||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143 - Page 26

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg sanju main kcuh bolo ya nahi omg it is soooooo supervvvvvv👏👏amazing mindblowing winderful aur pata nahi kya-kya bolo wow that was sooo romantci wen alekh sits on his knee and say the magical words i love u omg kya scene hai i just fully imagine😳wow and omg my sweetu ranveer 😊bechara pita gaya apni hone wali ragini se😆omg ragnin ne kitna mara hoga and yeah included that scene ki alekh was missing sadi in park wow it is soo emotional yaar u really givea good emotional touch to story haiiiiii and that way when alekh sadi"meri bhukh mar gayi"😆so awsome aur kya likho itni khubiya hai iss ff mein omg sanju this is for you"my dil mange more and more"😆😆 mann karta hai isse padte raho
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww, sanju dii,u r a greatttt writerrr....chapter 9 is nicee,chapter 10 is verryyyyyyyy funnnyyyy,🤣...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
SAnjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Superb yaar. you had me in splits😆 😆 😆
Sanju i knew you are bundle of suprises but the this was superb, RAnveer ka nautankis to mashallah and ragini to subanallah.Kash they show ragvir in this ada in bidaai also😍

Salek to waise be kithna adorable hai na.
Good good I like it I like it. You are a star.⭐️ sanju.........




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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah again one thing forgot iss ff mein itnu khubiya hai ki yaad hi nahi reheti hai sanju i really likde this dialogue plzz in future also aise dialogue deete rehena b/w saalekh-
""Haan. acha ladka hai, bohut hi handsome. Photo dekhoge?" Says Saadhna. "uhhhhhh...main...main kaise..." says Aalekh. "Arrey ruko dekhaati hoon." Replies Saadhna as she goes to her drawer and takes out a photo of a randomn guy and gives aalekh the photo. Aalekh is surprised to see the guy. "Yeh ladka pasand kiya tumne?" asks aalekh sounding shocked. "Haan, hain na handsome." Says Saadhna. "Haan handsome hai, par naak thodi si thedi hai?lekin ladka acha hai...aur height bhi kam lagti hai?match nahi banega...lekin ladka acha hai, aur uski aankhein dekh...bohut badi hain...lekin ladka acha hai...😆" Says Aalekh. "arrey picture mein hi tumne 50 galatiya nikaaldi, aur phir bolte ho ki ladka acha hai? Tumhe pasand nahi na aaya?" asks Saadhna. Aalekh doesn't look in saadhna's eyes."
i really luv this one😆
ab pata nahi engagemnet din allu ka mood kaisa rahega😆
Edited by simransalekh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

heya sanjuuuuuu mai apoorva hun lekha ki cousin ... hum dono ne tumhaara part parha hai .. has has ker paagla gayee hai🤣 ... seriously....

Love ur writing

Love apoorva and Lekha

hey apoorva 😊
thank u shoooooooooo much m gladu both are enjoying it 😊
it's so nie of u to drop in a leave a comment 😊
really means alot 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SanihaKaKinshuk

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

🤣 More More More🤣 Okay okay sahi se batati hun apna haal-e-dill🤣🤣🤣
Ranvir is sneaking in the house as he whispers "Bhaiya...?" Ranvir accidently enters Ragini's room looking for aalekh.Awwwwwwwww OMG i was like ab Ranvir kahin kuch Romantic nahi kerdey but but but🤣 Chor Chor Chor🤣Sanjuu OMG i m lovingg The New RagVir🤣🤣 i so wana see all this yaaaaaaaaaaaaar 🤣🤣🤣 HAhahahah MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH to youu kya scene hai aacha aagey chaletey hainn

Arrey...bachao...main chor nahi hoon...bachao...bhaiyaa" Yells the guy ..i Can so Imagine Ranvir Blanked ke ander🤣🤣 Luckyy Blanket actualllyyyy hhahha omgg My Poor Rannn🤣
Uske baad i loved this dilog of Raginii
aise sade ideas issi ke paas aa sakte hain..." ranvir gives a 'what the' look to ragini ".haahahaha Ragini kya mast attitud emei hai yaar i love her dilogssssssssssssssss😃😃😃 hahah
Thek Then Then the best partt
...more more chila rahi thi." Says ragini. 'more\
Sanju i was liek thiss literalyy more more more🤣Oh WOWWWWWWWWWW maza aagaya sanjuuuuuuuuuuuu🤣🤣
AND then
ehsaan faramosh ek toh tujhe bachaya, upar se yeh tewar, chal cha lab nikal mere
OMG They are so much like our KinRul OMG i want a new Serial with RagVir woh bhi yehistroyyyyyyyyyyyy
Mast Mast Mast Lovbed it Sanjuuuuuuuuuu cant wait for the next part n RagVir dance in Saalekh's engagementt i ca n alreadyy smelll Waha Waha Ramjiii Jodi kya banayai jiji aur jija ko badhaayi ho badhaayi if not thn yeh bh hona chayeh uske baad aur osngss bht saare dnace hone chayeh hain Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😃😃

sanhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
heheheheh more more more 🤣
tujhe laga ki kuch romantic hone waala hai?? 🤣 lol sanhu thats the trick..a surprise for u 😆 hehehehehhe....!!!
hahahahahhahaahahhahahahahha arrey yaar seriosuly i was thinking ki seriosuly itna crazy idea mera hai? lol i really wanted to see a scene like that...😆 ragini aur ranvir ka expressions were soooooooo imaginable 😆
hehehehe tune uske baare mein mention nahi kiya where ranvir says bachaya?? isse acha toh main uncle aunty ke haath lag jaata...mujhe laga ki tu uske baare mein mention karegi.. and that scene too where ranvir says itna stupid excuse maine aaj tak nahi suna
arrey yaar mujhe bhi aisa kuch dekhna hai...i sooooooooooooo want to see this on our kinrul yaar like seriously...i shall take this to RS and shall request him to create a serial like this. as he is thinking of starting a new show 😉
yeh idea toh pakka leke jaana chahiye....asia kuch i want to see 😊
haan bas tu dekhti jaa kaise kaise twists daalungi main 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

