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Hey guys,
Good news!!! I have finished my reports!!!!!!!yeah!!!! I am now free, free, free!!!
I guess by my opening paragraph you have realised that I am over the moon that the reports have all been completed. finally!!!!
Anyway what I wanted to say was that when I was watching today's episode I imagined a slight difference and a following scene came into my head. Thought I would share it with you all. I hope you all enjoy it.
Ganga is sleeping in her room where she is dreaming about being in a house with white veils. She's looking around everywhere and wondering where everyone is.
Suddenly she trips over something and falls beside it.
Its a wrapped up body in white. She wonders who it could be when a sudden gust of wind flings the covering of the sheet off the face. It's Sagar!
G shouts 'Sagar!!"
She sits up in bed.
Why am I seeing Sagar dead?
G begins to feel restless and is unable to go back to sleep. She decides to go to S room to make sure he is there and safe.
She quietly goes out of her room, silently wishing that noone (especially buaji) doesn't come out of their room and see her going into S's room.
G reaches S's room.
I shouldn't be here. S could be asleep and anyone could see me and think wrongly about it. No I need to put my mind at rest.
She tentavely knocks on the door. Noone answers. She silently twists the door handle and slowly opens the door.
It is pitch-black. No light is visible except for the light of the moon which is showing through the opened window.
G is shocked to see the sight she encounters.
S is lying on the bed with a white sheet over his head. She gasps and with trepidation nears the bed. She very slowly moves her hand to move the sheet off his face.
S face is uncovered.
While her hand is still outstretched, S's hand comes out and grabs her hand and brings her down beside him.
He is barechested and smiling.
G tries to get up but S puts his leg over hers to prevent her going.
G: Sagar....let me up.
S: No... First tell me what you are doing here so late at night when you were the one who said to keep our relationship hidden from all. What made you come here? My love must have brought you here.
G: No Sagar. Let me up and I will tell you.
Sagar eases off her slightly and she tells him about her nightmare.
G: I felt that I had lost you. I couldn't bear to see you like that even in a dream. I had to come and see you were still here.
S: Ganga, you are just too much. You should understand this by now that I would never voluntarily leave you. I will always be with you, even in death.
G: I love you so much S that I can't bear even the thought if you not being with me. It scares me so much. I cannot live without you. I remember before the misunderstandings were cleared and I gained my love again, how I lived withoout you. It was so hard but even believing that you had betrayed me I still loved you. Now knowing that you do truly love me and hadn't betrayed me as I had believed it would be even worse. I would go on for my daughter Gudiya's sake but I would be a living corpse.
S: Ganga, don't talk about dying. I too cannot bear to live without you. I lived with your memories and your love all this time. I was broken when your mum told me of your death. I didn't want to live. I cannot bear to be apart from you for even 1 second.
They are both standing together now and embrace each other.
S smiles mischiveously.
S: How about some romance now?
G: Sagar you are unbelievable.
S: That I am and that too totally yours.
G suddenly realises where she is - in S room where he is barechested and alone.
G gets shy and embarassed.
S notices.
S: Ganga, its this trait of yours that has truly captivated me.
I fought this love so much. I was going to marry Kaveri but wherever I went, even when I was with Kaveri, I kept seeing you everywhere. You wouldn't leave my mind and thoughts no matter how much I tried. I admitted defeat and came back to kundanpur and found you being chased by madan and his men. What happened after was the most beautiful and most treasured of nights of my life.
G is shy when he mentions that night where they truly became one.S sits down on the bed and embraces her. He begins to kiss her on the forehead and moves slowly moves downwards. He kisses her beside her eyes, on her cheeks. G closes her eyes. She is lost in the feelings he is making her feel. S and G move slightly apart and look at each other. His eyes goes to her mouth and slowly begins to move closer. She too does the same. His head moves slightly to the side and finally their lips meet.
S holds her in his arms and tries to bring her closer when the clock chime is heard. They both spring apart.
G looks at S shyly and stands up when S stands up too adn grabs and twirls her back toward him. She falls onto his chest. Her hands on his sides and S is looking down on her head which is leaning on his bare chest.
G: Sagar. Please let me go. Someone will see.
S: There's noone here but me and you.
G: Sagar please!!
S: No. Say those 3 words that I like hearing from you.
G: Here? Now?
S: Yes right now.
She smiles and is shy. She quietly says what he is asking for.
G: I.....Love......You...Sagar!!!
She somehow gets loose and grabs the door handle.
S returns her words too and expresses his feelings.
They both smile at each other.
G quietly and silently goes back to her room, unnoticed by anyone.
S smiles and lies back down in his bed.
G gets back into bed. She touches her lips and smiles.
She settles into bed and goes back to sleep where the dream lies waiting for the next time to terrify her.
*********************the end******************************
Comments: I love romantic moments between S/G. I was hoping that S/G go away together on a business trip and have scenes like this one where they can openly talk to each other and be comfortable without any risk of someone coming into a room and taking their actions in the worst possible way. I enjoy their romantic chats on the phone but would be even sweet face-to-face like the rain sequence. (my best scene so far and the phone call at the end of that episode was the best and frequently watched by me when I have nothing better to do)
What did you think of my scene? Do you wish that a scene like this is seen in the serial?
S/G haven't discussed their night together in Kundanpur yet (not that I know of) but imagine what could be said between them when doing so. I have tried to include that night in my scene and please offer comments regarding my scene.
Luv Munira
What do you think of us writing a scene that we would all like to see in Sangam between S/G and posting it on this email. It would be interesting to see what people want to see.
How do you think Kaveri should discover S/G relationship and what would be said and how would she respond to it?
