||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#271

Aww...Sanju...that bit was cute n hilarious! Awaiting the next part of that story...😳

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#272

sanjuuuu this is lekha here sorry yaar I my old Id isa giving me problem and I had 2 make a new one pleash Pm me about your updts to this ID

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#273

Chapter 11
Saadhna comes in Ragini's room. Ragini excitedly rushes to Saadhna and says "Saadhna bata, jija ji ne kuch kaha? Pata hai kitni mushkil se maine apne aap ko jija ji bolne se roka 😆...sadhna bata na kya hua? Unhone bola ki woh tujhse pyaar karte hain?" "arrey bas bas, saans toh le... " Says sadhna. Ragini calms herself down and says "ab bata, kya baat huyi?" saadhna remembers aalekh proposing to her and says "unhone na mujhse kaha ki woh mujhse pyaar karte hai aur shaadi bhi karna chahte hain." Ragini gets excited and says "Phir kya hua? Tune kya jawaab diya?" Saadhna smiles and says "Phir...? CHOR CHOR" Ragini bites her tongue and says "Sorry" "Chod na yaar..." says Saadhna "Waise chor ke chakkar mein ek baat toh achi huyi" says Ragini. "Kya?" asks Saadhna. "arrey Ranvir ki pitaai hogayi issi bahaane" Says Ragini and begins to laugh. "Ragini tu bhi na, kabhi nahi sudharegi. Khaamkha ranvir ko pitwaa diya. Bechara pata hai kitna dard ho raha hoga usse." Says saadhna. "Koi bechara nahi hai woh" Says Ragini. Saadhna nods and says "acha sun main na usse smaeer ki photo dikha ke kaha ki mera rishta isse pakka hua hai" Says saadhna "Kya? Sameer ki photo? Wohi sameer na jo aapke saath college mein padta tha, aapka best friend" says Ragini. "Haan wohi." Replies Saadhna. "acha aapne unhe invite kiya hai na? sameer aayaga na aapki engagement pe?" asks ragini. "Haan woh aayega" Says Saadhna. "GREAT...ab aayega mazaa" Says Ragini
Ranvir enters the house holding his back and cries in pain 😆 "Ranvir sambhal ke" says Aalekh. Aalekh makes Ranvir sit on his bed and tells him to lie down while he'll get some balm for him. Ranvir takes his shirt off and lies on the bed. Aalekh comes back with a balm, and begins to apply on his back. Ranvir feels relaxed. Ranvir asks "Bhaiya, aapne bataya nahi kya baatein huyi saadhna bha... I mean saadhna ke saath. Aapne apne dil ki baat unhe bataayi?" Aalekh says "Haan...bataayi, lekin jawaab nahi mila, tumhari wajah se, tum andhar kyun aaye? Aur woh bhi Ragini ke kamre mein?" Ranvir replies "bhaiya, main toh aapko dhoondne gaya tha, mujhe laga ki shayad aapko unka kamra nahi mila" Aalekh says "acha?" Ranvir says "Haan, par mujhe kya pata tha ki meri dhulayi ho jaayegi, aapne bhi toh kitna maara mujhe. Main bhaiya bhaiya chilaata raha aur aap..."Aalekh presses his hand against ranvir back hard and ranvir shouts in pain 😆 Aalekh says "agar maine unhe roka na hota na, toh tu aur bhi pit jaata." Ranvir says "Bhaiya uss jungly billi ko toh main chodne nahi waala." Aalekh says "Ranvir anjaane mein huya usse." Ranvir says "Nahi bhaiya, anjaane mein nahi, jaan bhuj ke maara usne mujhe, main jaanta hoon." Aalekh is done applying balm on his back. Aalekh says "le, balm laga di hai maine, subah tak theek ho jaayega. Ab tu araam kar." Ranvir thanks him and aalekh leaves the room.
(Khudaya ve is playing in this scene the verse "Aankhon se khwab roothe, apno ke saath choote, tapti huyi rahon mein pairo ke chaale phoote")Aalekh comes to his room and sits on his bed and remembers him proposing saadhna, saadhna showing him the guy's photo. Aalekh has a tear slowly rolling down his cheek. He lies down on his bed and closes his eyes and remembers all his moments with saadhna.
It's morning. Aalekh is asleep. Someone moves away the curtains and aalekh's eyes feel uncomfortable due to the light. "Aalekh beta utho, subah hogayi hai" Aalekh slowly opens his eyes. It's vasu. Aalekh slowly gets up, and rubs his eyes. "Lagta hai raat ko bohut deri se soye the" Says vasu. "nahi ma aise koi baat nahi hai. Bas raat ko bohut thak gaya tha" Replies Aalekh. "arrey haan kal raat tum achanak kahaan chale gaye the?" asks Vasu. "Woh...woh…woh kuch kaam yaad aagaya tha, ussi ke liye jaana pada." Replies aalekh hesitantly while trying to avoid eye contact with Vasu. "beta, sure ki kuch aisi waisi baat nahi hai? Tum thode disturbed lag rahe ho." Asks vasu. "Maine kaha na ma, ki kuch nahi hai, main theek hoon. Aapko meri chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Main bilkul theek hoon, believe me" Says Aalekh trying to convince Vasu. Ranvir enters aalekh's room and stands near the door. Vasu smiles and says "theek hai, tum jaake tayaar ho jao, phir humein ring lene jaana