Sanju di, first about the 9th Part

It was amazing a BIG jhappi to u for writing such a wonderful part 🤗

I am just Loving RagVir in ur FF di, Ranvir ki shaitaniya with bit of innocence, Ragini ki attitude with her mast adaaye and all the chhed chhad between them, everything is very very very cute di and i really love you for making RagVir like this in ur FF

loved every bit of it di
mwaaah to u

😳 abhi 10 chapter padh phir pata chalega 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

OMG sanju di,

I seriously cant stop laughing after reading this part

This was the BESTEST part so far di, every thing was so happy happy...i just loved it

SaAlekh part was really very sweet, Aalekh's description about the boy was really great LOL

And RagVir part net oh bolti band karwa di, it was more than amazing di, RagVir were super cute in this part, their jhagde are always so adorable

I loved this part

"Arrey...bachao...main chor nahi hoon...bachao...bhaiyaa" Yells the guy Aalekh stops and begins to thinks "bhaiya? Yeh awaaz kuch jaani pehchaani si lag rahi hai..." aalekh says "Saadhna, Ragini zaraa hatna...iska chehra toh dekhe zara." Aalekh lifts the blanket and finds it's Ranvir. "RANVIR?" says shocked Aalekh followed by saadhna and then Ragini "haan main...Ranvir...Aapka bhaiiiii" says ranvir in pain "tum...tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Tum toh baahar khade the na?" asks Aalekh. "baahar?

I could so imagine Ranvir in this part, u toh have done Phd in bidaai, u know the characters so well, really hats off to u for this

Waise yeh sawaal main aapse bhi poochna chahti hoon, aap itni raat gaye yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Asks ragini. "Main...main...uhhhh...yeh mujhe laaya" says Aalekh pointing towards Ranvir. "Woh toh main samajh gayi...aise sade ideas issi ke paas aa sakte hain..." ranvir gives a 'what the' look to ragini"

I am simply loving ragini ka attitude in ur FF, the way she keeps on replying to Ranvir in each and every thing is superb di

"dil Maang more dekh ke more more chila rahi thi? I mean...yeh kaise excuse tha? Itna ghatiya excuse aaj tak nahi suna maine" says Ranvir. "ehsaan faramosh ek toh tujhe bachaya, upar se yeh tewar, chal cha lab nikal mere ghar se.' Says ragini. "bachaya??? Kuch der pehle mujhe pakkad ke itna dhoya, use tum bachana kehti ho? Arrey use acha toh main uncle aunty ke haath lag jaata, kamse kam maar toh na padti..." says Ranvir and he yells in pain"

And this part toh was my absolute favourite di, RagVir were super, duper cute in this part, they are so adorable together, wish we got to see KinRul in such a avatar in bidaai as well.


Di, please update the next part soon and di, it looks like RagVir will have a great time together in SaAlekh's shaadi, and i think i m right in this hai na

haina mera sabse best part? 😆
aisa scene agar ragvir pe dekhne ko milta toh kitna acha hota...
hahahahhahaha...PHD?
heheh thank u thank u 😆
arrey dono bhaiyo ka scene kaisa laga tujhe? bathroom waala....hehehe i think it was hillarious 😆
haan bohut bohut masti dekhne ko milegi tujhe...aage ke many chapters is full of masti and more masti 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simransalekh

omg omg sanju main kcuh bolo ya nahi omg it is soooooo supervvvvvv👏👏amazing mindblowing wonderful aur pata nahi kya-kya bolo wow that was sooo romantci wen alekh sits on his knee and say the magical words i love u omg kya scene hai i just fully imagine😳wow and omg my sweetu ranveer 😊bechara pita gaya apni hone wali ragini se😆omg ragnin ne kitna mara hoga and yeah included that scene ki alekh was missing sadi in park wow it is soo emotional yaar u really givea good emotional touch to story haiiiiii and that way when alekh sadi"meri bhukh mar gayi"😆so awsome aur kya likho itni khubiya hai iss ff mein omg sanju this is for you"my dil mange more and more"😆😆 mann karta hai isse padte raho

😳 he was very hesitant simran 😳 abhi engagement ke din dekhna 😉 kya kya hota hai 😆
hehe sirf ragini se hi nahi saadhna aur aalekh se bhi 🤣 bechara mer ranvir 😳
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....dil maange more and more awwwwwwwwwwww...you'll def get more and more simran 😊
heheh haina tera bhi mann karta hai na? lol mera bhi man kiya ki main padti rahoon aur padti rahoon 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: IFUU

wowwwwwwwwwwwww, sanju dii,u r a greatttt writerrr....chapter 9 is nicee,chapter 10 is verryyyyyyyy funnnyyyy,🤣...............

heheheh premu..tujhe acha laga m really happy 😃

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