Ragini abhi bhi behosh hai Ranvir is sitting beside her suddenly wind blows and he opens a window Rain is falling he imagines bitto standing a playing in Rain 😳he calls her but she goes he close his eyes and a song start in backgrround (zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam ek mulaqat zarori hai sanam )watching all the flash backs of her and Ragini in unconcious mode also seeing all flash backs of his she is crying watching all this and suddenly gets up from unconciousness🤢😭
aaaaaaa Tum uth gayi theek ho ab haan main theek hoo ye lo pani aur tumhari dawai thanku kisliye ,meri jaan bachane ke liye ek baar phir leti rahi tum chal nahin sakti abhi mujhe jana hai haan chali jana par abhi nahin hmmmm mujhe abhi jana hai ,kaha jana hai woh nahin bata sakti par jana hai tum pagal ho kabhi kanch pe nachti hoo kabhi pahadiyon pe ghoomti hoo ,tumhe kya usse tum hote kaun ho ye sab kehne wale ,ahhhh sorry very sorry main hoo kaun right no one but abhi aap ko chot lagi hai aur ye meri responsibility hai ki main apko theek thak apke ghar pahunchado okie 😊
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Gharonda (Ragini house)
Ragini beta kaha hai tu Ragini lagta hai ayi nahin abhi tak ,kyun mithoo ji kaha hai apki Ragini kuch bolde waise aaj tu bada khush lag raha hai jaise tu kabhi nahin khush dikha jaise koi mannat pori horahi ho teri ,kash meri pori hojye aur woh dono sach main miljaye bhagwaan kabhi itna bura nahin kar sakta kisi ke saath aur ye dono to waise bhi 2 shreer par atma ek hi hai unki aatma unhe lauta de aaj hawayein aisi hai jaise kahin 2 dil milte hai ya jab do hanson ke joda miley bas mere bhi jode ko milade ekdusrey se bas ek baar unki saanse laut ayengi warna meri beti jee to rahi hai par zinda nahin hai use phir se zinda karde bas ek baar 😭
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Nritiya aangan
Sanju yaar Ranvir abhi tak nahin aya ,woh tabhi ayega jab usse hosh ayega main jaanti hoo use woh kisika dard nahin dekh sakta aisa hi hai shuru se apna dard kam nahin hota par auron ka zaror kam karta hai ,appu waise tumhari ye teacher dance bahut accha karti hai aise jaise koi bhagwaan ki ibadat ya puja karta ho bilkul waise haan sanju mujhe bhi aisa hi laga right dhara appu bol na haan guys dance unke liye unka Rab hai woh humesha kehti hai nacho to uske liye jiske liye tumhari saanse ho wow kitna pyara thought hai 😃bachho ice cream khaoge ,haan didi good chal ammu hum dono insabke liye ice cream late hai tab tak dhara aur appu inhe sambhalenge aur itnme main Ranvir bhi aajayega haan chalo 😊
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Ragvir scene
ab tum yahan betho aur dawai lo ab mujhe yeh batao ki tum aise kyun nachi i mean tumhe pata nahin laga ki tum kanch pe dance kar rahi hoo woh main hmmmm actualy main naach nahin rahi thi woh to bas aise hi tum yahan kya karne aye the hum pri team ayi thi main,sanju,ammu,dhara and tumhari ex student appu ohh but aap log yaha woh humara jo play hai uske liye lead dhondne aur woh humein milgayi milgayi kaun tum 😲come again tum 😲main aur play main lead great nice joke no yaar its not a joke actually hum yaha lead dhodne aye the but jab tumhara dance dekha to laga ki ye character bas tum hi kar sakti hoo ye ek aisa character hai jiske liye uska pyar rab hai aur woh har kam use dhyaan main rakh karti hai aur tumhara dance bhi bilkul waisa hai dekhiye main apki baat samjh rahi hoon but i need time to think yaa sure no problem aap sham tak batadijiye nahin shaam nahin kyun woh kal tak chalega okie ab hum neeche chale but aap jayengi kaise manage karlongi
Ragini gets up and start walking but cant and fall down Ranvir holds her bola tha na nahin chal paogi ab mujhe pakad lo Ragini holding Ranvir and Ranvir holds her from waist and picks her up in his arms🤢🤢Both looking at eachother and coming down from stairs wind blows Ragini ka dupatta ud ke Ranvir ke face pe aajata hai (background main song playes the theme music of chandni )😳😳Ragini from one hand dupatta hatati hai and both looking at eachother everyone sees they are coming Sanju ammu also back they give icecream to childrens and Ragini still in his arms he introduces them and says sanju car keys de jaldi se inhe bhetake inke ghar chodna hai ohhhh le teri ice cream waise hum tum dono ki laye hai de phir ice cream ko kabhi mana nahin karta na to naa tu karti hai nahin phir hum same to same hai isliye Ragini is smiling to see their cute talk😊ammu ,appu ,dhara tum sab seedha rehersal pohoch jana sanju ke saath okie main inhe chod ke ata hoo okie jaiye mr ranvir hum pahuch jaayenge okie 😃
