~*Akele Hum Akele Tum*~RagVir FF'Chapter8 (pg 21) - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update.. luved da naughty ranvir.. do continue soon.
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Tumne Pukara aur ham chale aaye deer se hi sahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😃😃😃😃😃😃 So sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry 4 late comment. hope u will not punish me 😃. Bcoz I know u r my sweetest friend.
So now let me start my lectureeeeeeeeeeee.
~**~ Chapter 6 ~*~
SANHU it is sweet like u😳.
Kya bat hai SANHU apne haatho se khana banaayegi..............😳
But SANJU is also funny. She was teasing SANHU😆😆😆.
But your answer was gr888888888888. That RANVIR ko bataane ki jarurat nahi hai warna aur bhi chad jaayega 🤣🤣🤣.
RAGVIR ki shopping scene. OMG....gr88 yaar. Kya fighting hai. Unhe toh bas jhagadne ka maukaa chahiye 😉😆. BVut RANVIR's saree selection was gr888 yaar. Tea-pink saree with silver work. I think ye aapka magic hai.....kya akre PYAAR ka asar hi hota hai aisa 😳😳
I loved when RAN said bas thodi der baad sirf HAM-TUM.....Aur TUM-HAM
But u r really worried for RAN...after all itni late jo ho rahi thi waapas aane mein. But SANJU...uff she can give heartattack to us.......kaam ke bahaane kahi dusari ladki ke saath ghoomne toh nahi chala gayaaaaaRunning In Field😆
Nice update dear. I loveddddddd it.
~*~ Chapter 7 ~*~
Again wonder updatee like my sweetheart SANHU..........
Very sweet dear. KAUSHI ji is too much worried. but our RAGVIR is gr88888888. SAhi salaamat RAGI ko ghar tak pahucha diyaaa. But why RAGI shouted. Sach mein kya raasta kharaab tha????
And Ya fountain scene was my fav. ...........I know RANVIR ko SANHU ki yaad aa gayi thiLove You.
But SANJU scene was again funny. Eating schicken pakora and RAN clicked her pic from behindddd.
But RAN is also too muchhh. Kya jarurat thi jhooth kehne ki main 2 days baad aaunga. Poor SANHU ak face kaise utar gayaa tha. So sad....... But not bad. Surprise toh kiya na RAN ne aakar. i like it daer. And ye dress change hone ka kya matlab hai??? RAGI ka lehenga SANHU ke paas aur SANHU ki sareee RAGI ke paas........😉😉 (I think something is hidden)😉
Very nice update......
But aapne precap fir nahi dikhaya. Again same precap..........🥱😃.
But I loved your update. keep updating.👍🏼
Loved it. Gr888 upadtye dear.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Hats off 4 commendable job
Keep posting😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
sanhu i edited my pst pdhlena 😃
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woww loved it , can't wait for d next
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanhu so sorryyyyyyyyy main late ho i know bahut late tu gussa to nhin hai but dekh sare ff aur vms main se sabse pehle tere pe hi comment maar rhi hoo heeeeeeeee
awwwwwww awesome yaar kya mast chapter tha ab ranvir ki naughtiness ff main hi bach hai love uuuuuu
Sanvir are rocking yaar
wow maza aagaya sanhu
muhaaaaaaaaa
again sorry
waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankyou so so sooo much guyz
Preet dun b sorry hon love u

Will update da nxt chap in a day hopefully
Pankhi u always make me blush ☢️ 🤣
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Chapter 8

Maaa...Ragini shouts excitedly nd hugs Kaushi.Beta tu theek to haina?aur kiske saath aayi hai?kaun tha woh ajnabee?hey bhagwan main kitna pareshan horai thi tujhe pata hai! Arey Kaushalia ji bachi lambe safar se aayi hai saans to lene dijie says PC.Thank you bauji main fresh hoke aati hun Raging gives a kiss to Kaushi ne runs upstairs.Arey araam se says Kaushi.

