Rudar-Gauri-Pihu FF ||Waaris|| Part 4 Pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok....nw this is an interestng plot....
very different from the story!!!!!!
n nw m waiting to read the nxt part asap.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very interesting start Tasheen....😊
I look forward to the next chapter...don't keep us waiting for too long though hun!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey tasheen
this one is v interesting but u make me confuse so now be good & update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really like your story. I hope you update soon. Because I love to read your ff. And can you add me in your pm list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wt an awesome start tasneen. I loved it , now i really want to know wt decision takur take, that destroyed havelis happiness??? Thanx for pm. Continue soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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tasheen hun where y disappear jaana?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tasheen fab start i really like your Story. I can't wait to read your FF Gr8 start. 👍🏼 👍🏼 continue soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice plot..... please continue soon.... I love the story line..... I feel a "But" coming on its way........
between rudr pihu and gauri......

Rudr finally married pihu.... wow... that too after lot of struggle...... hmmm....... I feel something fishy in this whole plot..... how everything is looking so nice now..... very soon to be shattered to go different ways....

Eagerly waiting for your next part and the next one after that..... DO continue soon....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Friends 🤗
Thank you soo much for liking the first part
and I am sorry for not being update this one
Becuase of Ramazan and some projects I was unable to write anything
soooo soooo sooooo sooooo sorry for that
and yeah I have examz next week so in advance I am sorry for the late update
but I will give a promo paka....
Enough of bhashan from my side 😆
Here is Part 2
Short one though but bear with me 😳
hope you guys will enjoy reading it
do leave your comments

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Waaris

Part 2

For the world it was like every normal day but for Sandhi Haveli it is a special day because the news was given that their Bahu is preganant. Rai Thakur and Rajrani was on top of the world. There was preparation going on for the celebration.

"Pihu baita aaj ke baad tum ghar ka koi kaam nahi karo gi, yahan se aik qadam bahir nahi nikalo gi, aakhir hamari amanat hai tumhaare paas" Pihu blushed as Rajrani said this and nodded her head obediantly

"Jee Maa"

"Acha ab main chalti hoon kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho toh main ne Champa ko bahir hi bithaya hai usse awaaz de daina, theek hai"

"Jee"

After Rajrani left Pihu was thinking how she will tell Gauri about this, "Maa ne toh mujhe aane jaane se mana ker dia ab main Gauri ko kaise bataoon .. usse nahi bataya toh naraz hogi .... haan Champa ko hi bhaijti hoon ke Gauri ko bula laaye" She called Champa in and asked her to tell Gauri that she want to see her

"Usse kehna ke Pihu ne bulaya hai"

"Jee choti bhabhi" Champa left the room and Pihu rested her head with the back of bed and closed her eyes. Only five minutes have been passed when someone covered her eyes from behined, She smiled slightly.

"Aap aa gaye" He pulled his hands back and came in front of her. She opened her eyes

"Tumhain kaise pata ke main hi hoon" He asked sitting near her on the bed

"Hmm kya karain itna purana rishta joh hai" She smiled

Rudra hold her hands and stared at her,"Kya hua aise kyun daikh rahe hain?" She asked lowering her gaze

"I am so lucky Pihu ke mujhe tum mili, tum bohat achi ho" He leaned and kissed on her forehead

"Lucky toh main bhi hoon kyun ke mujhe aap mile hain" She placed her hand on his hand

"I love you Pihu" She just smiled and looked away to this Rudra turned her face to him holding her chin

"Mera reply?" He teased her

"Rudra please maa aa jaien gi, aap uthain aur change karain please" She made him get up and pushed him to the washroom

"Baad mein poochoon ga tumhain"

"Haan theek hai abhi jaaaien" She smiled and came back to the bed

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She has just came back to home when there was knock on the door. She get up and opened the door. This was Champa. She amazed to see her.

"Champa tum sub theek hai na?"

"Haan ji woh aaap ko Pihu bhabhi ne bulaya hai" She told her

"Pihu ne? woh theek hai na?" She worried

"Haan ji aap chalain mere saath"

"Acha tum ruko main maa ko bata ke aati hoon" She said to her and went inside to tell her mother that she was going to see Pihu

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Rudra was teasing Pihu to say him I love you which she was not listenng

"Rudra please mujhe araam karne dain werna main abhi maa ko bula loon gi" She threaten him

"No ways pehle tum kaho that you love me" He insisted

"Rudra please"

"Just once" He said making faces to this Pihu smiled and looked down

"I love you" She said slowly while Rudra in excitement hugged her. Only then someone knocked the door, Rudra without leaving her said, "Aa jao" and Pihu breaking the hug set aside

"Pihu tu theek hai n ...." Gauri stopped as she her gaze fell on Rudra

"Sorry, main baad mein aati hoon" She turned when Rudra stopped her

"Nahi aap rukain Pihu ke paas main bus ja raha tha" Saying this he left the room while Gauri take a breath of comfort

"Pihu tu ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ke Rudra bhi yaheen hain, tujhe pata hai na mujhe unn se bohat khof aata hai" She said sitting with her on the bed

"Kyun? Rudra itne ache toh hain aur tujhe kyun unn se khof aata hai? Unhon ne tujhe kuch kaha hai?" Pihu narrowed her eyes on her

"Pata nahi bus mujhe woh bohat ajeeb lagte hain, acha chal woh sub chor tu ne mujhe kyun bulaya? sub theek hai na?" Gauri asked concerned to this Pihu blushed and smiled

"Kya hua? muskurati rahe gi ke kuch bataye gi bhi?"

"Tu ... Tu maasi banane wali hai"

"Such" As Pihu told her she exclaimed with happiness

"Sachi mein" She asked still not sure

"Haan baba such, sub bohat khush hain, maa ne toh mujhe mana ker dia hai ke main koi kaam na karoon"

"Pihu I am so happy for you, tu hamesha aise hi khush rahe" Gauri prayed from her heart. At that time she did not know that one day she will be one to be blamed for her happiness

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