FF: Pyar to hoga Salekh and Ragvir Pt 18 pg 26 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Yaar SaVni....its awsommmmeeeee........I am really luving this forsome and the new entries Prida..!!!....Very Gooodd!
I am very much xcited about the mystery man and his connection with Mamaji and Damini....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Pyar to hoga part 10:

Scene 1:

Damini open the door to the cabin and Mamaji get scared. Damini comes in and ask some money for the collage fees and the man on the phone start talking. Mamaji takes the phone and the man says that give so much money she want or he will tell her the truth. Mamaji give her money and she leave from there. And Mamaji is worried.

Scene 2:

Damini goes to the school and it is a long line to the paper line. Prithvi get s 2 paper and gives on to Damini. Damini gets happy to see that paper and look up and gets angry for it is Prithvi. She don't take the paper and Prithvi takes her hand and give the paper and leaves from there. Damini fills the paper and Prithvi come to her:
Prithvi: Damini
Damini: What is it?
Prithvi: I want to say sorry..
Damini: Are u sure? because I don't thnk so..
Prithvi: Have you filled the paper
Damini starts laughing
Prithvi: What happend?
Damini: No one can be angry on u for a long time..
Prithvi: That's me .. Here give I can inform the papers.
Damini gives her paper and Prithvi informs it.. Both goes to a coffee shop.

Scene 3:
Ragvir and Salekh goes also for the coffee house. Ragvir and Salekh comes to the coffee shop and all are shocked to see Damini and Prithvi having coffee. Ranvir and Alekh are totally suprised..
Ranvir: Wah Wah..
Alekh: Kya hua?
Ranvir: Yeh Rajvansh to bohot teez nikla
Alekh: Matlab?
Ranvir: Always is it Rajvansh who wants to start there track..
Alekh and Sadhna get's shy and Ranvir blinks to Ragini
Ragini: What do u mean?
Ranvir: Do u want me to say all things you are..
Ragini: you..

Scene 4:
Damini and Prithvi is having fun when Damini thinks that somebody else is also here.. She turn her head back and sees Salekh and Ragvir and she tells Prithvi a plan.
Ragvir and Salekh next to there table and all 4 are watching them.. Damini blinks to Prithvi and Prithvi holds her hand. All 4 are shocked.
Damini: Prithvi yeh kya kar rehe ho?
Prithvi: Damini , kisi ko kuch nehi pata chal raha ..
Ranvir get explode and goes to Prida and takes Prithvi's hand away from Damini.
Ranvir: Prithvi , stop it... You are crossing the limits..
Ragini gets angry and goes to Ranvir
Ragini: What about your sister? She is also guilty..
Prithvi: All 4 of u sit down here .. Why are we fighting..
All 4 sits down on same table..Ranvir is giving killer look to Prithvi. Damini says to Prithvi that they should tell them the hole truth.. Prithvi says ok..
Ranvir: Ok Prithvi you start..
Prithvi: Ranvir , I was going to propose her..
Damini: Whaat?
Sadhna: What? Are u serious?
Ragini: Prithvi have u lost it?
Ranvir: Oye.. what do u mean with lost it?
Ragini: I mean Damini and Prithvi , there is no matches..
Ranvir: Huh.. You are talking like if it is matches between Sadhna and Alekh..
Alekh: Huh Ranvir, you are talking like if it is matches between you and Ragini.
Ragini and Ranvir look at each other
Ragvir: Yucckkk!! Never ever
Ragini: Stop repeting my words...
Ranvir: Same to u then..
Prida get tensed and Prithvi says to her did she like his joke. Damini get angry and slaps him. Ragini and Ranvir both stops..
Damini: YOU HAVE CROSSED THE LIMITS.. I JUST BEG TO GOD THAT YOU AND ME DON'T COME IN TO SAME CLASSES..
Damini leaves. And the waiter comes to there table and says that there is 3 post to Prithvi Rajvansh , Alekh Rajvansh and Ranvir Sharma.

Scene 5:

Prithvi open his post first of all . He think it is his school paper. He opens it and gets shocked.. He put the all things back. Ranvir open his post also and he also put all things back and so does Alekh also. The boys are totally shocked. Ragini and Sadhna also leave for home. The 3 boys are looking at each other.. Prithvi takes his things out and lay them out on the table. Ranvir and Alekh gets shocked to see Prithvi and Damini's photo togheter. Prithvi looks at one pic .

