||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143 - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: parvathykrishna

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Posted: 15 years ago

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😉It was fun-tastic yaar..😳 Mazaa aa gaya!!

😆 thank u thank u 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow Sanjana..great work yaar..keep it up...sacchi me agar aise bidaai k episodes television pe telecast hojaye na to this will be a super duperrr hitttt dear.....
creatives dears plz cum n have a look here....

thanx aashi 😊 ☺️
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx just in 😊
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Chapter 8

Ranvir says "Bhaiyaa sach sach bataiye aapko pyaar ho gaya hai na? bolo bolo." "Ranvir'kya bole jaa raha hai tu." Says aalekh trying to deny that he loves saadhna. "Acha toh phir theek hai, mera raasta clear hai phir." Says Ranvir. "KYA?" says aalekh sounding completely surprised. "woh kya hai na bhaiya, mujhe toh saadhna bohut pasand hai, agar aapko unmein interest nahi hai, toh main unpe ab bina kisi tension ke line maar sakta hoon." Says Ranvir 😆 . "kya kya kya? Kya bola? Saadhna pe line maarega?" Asks Aalekh sounding shocked. "aap ko kya? Aap ko koi fark padta hai kya?" says Ranvir. "uhhhhh....Ma neeche dinner pe intezaar kar rahi hai, jaldi aaja." Says Aalekh. Aalekh leaves downstairs. Ranvir has a mischievous smile and says"bhiaya aap chahe laakh chupao, aapse toh main yeh kehlwaake hi rahunga" Ranvir smiles mischievously again and he follows Aalekh downstairs.

Aalekh is sitting on the dinning table along with the rest. Ranvir comes downstairs and joins the rest. Inderjit asks "Aalekh beta,Mr Malhotra ke saath tumhari meeting kaisi gayi?" ranvir giggles. Aalekh gives Ranvir a look, and then turns to look at inderjit. "Papa, woh aaj meeting cancel hogayi thi." Says Aalekh. "Cancel?" asks inderjit. "Ji papa, woh achanak Mr Malhotra ko Mumbai jaana pada, isiliye unhone meeting next week ke tak postpone kardi hai." Replies aalekh. "theek hai." Says inderjit. "arrey bhaiya, aapne papa ko bataya nahi aapka lunch kaisa tha?" says ranvir teasingly 😆. Aalekh shockingly looks at Ranvir. "Lunch? Kyun aisa kya hua tha aaj?" asks inderjit. Aalekh hesitantly says "uhhhh...papa...woh...uhhhhh...main...woh...uhhhhh" "arrey bhaiya, aapne papa ko bataya nahin? Chocolate souffle, lipstick?" Says Ranvir teasingly. Aalekh begins to cough 😆" chocolate souffle? Lipstick? " Says Inderjit confusingly 😆 "uhhhh.....main chalta hoon. Excuse me" Says aalekh and he quickly gets up and leaves 😆. Ranvir "arrey bhaiya, kahaan jaa rahe ho? Bataake toh jao. Bhaiyaa..bhaiyaa..." says ranvir, but aalekh doesn't listen and he quickly runs upstairs. Ranvir starts to laugh. Inderjit and Vasu look at Ranvir. "Beta ranvir, kya baat hai? Humein bhi toh batao." Says Vasu. "Ma, bhaiya ko pyaar hogaya hai." Says Ranvir. Vasu is surprised and she says "Kya?" "Pyaar? Lekin Kisse?" Adds surprised inderjit. "Papa..woh aapke partner hai na vineet sharma..." says ranvir. "Haan" says Inderjit. "unki behn saadhna sharma se" says Ranvir. "Kya? Saadhna se?" says Inderjit sounding completely surprised. "Haan papa..bhaiya ko woh bohut pasand hai." Informs ranvir. "saadhna sharma." Says vasu. "haan ma, bohut hi achi ladki hai, very sweet." Says Ranvir. "theek hai, toh hum kal hi sharma ji ke yahaan jaake, rishtey ki baat karte hai." Says Inderjit. "yes dad, kal hi chalte hai." Says ranvir excitedly. "arrey aapko ek baar aalekh se bhi poochna chahiye, ki woh kya chahta hai." Says Vasu. "arrey ma, main bhaiya ko acche tarah se jaanta hoon, aap befikar hoke sharma uncle ke yahaan jaaiye." Says Ranvir. "toh theek hai, ti's decided. Vasu tum kaushalya ji ko phone kardo, aur unhe inform kardo ki kal hum saadhna aur aalekh ke rishtey ki baat karne aayenge." Says inderjit. "Main abhi unhe phone karke unhe batati hoon." Says Vasu excitedly as she gets up from the table.

