I love your story, its very intresting and realistic in presentation. Please do continue soon... have been waiting for the new part from a long time.
The story so far has moved at a good pace...... and I really have one question..
Why does Rudr and Gauri not meet eye to eye... when they come across each other... was there a embarising moment between them. Or was there something like liking between them which they are trying to hide from each other.
If you are stuck with some concept here .... as i have seen sometimes we have different options and we keep thinking which way to go.... which one is better.... if you are in that confusion.... then we all are here to help.... but we surely want to see the story go a head.....to many parts.....
Please continue.... it is a sincere request from sincere fan for your FF....
Bunny.