Prithvi: Guys, this is something wrong in this pic..
Ranvir and Alekh look at it and can't see anything wrong
Ranvir: What is wrong ?
Prithvi: This pic is taking today.. And look at this one me and Damini was fighting on the terrece..
Ranvir & Alekh: We have also got that kind of pic..
Ranvir look at one pic and get freak out at Prithvi:
Ranvir: What the hell are u doing in this pic. That means that Damini was right. You was going to ra...
Prithvi: I have not done anything like that
Ranvir: Look at this pic..
Prithvi: Ohh shiiit..
Ranvir: What happend ?
Prithvi: I can never imagine my self being so close Damini , never ever
Prithvi takes Ranvir and Alekhs post and all put them on table..
All 3 of them start fighting for there sisters..
The waiter comes and says that there is a letter for Prithvi.
Prithvi: Are u a post man or a waiter?
Waiter: i'm both sir , and leaves..
Prithvi opens it and read it high:
Letter:
Dear Prithvi

Yeh to bas shoruat hai , age age dekho hota hai kya. Kabhi tumne socha to nehi tha ke tum Damini ke saath aisa kuch kar sakte ho. Kabhi socha hai ke tum aur Damini kyo India wapis ae ho. Sabse important baath. Apne Uncle Prakash Chand Sharma ko bacha lo ...
Mysteri man

Alekh , Prithvi and Ranvir are shocked.
Ranvir get's angry and Alekh and Prithvi calm him down.
Ranvir: Who this person is , he can't hide himself for a long time. Papa ko bohot aram se rehena hoga..
Prithvi: Guys , what does he mean that Damini ki India wapis..
Ranvir: I think this person want something from Damini.
Alekh: We have to look after her
Ranvir: I don't need to worry
Alekh: Why?
Ranvir: Prithvi is joining the same collage as her , he can look after her. Right Prithvi?
Prithvi: Hahaha!
Ranvir: What does that mean?
Prithvi: She have to forgive me first na
Ranvir: Oh.. Sorry dude . I can't help u in that .. She is impossiable
Prithvi: I will make it possiable.. And looks at all the pic

Scene 6:
Damini goes out from the caf and start crying. Sadhna and Ragini comes after her.
Sadhna takes her hand on Damini's shoulder and Damini start cry more..
Ragini and Sadhna make her stop crying. They all are about leave when Damini remember that she have forgot her bag inside. She goes inside and sees Prithvi is setting next to her bag. She goes and sees some pic is laying on the table.
Ranvir sees Damini and lays the photo up and down. She comes and look at Alekh and Ranvir she ignores Prithvi. Prithvi is also ignoring him. Damini leaves in anger and leaves her mobile.
Prithvi look at it and hold it.
All 3 leaves for home.

Scene 7:
Alekh , Ragini and Prithvi leaves for home.
Ragini: We haven't been at home for since 2 days ...
Alekh: Who have opened the door to our house?
All 3 look at the door. Prithvi and Ragini runs in to the house and sees Vasu and Indrajeet is sitting in the hall. Ragini runs to Indrajeet and hugs him. Vasu is shocked to see Prithvi her. Indrajeet look at Prithvi and is happy to have him back to India. Alekh comes and get shocked.
Alekh hugs Vasu and all sits down for eat dinner.
Vasu: So guys , how has your day been?
Indrajeet: Prithvi when did u come?
Prithvi: 3 days ago
Vasu: Ragini pass the sallad
Ragini passes some sallad when Vasu comes with some shocking news.
Vasu: Alekh , I have looked a girl for you , they are coming tomorrow for your rishta.
Alekh gets shocked. Ragini is happy and Indrajeet and Prithvi is shocked..

Will the rishta be done? Will Alekh tell his siblings about his feeling for Sadhna? What will happend to Damini? To know wait for next chapter.. (L) (K) (=
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
ww yar u r going superb sorry i m dam busy so replying late
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
once again thanks for putting prida on this FF
Edited by pridafan - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Very Nice one again......Mast Mast heyy!!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
dat was such a mysterious part👏

i m falling 4 ur ff more and more bc dis track.....its awsum!

wat is gonna happen wid damz???.....hmmm....de ques of de week😆

and wat damz slapped pri....wat 4 he was jst joking!!.....really awful!

brilliant work savni.....will wait 4 de update......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
awesome chap mind blowing...keep writing can't wait at all!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
The next part is on the way.. I have start working on it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
kool chapter yaar arre naya rishta noo sa togeder
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
thanks simran for liking it. I had worked hard.. And this is my first FF who have got so many chapters. verytime I started one FF I just used to drop it of in around chapter 4-5.. Because I tought that no know liked it ..

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