Vasu cals Kaushalya. "hello" says Ragini, "hello. Ragini?" Says Vasu. "Ji." Says Ragini. "Beta hum vasu bol rahe hai." Says Vasu. "Oh vasu aunty, namaste." Says Ragini. "Namasate, beta kaushalya ji hain?" asks Vasu. "Ji haan hai, ek minute." Says Ragini. Ragini calls out to Kaushalya and gives her the phone "hello. Namaste vasundhra ji" sasy kaushi. "Namaste kaushalya ji. Humne ek zaroori baat karne ke liye apako phone kiya hai" says Vasu. "Ji Kahiye" responds Kaushi. Vasu says "Ji woh baat yeh hai ki, humein aapki badi beti saadhna bohut pasand hai, hum apne bete aalekh ka rishta saadhna ke saath karna chahte hai." Kaushi is surprised. "Ji?" says Kaushi sounding surprised. Ragini, sadhna, vineet, malti look at Kaushi."Aapko koi aitraaz toh nahin?" asks Vasu. Kaushi excitedly says "arrey nahi nahi, bilkul bhi nahin." "toh hum kal shaam ko aalekh ka rishta lekar aa rahe hai" Says Vasu smilingly. "Ji zaroor." Says Kaushi. "Acha toh hum phone rakhte hai." Says Vasu. "Ji Acha" replies Kaushi. Kaushi excitedly puts the phone down, and rushes to saadhna. Kaushi kisses Saadhna's forehead. "Kya hua ma?" Asks Saadhna. "Vasundhra ji ka phone tha, woh keh rahe hai ki kal, tere aur aalekh ke rishte ki baat karne." Informs Kaushi excitedly. Everyone is surprised. Saadhna blushes and shyly runs to her room. Ragini I watches saadhna run to her room and she looks at kaushi and excitedly says "Sach ma?" Kaushi nods smilingly. Ragini looks up to saadna's room and back at kaushi "Main abhi aati hoon" Says Ragini and she runs to Saadhna's room. Saadhna standing near the window remembering her moments with aalekh. From their first meeting to their lunch. Saadhna is smiling shyly, she feelslike she's on top of the world. Ragini enters calling out to sadhna excitedly. Sadhna looks back and sees Ragini standing there. Sadhna shyly turns around, Ragini rushes to Saadhna and gives her a tight hug from the back. "Sadhna aaj main tere liye bohut khush hoon." Says Ragini. Saadhna smiles shyly. Ragini gives Saadhna a kiss on her cheek. "acha yeh bata kal kya pehnegi?" Asks Ragini. "Kya?" says Saadhna. "arrey bhai, kal ladke waale tujhe dekhne aa rahe hai, to tayaari toh karni padegi na?" says Ragini. Saadhna is shy. "arrey woh log oh kal aa rahe hai na?" says Sadhna. "haan toh kya hua? Kal hum dono meri rehearsals ke baad shopping jaayenge'okay?" says Ragini. Saadhna smiles.

"Saadhna? Ragini?" Calls out a voice. "arrey papa aagaye,." Says Ragini excitedly. Saadhna and Ragini quickly rush downstairs. "Papa" says Saadhna. Both Ragini and saadhna rush to PC (PC) and give him a hug. Kaushi comes with a glass of water and says " arrey aap aagaye?" "Ji, kaushalya ji." Says PC. "Papa, aapke liye ek good news hai." Says Ragini. "mujhe pata hai, tum dance team mein select hogayi ho right?" says PC. "haan papa, woh bhi hai, lekin ek aur good news hai." Says Ragini. Saadhna gets shy. "acha? Ek aur good news? Says PC. Ragini says "woh'." "Ji woh Rajvansh parivaar hai na'" "haan, humare bete ke business partners hai woh." Says PC. "Ji haan wohi, woh apne bete aalekh ka rishta humari saadhna ke saath karna chahte hai, woh kal aa rahe hai, rishte ki baat karne" informs kaushi. "Kya?" PC is surprised he looks at saadhna who is really shy. PC walks to saadhna and hugs her. "humari saadhna itni badi hogayi, ki ab usse vidaa karne ka samay aagaya hai. Tujhe koi aitraaz toh nahi hai na?" says PC. "Ji nahin papa" replies saadhna shyly. PC kisses on saadhna's forehead. Ragini says "papa, main bhi hoon." PC smiles and puts one arm around ragini as he says "haan, tub hi hai." PC kisses on her forehead too. Ragini and Sadhna give PC a hug. "papa, aap Mumbai se mere liye kya laaye?" asks Ragini. "aur mere liye bhi."add saadhna. "Tum dono ke liye maine laaya hoon" Says PC as he grabs two bags. "Yeh tumhare liye" PC gives one white bag to Ragini "aur yeh tumhare liye" gives a red bag to Saadhna. Ragini opens her gift and sees a very nice black saree, with Red color embellishments. Along with a net drape. Ragini is surprised to see such a nice saree. "thank you papa" says ragini excitedly and hugs PC. "saadhna beta tu bhi apna gift kholke dekho" says PC. Saadhna opens her gift and finds a pastel pink colored lehnga which was very nicely crafted crystal patterns on gentle fluid lehnga and a sleevless choli. Sadhna is hugs PC as she thanks him for such a nice dress.