Good news!!! I have finished my reports!!!!!!!yeah!!!! I am now free, free, free!!!
I guess by my opening paragraph you have realised that I am over the moon that the reports have all been completed. finally!!!!
Anyway what I wanted to say was that when I was watching today's episode I imagined a slight difference and a following scene came into my head. Thought I would share it with you all. I hope you all enjoy it.
Ganga is sleeping in her room where she is dreaming about being in a house with white veils. She's looking around everywhere and wondering where everyone is.
Suddenly she trips over something and falls beside it.
Its a wrapped up body in white. She wonders who it could be when a sudden gust of wind flings the covering of the sheet off the face. It's Sagar!
G shouts 'Sagar!!"
She sits up in bed.
Why am I seeing Sagar dead?
G begins to feel restless and is unable to go back to sleep. She decides to go to S room to make sure he is there and safe.
She quietly goes out of her room, silently wishing that noone (especially buaji) doesn't come out of their room and see her going into S's room.
G reaches S's room.
I shouldn't be here. S could be asleep and anyone could see me and think wrongly about it. No I need to put my mind at rest.
She tentavely knocks on the door. Noone answers. She silently twists the door handle and slowly opens the door.
It is pitch-black. No light is visible except for the light of the moon which is showing through the opened window.
G is shocked to see the sight she encounters.
S is lying on the bed with a white sheet over his head. She gasps and with trepidation nears the bed. She very slowly moves her hand to move the sheet off his face.
S face is uncovered.
While her hand is still outstretched, S's hand comes out and grabs her hand and brings her down beside him.
He is barechested and smiling.
G tries to get up but S puts his leg over hers to prevent her going.
G: Sagar....let me up.
S: No... First tell me what you are doing here so late at night when you were the one who said to keep our relationship hidden from all. What made you come here? My love must have brought you here.
G: No Sagar. Let me up and I will tell you.
Sagar eases off her slightly and she tells him about her nightmare.
G: I felt that I had lost you. I couldn't bear to see you like that even in a dream. I had to come and see you were still here.
S: Ganga, you are just too much. You should understand this by now that I would never voluntarily leave you. I will always be with you, even in death.
G: I love you so much S that I can't bear even the thought if you not being with me. It scares me so much. I cannot live without you. I remember before the misunderstandings were cleared and I gained my love again, how I lived withoout you. It was so hard but even believing that you had betrayed me I still loved you. Now knowing that you do truly love me and hadn't betrayed me as I had believed it would be even worse. I would go on for my daughter Gudiya's sake but I would be a living corpse.
S: Ganga, don't talk about dying. I too cannot bear to live without you. I lived with your memories and your love all this time. I was broken when your mum told me of your death. I didn't want to live. I cannot bear to be apart from you for even 1 second.
They are both standing together now and embrace each other.
S smiles mischiveously.
S: How about some romance now?
G: Sagar you are unbelievable.
S: That I am and that too totally yours.
G suddenly realises where she is - in S room where he is barechested and alone.
G gets shy and embarassed.
S notices.
S: Ganga, its this trait of yours that has truly captivated me.
I fought this love so much. I was going to marry Kaveri but wherever I went, even when I was with Kaveri, I kept seeing you everywhere. You wouldn't leave my mind and thoughts no matter how much I tried. I admitted defeat and came back to kundanpur and found you being chased by madan and his men. What happened after was the most beautiful and most treasured of nights of my life.
G is shy when he mentions that night where they truly became one.S sits down on the bed and embraces her. He begins to kiss her on the forehead and moves slowly moves downwards. He kisses her beside her eyes, on her cheeks. G closes her eyes. She is lost in the feelings he is making her feel. S and G move slightly apart and look at each other. His eyes goes to her mouth and slowly begins to move closer. She too does the same. His head moves slightly to the side and finally their lips meet.
S holds her in his arms and tries to bring her closer when the clock chime is heard. They both spring apart.
G looks at S shyly and stands up when S stands up too adn grabs and twirls her back toward him. She falls onto his chest. Her hands on his sides and S is looking down on her head which is leaning on his bare chest.
G: Sagar. Please let me go. Someone will see.
S: There's noone here but me and you.
G: Sagar please!!
S: No. Say those 3 words that I like hearing from you.
G: Here? Now?
S: Yes right now.
She smiles and is shy. She quietly says what he is asking for.
G: I.....Love......You...Sagar!!!
She somehow gets loose and grabs the door handle.
S returns her words too and expresses his feelings.
They both smile at each other.
G quietly and silently goes back to her room, unnoticed by anyone.
S smiles and lies back down in his bed.
G gets back into bed. She touches her lips and smiles.
She settles into bed and goes back to sleep where the dream lies waiting for the next time to terrify her.
*********************the end******************************
Comments: I love romantic moments between S/G. I was hoping that S/G go away together on a business trip and have scenes like this one where they can openly talk to each other and be comfortable without any risk of someone coming into a room and taking their actions in the worst possible way. I enjoy their romantic chats on the phone but would be even sweet face-to-face like the rain sequence. (my best scene so far and the phone call at the end of that episode was the best and frequently watched by me when I have nothing better to do)
What did you think of my scene? Do you wish that a scene like this is seen in the serial?
S/G haven't discussed their night together in Kundanpur yet (not that I know of) but imagine what could be said between them when doing so. I have tried to include that night in my scene and please offer comments regarding my scene.
Luv Munira
What do you think of us writing a scene that we would all like to see in Sangam between S/G and posting it on this email. It would be interesting to see what people want to see.
How do you think Kaveri should discover S/G relationship and what would be said and how would she respond to it?
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