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Ranvir Ragini ko car ki front seat pe bheteta hai aur puts belt around her ,and he also seats chalo chale ye lo tumhari ice cream thanku do you mind if i play a song ,ye chori ki car hai ,nahin tu phir ye kahin se utha ke laye ho nahin its mine maine kharidi hai to phir pooch kyun rahe ho jo marzi lagao main aise hi pooch raha tha awww chalalo ice cream khalo nahin to melt hojayegi pata hai shimla ke aise mausam main ice cream se accha kuch nahin hai i know 😆heeeee why are u laughing tumhari nose pe ice cream laggayi hai ohh shit let me see wait u drive main hata deti hoo Ragini with her dupatta cleans it thanku so much waise jab se hum miley hai ekdusre ko thanku aur sorry hi bol rahe hai yaa right😉Ranvir yahan se right okie ,so apna song lagalo okie its my fav song you know humare next play maine pyar kiya main jo leads hai unke ek act main ye song bhi hai its beautiful redention (pehla pehla pyar hai pehli pehli baar hai jaanke bhi anjana kaisa mera yaar hai )arey what coincidence its my all time fav song 😳you know hmmm ye song jo hai woh mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai mere bhi wow Ranvir remembers that Bitto adores the song and they always danced to this song and Ragini remember mithoo while performing the song in school he forget the steps but bitto handel it and while remembering Ragini laughs Ranvir sees this and says why are u laughing woh kya hai na jab dil ko koi baat ,ya koi pal choo jaye aur woh yaad aye to woh hasata hai aur rulata bhi hai to tumhe hasa raha hai koi pal 😊ruko mera ghar aagaya ,ayo andar ana to padega aap chal jo nahin sakti ohh main bhool gayi thi ,dard bhool jaye insaan tab woh yaad nahin ata par mehsos hota hai Ranvir again holds her in his arms ☺️❤️thanku again aap bel bajayengi ya knock karengi taki koi aye aur gate khole yaa sure Ragini knock on door and Prakashchand comes out and sees Ragvir 😲
Precap : Ragvir on terrace of Ragini house ,baki gang with PC
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Posted: 15 years ago
so here comes ma analysis..lol...
di its was so cute..marvelous..
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....ranvir utilized his muffler,,gr8 😳 😉 ..
and moreover held her in his arms when she wasn't able to walk..
chocochip..maar daala 🤢 👏..
whoa!!dekha meri teacher ki thought kitni achi hai..lol..
ranvir helps her to sit in da car...ooooolalalala... 😆 🤪..
waise loved the ice cream part...cho chweet..

so ragini has been selected by ranvir????😕
and waah...ranvir lifted ragini to her main dorr.uar se pc opened da door 😲 🤣
now its gonna be great fun....
m sure ranvir will do da pataoing stuff wid pc..lol...
di loved it....
and waiting for da next chapter...the precap is awesome... 👏 😳
Muaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!hugs for u !!
Edited by KinchuKiPari - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow preet gr8 wrk yaar.......maine pyaar kiya is my fav movie n seriously kinny always remind me of SALMAN KHAN...dey both r quite alike.....dere innocence,sweetness,romance,,,,almost everytnng is same.....
Edited by naneta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

this is for having my fav songs, ek toh ek mulawat zaroori hai sanam aur doosra pehla pehla pyaar hai 😳
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaye,,,such cute scene yaar loved the car scene the BEST
and me rand Ranvir toh mashallah srsly our friendship rocks 😃
loved it yaar...!
aur sach mein thand mein ice cream khaane ka maza hi kuch aur hai...lol...bilkul sahi hai..
love
oho precap seems interesting ragvir on terrace aur hum sab pc ke saath hmmmm
updt soon 😃
Edited by SanKi4eva - 15 years ago

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