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Sanhuu itna bhi kya ghusa hai yar jo darwaza bhi nahi kholrai hai?Sub theek to hai?Ranvir se kuch baat hogai kya asks Sanjana who is standing outside SanVir's bedroom while Ranvir is in the Study which is next to their room.(lisning secretely 😉 n lukin so cute)
Ranvir ke aaney ka time hogaya hai aur tu ander chupi vi hai?Says Sanju in nautanki style🤣 Saniha opens the door looks quite angry but a bit upset at the same time.Aaja ander says Saniha nd she continue's hanging those cloths back in Cupboard.Sanjana takes a sip of her tea nd says Meri jaan kya hua hai?Mun pe 12 kyun baje hain?Ranvir ne...Here Saniha interrupts Ranvir ka naam na le Saniha says angrily.Kya?am I dreaming Sanhu tu to college ke dino se hi is naam ke ilawa koi naam sunna pasand nai kerti hai bol bol says Sanju who slightly hits Saniha's shoulder.Argghhh Sanju woh college k din they ab aisa kuch nai hai..ager Ranvir ko ye lagta hai ke woh mere saath ho na ho main bus uske baarey mein sochti hun to hes wrong says Sanhu with attitude.Sanjana is shocked😲 n Cnfused at da same time.Yeh Sanhu theek to hai wonders Sanju.Sanju chal lets get ready aaj raat hum club chalte hain umm main kaunsa Skirt pehnun?how bout this one?She said pointing over a beautiful Pink n black mini dress.
Ye kis khushi mein tu Club jaana plan karai hai asks Sanjana confusingly.Ranvir is lisning everything nd he is 😡 Saniha ko to Night Clubs jaane ka shauk nai hai aur woh bhi mere bina wonders Ranvir whose expression is
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Sanhu tera Ranvir se koi jhagda hua kya?asks Sanju.Nahi to woh actually Ranvir aaj naii aaney waala haina to maine na aaj raat night club ka plan kiya hai...says Sanhu. Night Club?Sanju is all confused.Suspence khatam ker Sanhu.Ok na to sun Meri zindag
i mein koi aur aagaya hai umm nd Saniha is all blushy now.Kyaaa? Sanhu tu pagal to nahi hogai hai aagey ek word na boliyo says Sanju.Nahi tujhe sunna hoga no one can ignore Ayaan.Sanju is about to say something but Ranvir enters.

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Suniye ji Ragini kiske saath aayi hai aur kaise ye sub hua aapne mujhe poochne bhi nahi dya says Kaushaliya ji to PC.Kyunke main us se sub kuch pehle hi sunchuka hoon ji,Ragini batarai thi ke koi bohat hi achey aur sanskaari ghar ka ladka tha jisne Ragini ki madad ki.Acha ji per phir bhi aaj ke zamaane mein to dekh bhaal ke chalna chaiyeh says Kaushi.Bhagwan unka bhala kare jisne meri beti ki madad kare..Main zara chaaye naashta lagadeti hun aap bhi mun hbth dholein .

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Ranvir entered "Kaun hai yeh"tell me?Ranvir is real Angry plus worried now. Ranvir aap yahan?Saniha says Surprisingly.Ranvir aapne to bola ke aap kal aaoge.Mera jawaab do kaun Ayaan?TELL ME!Ranvir is real Serious now while Saniha is just Silent.Ranvir woh main batana hi tha tht Suddenly theres a call on Saniha's phone.Saniha is about to pick up the Phone but Ranvir picks up
Hello! says Ranvir.
Hie can I speak to Mrs Ranvir?
Saniha is trying to talk 2 Sanju but is unable too.
Hie this is her Husband says Ranvir.
What?Thankyou thankyou so much ji we'll see you soon nd Thanks.
Kya hua Ranvir says Sanjana?Ranvir is only staring Saniha nd moving closer to her.Saniha is looking down blushingly nd moving away.SanVir are real close!Kisne kaha Ayaan aaraha hai Ahaana bhi to aasakti haina Whispers Ranvir.Ye Khus Pus nd Open Romance ka suspence koi kholega ya main baahar jaaun shouts Sanju🤣.Saniha pushes Ranvir and Smiles.Ahem ahem main batata hoon Sanju meri Aahana aaney waali hai ...
Nai Sanju Ayaan aaney waala hai says Saniha
Nai bacha ladki hogi says Ranvir
Nai Ranvir ladka hoga says Sanhu
And SanVir begans to fight 🤣
What what what?Sanhuuu tu omg I dont believe this main maasi banungi Sonam aur Raj ki.
Sonam and Raj??Do bachey shouts SanVir
Haan baba twins honge aur main unke Sexy Sexy Maasi n Khaala says Sanjana.All three laughs out loud together.Sanjana gives a tight hug to Saniha.Kya baat hai to yeh chupaaya jaaraha tha humse says Sanju acha main ye good news subko sunaake aayi nd aaj raat hum sach mein club jaarahe hain okay guyz.Sanjana turns to face Ranvir nd says Congratulations honey waale daddy and Ranvir winks n Sanjana leaves.