hai" Ranvir has the "oh no" look "Ring?" asks Aalekh. Ranvir quickly enters the room saying "uhhhh...haan bhaiya, ring...woh kya hai na ki...uhhhh...haan woh mujhe apne liye ek ring khareedni hai toh socha ki aapko saath leke chaloon." Aalekh doesn't look convinced, and looks at ranvir weirdly and says "theek hai, main abhi tayaar hoke aata hoon." Aalekh goes to have a shower. Vasu asks "Ranvir bete yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Kal uski sagaai hai aus usse hi nahi pata. Tum karna kya chahte ho?" ranvr says "ma aap kal tak wait kijiye sab samajh aajaayega." Vasu says "humein toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai ki tum kya karna chahte ho, khair aaj aalekh ke saath jaake ek achi si ring le aana, I want the best for my would be daughter-in-law " Ranvir bows and says "Yes Ma'am" Vasu smiles, Aalekh comes out of the bathroom and gets ready. Aalekh says "Chalein?" Ranvir says "Haan bhaiya chaliye." Ranvir and Aalekh leave for shopping. They arrive at a jewellery shop. Ranvir asks the saleman to show some nice rings. The salesman begins to show them some rings. Aalekh isn't much interested in seeing the rings. Aalekh says "Ranvir tum rings dekho tab tak main kuch aur dekh leta hoon. Ranvir agrees and aalekh leaves. Aalekh begins to check out other things until he sees Sadhna and Ragini shopping. Aalekh looks at saadhna. Saadhna is trying on some necklaces. Ragini says "saadhna tum zaraa yeh waala necklace try karo, main zaraa ring dekh ke aati hoon, theek hai?" Saadhna happily agrees and Ragini leaves. Saadhna tries on the necklace that ragini asked her to wear it,. Saadhna notices aalekh through the mirror and turns around. "Aalekh? Tum?"says Saadhna. Aalekh says "uhhhh...haan woh ranvir apne liye ring dekhne aaya tha, lekin tum...yahaan...mera matlab hai..." Saadhna interrupts "...haan woh kal ke liye kuch shopping karne aayi thi main..." Aalekh looks down and feels uncomfortable. Saadhna is feeling bad about hiding this from aalekh. Aalekh says "kal...kal maine tumse kuch poocha tha..." while looking down. Saadhna hesitates and says "uhhh...woh mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai...aalekh meri engagement..." "...Saadhna, yeh ring kaisi hai? Jija ji pe kaisi lagegi?" interrupts ragini. It's a platinum ring with beautiful diamond stones. Aalekh looks down disappointingly; saadhna uncomfortably looks at Ragini and then at aalekh and then back at ragini. "uhhhh...achi hai." Ragini looks at aalekh and says "ji…aalekh ji aap? Aap hi bataiye na ki yeh ring kaisi hai?" Aalekh isn't interested but says "bohut achi hai" Ragini insists him to try it on to see how it'll look. Aalekh is uninterested, he takes the ring and puts it on his finger and shows it to ragini and saadhna. Ragini says "Yeh toh aapko perfect hoti hai, aur dekh saadhna kitni achi lag rahi hai...jija ji ke liye yeh hi ring lete hai." Aalekh takes off the ring and excuses himself. Ranvir is looking at the ring for saadhna. Ragini comes back to the ring section and sees ranvir. Ranvir is unable to decide a ring and says to himself "yeh bhaiya kahaan reh gaye, ab bhabi pe koun si ring achi lagegi." Ragini walks up to him and picks out a white platinum diamond ring and says "Saadhna pe yeh ring achi lagegi." Ranvir says "thank you, but no thank you, bhabi ke liye ring main aur bhaiya select karlenge." Aalekh comes from behind and asks "Kya ho raha hai yahaan?" ranvir says "uhhh...bhaiya woh..." Ragini interrupts saying "Woh...saadhna ke liye ring dekh rahi thi, toh bas ranvir se pooch rahi thi ki yeh ring kaisi hai, usne toh bataya nahi, aap hi bata dijiye." Aalekh smiles uncomfortably and nods, he takes the ring and has a look at it carefully. he starts to imagine his engagement with saadhna. Ragini and ranvir looks at each other and then back at aalekh. Ranvir calls out to aalekh, aalekh coes to his senses and says "achi hai, saadhna pe bohut achi lagegi, agar main hota toh, main bhi yeh hi ring leta." Ragini and Ranvir smile. Aalekh says "Ranvir, main tumhara gaadi mein intezaar kar raha hoon, jaldi aana" "Ji bhaiya" says Ranvir. Ranvir gets the salesman to pack the ring. Saadhna comes to ranvir and Ragini and says "aap dono ko nahi lagta ki yeh mazaak thoda zyada ho raha hai, I mean mujhe bilkul acha nahi lag raha hai." Ranvir says "bhabi, trust me please, jo khushi bhaiya ke chehre pe kal hogi, woh anmol hogi, aap dekhna, bas kal tak humara saath de dijiye." Saadhna looks worriedly at Ranvir and Ragini and agrees. Ranvir takes the ring and says "bye saadhna bhabi, kal milte hain 😉" Ranvir leaves quickly. Saadhna is still feeling bad about lying to aalekh.

