FF: Pyar to hoga Salekh and Ragvir Pt 18 pg 26 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Pyar to hoga: part 6
Sorry for not writing on a such long time.. Sorry everyone ..
scene 1
When she opens the door Ranvir was just looking at her. Ragini looks at him then on her self and wonder if something is wrong.. Ranvir goes to her and he goes closer and closer..
Ragini: Ranvir aap kya kar rehe hai ..
Ranvir goes closer to her and don't answer her question..
Ragini get tensed and scared and ranvir goes to close her..
Ragini: Stop it Ranvir..
Ranvir: hahahah .. darr ge? Itni jaldi .. Ragini Rajvansh I was just taking of the price .. Seems like u don't remeber to take it ..
Ragini: Stop .. You scared the heck out of my..
Ranvir: Really? do u have a heck?
Ragini leaves..
Scene 2:
Alekh follows Sadi ..
Alekh: Did u mind?
Sadhna: huh?'Mind?
Alekh: I mean i said my feeling for u
Sadhna: I don't know .. I need time
Alekh: Ok.. I want a answer after this party and leaves.
Sadhi turns back and try's to decied but her brain don't want to concertraint on that..
Scene 3:
Sadhna goes and meet Rangini outside.
Ragini: Sadi Ranvir gave me a dress I leaved it on your room .. Go change ..
Sadhna: Thanks
Ragini: The guest have come .. I'll go and recive them and leaves
Sadhna look at her and thinks * Yeh dono behen bhai to bhol ke chale jate hai *
Scene 4:
Ragini and Ranvir is reciving the guest.
Ranvir tries to say sorry but don't get so well with that..
Now every guest have come and Ragini close the door and Ranvir takes her hand
Ranvir: Ragini please listen na..
Ragini: stop it Ranvir .. What will people think?
Ranvir: Hehe .. Do u think that I really care about the people ?
Ragini: I don't think so..
Ranvir: I want to say Sorry .. For that what happend in Sadhnas room..
Ranvir takes his hand out of the pocket and he have a package full with bindi's and give one to Ragini:
Ranvir: U will look nice with one bindi too..
Scene 5
Sadhna changes and is looking for her bindis..
Sadhna get mad for not finding it.. And Ragini comes to her room..
Sadhna looks at her and sees a bindi..
Sadhna: Where did u get the bindi from?
Ragini: Ranvir gave me one..
Sadhna: Can u find him..
Ragini: He said to me that I should give it back to u .. and hand over the package..
Sadhna takes one and leaves with Ragini..
And someone is watching them..( But who)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
oh i have first time read this ff u shd have sent pm me before
awesome part
i used to watch bidaai.
can i request u one thing
plz introduce prida
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
ok leave my request i know it is hard to introduce them i m mad but awesome part i read all nice work keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
awesome yaar i loved it can't explain...and can't wait either post the next chap soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey kol chapter but yaar kaun hai woh hmm???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
hehe wait and watch who is that person..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Awesome Story! Waiting for next Part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for liking it fusion..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Pyar to hoga part 7

There is going to be 2 more entries .. please read them in 1st page.. to know who are who..

Scene 1 :

Sadhna and Ragini goes down and Alekh and Ranvir meet them..

Alekh ask Sadhna if she wants to dance with him and she says yes.

Ranvir is thinking about his sister Damini..

Ragini is looking at him and thinks that something is wrong with him..

Ragini: Ranvir kya hua?

Ranvir: Kuch nehi , Apni behen ko yaad kar raha ta..

Ragini: Sadhna?

Ranvir: No .. Damini.. she is younger then Sadhna.. actually she is my bua's daughter..

She lives in London..( Bua is dead)

Ragini: Really? My brother also live in brother..

Ranvir: You also have one more sibling?

Ragini: Yes.. Phritvi

Ranvir: Oh I see..

Ragini get's in mood of teasing Ranvir

Ragini: No .. you don't see

Ranvir: Ragini..

And both start running..

Scene 2:

Alekh and Sadhna is dancing and Alekh is waiting for her answer.

Alekh: To .. have u think ?