Saniha follows Sanjana but Ranvir does'nt let her go.Congratulations Bacha itni bari baat mujhse chupaayi kyun kyun ask Ranvir.Maine chupaaya ?main aapse kab chupaaya aapne mujhse jhoot kaha ke aap aaj nahi aaoge main to kabse wait karai thi ke jab aap aayenge tab hi aapko surprise dungi but aapne to mujh per shak kiya na?bolo kiya na?Says Saniha. Nahi jaan I trust you but tum aise Sanju se kehrai thi ke meri to jaan hi nikalgai says Ranvir.Saniha laughs nd says acha ager sach mein koi hota to?to kya karte?Mujhe jaan se maardetey says Saniha nd laughs.Nahi apni jaan ko koi kaise khatam kersakta hai main Khud ko maarleta Ranvir says while looking into her eyes.Saniha moves away main towel leke aati hun aap nahaalo.Bacha I am serious main apni jaan dedeta aur tumhe tumhaari khushi.
Saniha is irritated Stop it Ranvir kya jaan dene lene ki baat karae ho tmse to mazaak bhi nai kerna chaiyeh.Jaan I was jokin suno na arey main bhi to mazaak hi karaha huna Suno to

Nahi mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai jaao Says Saniha by lowering her tone.Lagta hai aise nai maanogi..He lifted her in his arms ,carried her into their bed & laid her down and switched off the lights.:$

Ye Sanhu ki bachi phone kyun nai uthaarai hai usey pata hai ke aaj raat humne jaana hai aur tab bhi arghhh.Sanju darling woh Ranvir aagaya hai maybe tabhi says Suku nd winks.Haan right but time dekh yar 8 bajgae hain says Sanju nd here she gets a call its Sanhu!Sanhu kahan hai aaj tm logo ne aana haina asks Sanju.Han Sanju ofcorse I wana meet Karan ..Ranvir shower lene gaya hai hum bus 1 ghante mein milte hain ok.See ya


Ranvir hurry up jaldi baaher aao muje bhi ready hona hai.2 more minutes jaan shouts Ranvir.Ye big bazaar ka shopping bag hmmm ye kiske liye says Saniha.Ranvir comes out Jaan usey kholke to dekhey sumthn Special 4 u he said while dryin his hair wid towel n only in jeans.Saniha opens it Excitedly Itna bhaari lehenga?mere liye Asked Saniha.Ranvir turns bak n says Damn!Ranvir wow w what a beautiful lehenga ye lehenga liya hai mere liye?woh bhi itna heavy my gosh says Saniha.Ranvir is standing tensed.Kya hua sub theek to hai?asks Saniha.Ye lehenga to unka hai han Ragini ka unhei hi to maine lift di thi shit maine tmaare lie itni khoobsurat saari li thi.Ranvir ye lehenga unhone kitne pyar se liya hoga na.Chalo call her aur ye unhe deke aao forun says Saniha.What?main deke kahan se aaaun maine koi number thori lia tha n ghar bhi nae dekha kyunke road kharab hone ki waja se main ghar tak na jaapaaya says Ranvir.Gosh ab kya hoga mujhe bohat bura lagra hai says Saniha nd she gets a call Ranvis picks up Sanjana han han hum nikalre hain han okay.Jaan tmhaari dost mujhper cheek rahi thi says Ranvir.
Ok na main ready hoke aati hoon.

Preview:Dhara woh chor thaaa..Mera lehenga gaya.Nahiiiii
Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guyz so Sorry forgot to add one paragraph n m nt able 2 edidt it nw owain so m posting it here of
This comes b4 SanVir's scene [B][/B]

Dhara jaldi ghar aaja yaar jab tu aayegi tab hi main apna dress kholungi
Dhara:awww Ragini main yahaan boutique se nikalti hi seedha tere han aaungi..m so dying to see the lehenga.
Ragini:tu jaldi se aaja bus
Dhara:btw date decide hogai?
Ragini:umm nahi but aunty aaj batayengi.
Dhara:ok ok theek hai see u in an hour!bye
Ragini:chal bye


Han baba hum aaj raat pakka milenge ab main rakhun says Sanjana.No babes hum mil to rahe hain but phone na rakho says Karan romanticly.Acha Sanju suno to sahi tumne apney best friends ko mere baare mein bataya bhi k nahi?
Han Karan bataya hai Sanhu knows about you aur Ranvir bhi aagaya hai ab main rakhrahi hun Karan Bye mujse 1 ghante mein mall mein milo bye Love you!


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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
yeh kya kiya tune 🤣
purey armaan nikaal rahi hai tu toh [=))=
tauba tauba ranvir nahi aa raha yeh jaanakar itna gussa..?
aur club jaane ki baat aagayi..oye hooye..ayaan ahaana nahi honge...!
raj aur sonam bhi nahi honge..
shabnam aur sneha honge budhu! he loves them names and u knoe that 😆
aur acha bachu....main tera club ein wait kar rahi oon aur tu idhar ranvir ke saath lagi padi hai..oh god!!! no timings these days...🤣
chal chal ab jaldi aaja karan aur main wait kar rahe hai 😳
oh god!!!! karle karle jo karna hai karle bachu.....!
aur yeh marne maraane waali baat mat karo yaar...tension mujhe bhi hoti hai 😔
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arrey ranvir ki wink ka likhna bhul gayi..
aaye haaye yaar aisi winks mjhe pata hai tu kyun de rahi hai yaar...u know they kill me...kinshuk's winks like kill me....!
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaye uar tune usse aankh marwaadi..oh god running around like crazy....🤣

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