Ranvir goes to the car and sees aalekh waiting for him, Ranvir hides the ring box in his pocket. Aalekh asks him what ring did he get. Ranvir says "uhhh...bhaiya mujhe kuch pasand nahi aaya, isiliye kuch nahi liya." Aalekh looks at him for a while and says "ghar chalein?" Ranvir says "uhhh...ji" ranvir and aalekh leave in their car
Saadhna and Ragini come home, everyone is busy with the preperations for the engagement. Malti sees that sadhna and Ragini have arrived, she rushes to them and asks what ring did they get. Ragini shows Malti the ring and Malti says "arrey wah, rung toh bohut achi pasand ki hai tum dono ne. Aur ismein kya hai?" pointing to the 2nd bag saadhna was holding. Saadhna says "bhabi ismein, kal ke liye ek set khareeda hai." Sadhna open the box and shows malti the set she bought. It was a beautiful silver set with diamonds. Malti really likes her set and she compliments on the choice. Saadhna says she'll go and show it to mum and dad.
PC says "Kaushalya ji, sab tayaariya hogayi hai na?" "Ji, sab tayaariya ho gayi hai, bas yeh lights ka kaam reh gaya hai raat tak yeh bhi ho jaayega." Replies Kaushi. "Achi baat hai, main nahi chahta ki saadhna ki engagement mein koi bhi kami rahe. Acha woh angoothi ka kya hua?" Asks PC. Kaushalya says "ji woh saadhna aur ragini lene gaye hai, aate hi honge." Says Kaushi. Saadhan enters the room saying "ma, papa..." Kaushi and PC look at saadhna. Saadhna walks up to PC and Kaushi and says "ma, dekhiye maine engagement ke liye ek set khareeda hai, aap dekhiya na kaisa hai." Saadhna shows the set to Kaushi and PC. PC says "arrey wah, kitna khoobsurat set hai, tujhpe yeh bohut acha lagega." Saadhna then shows the ring, Pc and Kaushi really like the ring and compliment on it. Saadhna is happy and says "ma, yeh ring aur yeh set aap apne paas rakhiye, please" Kaushi happily takes the ring and puts it in the locker. "SAADHNA" calls out a voice. "Lagta hai bhaiya mujhe bula rahe hai, main abhi aayi." Says saadhna and leaves the room.
PC and Kaushi are happy to see saadhna happy.

Precap: Aalekh is at Saadhna's engagement,and is upset to see sameer getting friendly with Saadhna. Ranvir notices this and walks up to Aalekh.

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago

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Simran Shriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#274

wow gr8 awosme mindblowing scene sanju u totally stolen my hearts away oh hoho alekh ki jalne ki bu aa rahi hai and yeah u give song was also my fan wow it really touches hart aowme yaar intezar ka fal mita hota hai really omg rv ne vasu ko thnk god rukh diya😊plzz update soon next part once again awosme👏

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#275

reserved

going to bed rite now will edit after college tomorrow

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SPEECHLESS GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by -Destiny- - 15 years ago

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

@KinSanj

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Posted: 15 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: simransalekh
wow gr8 awosme mindblowing scene sanju u totally stolen my hearts away oh hoho alekh ki jalne ki bu aa rahi hai and yeah u give song was also my fan wow it really touches hart aowme yaar intezar ka fal mita hota hai really omg rv ne vasu ko thnk god rukh diya😊plzz update soon next part once again awosme👏

awwwwwwwwww simo sorry it wasn't that good....next chapter shall be interesting i promise[ 😊

hehehe m glad u liked the song sequence on our aalekh 😳

lol..vasu ko rok diya..bechari vasu is soooooooooo confused she has no clue what's going on 😆

haan next part shall be up soon 😊

@ Lekha: hey lekha i shall wait for your comments 😊