FF: Pyar to hoga Salekh and Ragvir Pt 18 pg 26 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Excellent Savni, Yaar fab likka hai.👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome chap yaar can't wait for the next chap...post soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for liking it everyone ...
I will uptade soon ..
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Pyar to hoga part 9

scene 1:

Prithvi think that he has seen the person before also. Prithvi is going to that man when Damini takes his hand. Prithvi don't focus on Damini.
Damini: Prithvi ...
Prithvi: hmm..
Damini: yaar yeh kya baat hui?
Prithvi: Humne baat kabh ki?
Damini leaves from there and goes to close the outdoor and Prithvi is still watching the person. Damini is closing the door when the man capture some pic of her without her knowing about it. Prithvi goes mad and goes to that man and that man runs from there.

Scene 2:

Ragini is mad at Ranvir, she is blaming him for not dancing well.
Ragini: Ranvir , tum kya jano dance ke bare mein? huh?
Ranvir: Sorry nah?
Ragini: Really ? Chalo is baar maaf kar diya...

Scene 3:

Time is 01.00

Everyone have gone now and Sadhna,Ragini and Damini is tired. Sadhna and Damini goes to check if Mamaji have sleep or not. They goes inside and Mamaji is sleeping. Both of them comes out and are so tired so they don't know where they are sleeping. Sadhna sleeps at the door. Ragini sleeps at the downstairs. Damini is sleeping at the terrece. Prithvi , Alekh and Ranvir is cleaning the hole house because of Alekh think that the girls have done very much job. Prithvi and Ranvir are so mad at him.
Prithvi: Yaar hum to na ghar ke rahe na ghat ke..
Ranvir: Oyee.. Hum to kahi ke nahi rahe..
Alekh: Chalo guys jaldi karo..
Prithvi: Yes boss..

Time 04.00
The boys are now finished with the work and all 3 are tired .. Ranvir is going up stair and he finds Ragini he takes her up in her arm and leaves her in Sadhnas room , but he is so tired so he sleeped also there. Alekh goes up stairs and find Sadhna sleeping outside of Mamaji's door , he takes her to Ranvir's room and he also sleep beside her.. Prithvi want to take some cold air so he goes to the terrece and he find Damini sleeping there. He get's scared of thinking that it is a ghost with long hair flying in the air. Prithvi goes to her and sleep on the ground.

The mysteri man clicks one photo of each jodi and goes to a photo shop and changes some thinks in the photo. He makes the couple to close.

Scene 4:

Mamaji is looking for everyone. He goes to Sadhna's room and find Ragini and Ranvir sleeping. Mamaji thinks that they look cute .. ( Ragini is on the bed and Ranvir is holding her hand and sleeping on the ground). Mamaji leaves them. He goes to Ranvir's room and find Sadhna and Alekh same as Ragvir and he don't wake them up. Mamaji is looking for Prida but can't find them. Mamaji leaves for office.

Scene 5:

Ragini wakes up and look at Ranvir and screams.. Ranvir wakes up and look at Ragini.
Ranvir: Kya hua?
Ragini: Ohh.. Tum te?
Ranvir: What do u mean?
Ragini: No tought that it was some baba u know..
Ranvir: haha ...

Scene 6: Alekh wakes up and look at Sadhna... He keeps looking at her and she wakes up and get scared..
Sadhna: Tum kya kar rehe ho? Aur mujhe goorna bandh karo.
Alekh: Oh sorry , did u get scared?
Sadhna: Yees..

Scene 7:

Ragvir and Salekh comes out of the door and meet at the hall, they all 4 are looking Prida to come but they dont come.. After 2 hours all get scared for them and they start looking for them.. No one can find them..

Terrece:
Damini falls down on the ground and sleeps there all night beside Prithvi..
Damini is freezing and Prithvi hugs her ( both are sleeping). Prithvi and Damini wakes up same time and look at each other and get mad.
Prithvi: Yeh kya kar rehi ho tum? Mera baladkar?
Damini: =O!! What =O! Yeh to meri line hone chai hai..
Prithvi: Oye.. listen I was just friendly to you nothing more .. Now I get what kind of girl u are.
Damini: You listen.. :@
Prithvi: I can't listen..
Damini: Really why?
Prithvi: You made me deaf...
Damini: Ohh shut upppppp!!!!

Everyone hears Damini's voice and runs to the terrece.. All are shocked to see Prithvi and Damini fighting.. Everyone is trying to make them stop. They both stop fighting.

Sadhna: Damini say sorry..
Damini: I didn't do anything..

Alekh: Prithvi say sorry
Prithvi: It wasn't my fault..

Damini: Really ? Not your fault?
Ragini: What have happend?
Damini: Really? Your sweet little brother said that I was going to rape him..
Prithvi: Lier... Oh my god .. How much do you lie?
Damini: WHat ? I'm lieing?
Prithvi: Look mere bheno aur bhaio she is blaming me for raping her..
Everyone takes Prithvi's side and Damini get emotional and leaves ..
Prithvi:* thinks* I have to say sorry* Guys i'm back soon..

Scene 8:

Damini goes out of the house and the mysteri man stops her.. Prithvi runs after her but stop to see her with the man.
Damini: I'm sorry
Man: No , It's ok ..
Damini: Why are u hiding your face?
Man: No it's nothing..
Damini: Sorry but i'm in hurry..
Prithvi runs after her but stops beside the man..
The mysteri man is angry for Damini breaks his camera. Phritvi ask if he could fix anything , the mysteri man gives his camera to him and Prithvi is fixing it and Prithvi sees some pic and looks at the man and the man takes the camera and runs away from him.. Prithvi runs also after him and can't find him.

Prithvi: WHo the hell is that man.

Scene 9:
Mamaji's phone calls and it is the mysteri man..
Mamaji: Hello kaun?
Man: Bhol gaya main kaun ho?
Mamaji: Tum? Kya chai hai tumhe?
Man: You know .. as always and always meri..
Mamaji: She is nothing to you ..
Man: Do u want me to tell her the hole truth?
Mamaji: Before that I will kill u..
Man: What happend if I kill u before..
Mamaji: You can't do anything..
Man: I can do anything for Damini..
Damini opens the office door and Mamaji is shocked ..

Who is this mysteriman? And what do he want from Damini?

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
@part 8-

ah savni......dat was a fab 1.....
prida.......dey r always de best.....sooo romantic...and a dance well dat was fab...

oh savni well dont mind me not commenting on de bidaai couples...actually i dont know abt bidaai........sry

Edited by aparajhita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
@part 9-

dat was a brilliant 1.....and lolll baladkar....well dat was sooooo sweet
prida r de best.....and u made dem look even more hot

waiting 4 ur update......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
I don't mind if u don't watch bidaai, aparajhita I mind if u don't read my ff .. I have put prida on it because of u all like prida and i'm a prida varni and Savni faan .. .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
awesome yaar..its getting exciting!! can't wait for more post soon....
Edited by amina53 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Savni,
Very nice ...really liked it..
Part 8....Prida dance...& PriDa won...😃.
Part 9 ....trying to rape😆 ohh yes so like PriDa fights which can go to any length.
Thank you so much for including Prida in this FF.
Khushi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Hope u all like it .. Please don't forget to comment

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