Sadhna: About what?

Alekh: My love...

Sadhna: Ohh .. that one..

Alekh: Did u mind?

Sadhna: I don't think so .. because of..

Alekh: Of...?
Scene 3:

Ragini and Ranvir is runing and Ranvir need to take a break so he goes to take a glass of water. And someone is holding Ranvir's eyes..

Damini: Bhai

Ranvir takes the hand down and turn back and look at Damini..

Ranvir: OMG... You are back?

(prakashchand , i call him mamaji ..)

Mamaji comes in and Sadhna runs to him and Ragini and Alekh stand next to each other..

Sadhna: Papa... I missed u alot..

Mamaji: Kaisi ho meri bachi?

Sadhna: Thik..

Damini: Mujh se nehi milo gi?

Sadhna: Papa .. Damini bi ae hai? Ohh I missed u ..

Damini: thiik hai .. don't overact..

Sadhna: Damini. hahah.. Papa can I take her away?

Sadhna goes to Ragini and Alekh and Ranvir..

Sadhna: Damini meet my friend Ragini

Ragini: Hi Damini..

Sadhna; And her brother Alekh

Alekh: Hi ..

Damini: Hi Ragini and Alekh.. Nice to meet u ..

Ragini: Sadhna we can take damini to the room for changing her clothes..

Alekh and Ranvir talks to mamaji..
Scene 4:

Damini , Sadhna and Ragini goes to Damini's room. They open the door and Damini got shocked.

Damini: Mera kamra..

Sadhna: Mujhe kya patha hai ke tum ae rehe ho..

Ragini: Yeh kamra kitne saal se bandh hai?

Sadhna: 6 months..

Damini: Ok chill guys.. Sadhna I can leave my bag in your room.

Sadhna: Ok ..

Scene 5:

Mamaji , Alekh and Ranvir are talking.

Mamaji: yeh party to bohot achi hai...

Ranvir: yes papa.. Sadhna ne sabh kuch plan kiya ta.. Aur Ragini ne bohot madat ki.

Mamaji: Ragini bohot achi larki hai..

Alekh: Ji Uncle ..

Mamaji: Ranvir wo deal hogi?

Ranvir: Oh papa.. Alekh se hoge deal

Mamaji: Matlab..?

Ranvir: Papa, yeh Alekh Rajvansh hai.

Mamaji: Acha.. =)

Scene 6:

Damini opens her bag and can't find a nice dress.

Ragini and Sadhna helps her to find but can't.

Scene 7:

Rajvansh house:

Prithvi comes back from London.

He goes inside home and looks at the door. It is locked.

He ask the wachman where Ragini and Alekh are?

He says that the are on a party.

Prithvi calls Ragini.

Scene 8:
Ragini's phone bells. She look at it and see Prithvi is calling..
She take the phone..
Ragini: Prithvi , kaise ho?
Prithvi: Where are u both ?
Ragini: We are on a party..you?
Prithvi: I'm in Agra , outside of my house

Ragini: Kya?

Sadhna and Damini looks at her but continues on there clothes.

Prithvi : Main kya karo ab?

Ragini: Wait main apni dost se poch ti ho agar tum yaha aa sakte ho?

Ragini*: Sadhan can my brother prithvi come to this party? he has come today from London so we have locked the door*?

Sadhna: Ye koi poch ne ki baath hai?

Ragini: Prithvi come.. Take the taxi and come

Prithvi: The adress..?

Ragini: I sms u.. bye

Ragini and Sadhna finds a dress for Damini and she goes for changing.

Somebody is taking there pic.

Scene 9:

Prithvi ask for taxi and leaves for Sharma house..

Prithvi reached there and goes out.. He is going inside the house when collide with the person who took there pic.

Prithvi goes down and takes his camera up.. He don't look at it..

He goes inside Sharma house and Alekh see Prithvi and is happy..

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Note:

If u want to know who Prithvi and Damini is you can read them in 1st page..

hope u liked it

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
awesome awesome awesome...who is this mystery person m dieing to know more about him..anyways very nice chap...post the next chap soon!!

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