Aalekh is sitting on his bed thinking about saadhna. Ranvir enters as he says"bhaiya'" Aalekh comes to his senses and he quickly gets up when he sees Ranvir. "Tu, tujhe toh main nahi chodne waala" Says aalekh. Aalekh begins to chase Ranvir, ranvir is trying to defend himself. "Bhaiya'.arrey bhaiyaa'maine kya kiya?" asks Ranvir still trying to run away from Aalekh. "Kya kiya? Neeche tu mummy papa se kya bole jaa raha tha?" asks Aalekh still chasing ranvir around the room. "arrey maine jooth kya bola? Aapke lunch ke bare mein hi toh bata raha tha, ismein kya galat bola maine?" says ranvir 😆. "Who sab mujhe nahi pata, lekin itna pata hai aaj tu mere haathon se nahi bachega." Says Aalekh. And the chase continues.

It's morning. Ragini is in the college hall rehearsing her steps, Ranvir enters and he watches Ragini practice her dancing, he just can't get his eyes off her. The choreographer calls out to ranvir and tells him to join ragini. Ragini looks at ranvir and gives her attitude look. Ranvir and Ragini begin to do their dance steps. Ragini is running towards ranvir and Ranvir lifts her up from her waist, and slowly brings her down. Ragin's expressions hows that she isn't likin this one bit, she's got anger on her face, and ranvir doesn't really seem interested. The choreographer stops them and says "Yah tum dono kya kar rahe ho? Yeh ek romantic concept hai, aap dono ke steps toh ache hai, lekin face pe thoda expression lao. You're both are in love, express it, mujhe expressions chahiye, expressions." "Ji ma'am" says Ranvir and Ragini. "Chalo ek aur baar try karo." Says the choreographer. Ragini runs towards ranvir and Ranvir lifts he rup from the waist, and slowly brings her down. They are lost in each other's eyes as they do the rest of their performance. The choreographer is impressed by their expression in the rest of the performance. RagVir are lost in each other's eyes. Everyone begin to clap. Both come to their senses and ragini backs away. The rehearsals end and Ragini packs her bags and is about to leave, ranvir calls out to ragini and ragini looks back. "Kya hai?" asks ragini with an attitude. "Woh'mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai." Says ranvir. "magar mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni." Replies ragini. Ragini turns around bu ranvir calls out to her once again. Ragini turns around "ragini meri baat toh suno." Says ranvir. "Ranvir please mere paas waqt nahi hai, mujhe saadhna ke saath shopping par jaana hai, aur phir shaam ko aap sab bhi aa rahe hai na rishta leke, toh ghar pe tayaariya bhi karni hai" says ragini. Ragini leaves and ranvir is standing there.

Precap: Ranvir informs Aalekh that saadhna is getting engaged tomorrow, aalekh is shocked 😲

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanju mujhe HAHK yaad agaayi yaar when Rishta ata hai usmein bhi Lol
woww i lovedd it i cant wait to rread the next part sanju muah iot was love n my favparts
he just can't get his eyes off her🤢
Ragini looks at ranvir and gives her attitude look. 😃
Ragini is running towards ranvir and Ranvir lifts her up from her waist, and slowly brings her down🤢
So finally Saalekh ka rishta pakka ab to salekh ko chori chupi milaane meinn RagVir he help out kerengeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃😉😉OMG sanju i cant waitt yehh Langooor aur Jungli Billuu ka pyaar kab shuru hogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😆😆😆
Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
So what exactly did ranveer want to talk about with ragini?
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣🤣....................omgggggggggg..........verryyy funnyy,bhootnii,jangli billii,.......sanju diii.......great jobb..chapter 7 is alsoo nice...aur kyaa boluuu...bass hassii arahi hai🤣🤣........u r d besttttt diiii...keep it up.........:))))
Edited by IFUU - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: just_in

So what exactly did ranveer want to talk about with ragini?

well you'll fnd out tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: IFUU

🤣🤣....................omgggggggggg..........verryyy funnyy,bhootnii,jangli billii,.......sanju diii.......great jobb..chapter 7 is alsoo nice...aur kyaa boluuu...bass hassii arahi hai🤣🤣........u r d besttttt diiii...keep it up.........:))))

hehe chapter 8 pado premu.. 😉

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