sanga FF - part 25 pg 33 (27/02/09) - Page 23

Originally posted by: KoolK@t

Man...u r gud!!! Dat was such a cute, emotional and romantic update! Keep it up!! Can't wait 4 da next part!😃👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Passionaire

Awesome!......I am seeing this thread 1st time🤪

Hi Ayesha,

I just read or should I say watched the new update for your ff and I would like to say that it was absolutely mind-blowing. I oved it. It was such a change and I enjoyed the way the story happened and we could see it rather than just reading about it. You are so talented in the wa you have done this. I cannot praise you enough. Please continue with the update soon. I want to know what will happen between S/G and whether G will convince S to wed Kaveri or not. I wonder what has happened to Gudiya.

You should make updates like this more often. You should maybe alternate with your updates of your ff, i.e. doing a written one first then do a video one next. It would be a great hit with everyone. Keep it up. Looking forward to reading the next installment.

Love Munira

Originally posted by: sweetangel2028

Hi Ayesha,

I just read or should I say watched the new update for your ff and I would like to say that it was absolutely mind-blowing. I oved it. It was such a change and I enjoyed the way the story happened and we could see it rather than just reading about it. You are so talented in the wa you have done this. I cannot praise you enough. Please continue with the update soon. I want to know what will happen between S/G and whether G will convince S to wed Kaveri or not. I wonder what has happened to Gudiya.

You should make updates like this more often. You should maybe alternate with your updates of your ff, i.e. doing a written one first then do a video one next. It would be a great hit with everyone. Keep it up. Looking forward to reading the next installment.

Love Munira

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

Just watched your update!

It was awesome!

It was all so cute, and the music matched every scene perfectly!

Wonder what's happened to Gudiya...nightmare, fever...???

Can't wait till the next update!

Hope you do a mixture of written and mp4 updates!

Keep up the awesome writing and videos!

xXx

Sunayna

= ]

Originally posted by: swani_saku

Waiting for the next epi dear 😆

Ganga looks at Saagar with owrry!

Ganga: Saagar, Gudiya ko kya hua?

Saagar: Pata nahin!! (Ganga starts to get worried!)

Ganga gets out the bed and runs out the room! Saagar waits a few seconds and follows!!! They both get to Gudiya's room!! They see her sweating!!! Ganga runs to her side!!

Gudiya: Mama!!!

Ganga: Gudiya beta, kya hua?? (She starts to sroke her hair! Saagar also goes and sits on the other side of Gudiya!)

Saagar: Gudiya beta, kya hai??

Gudiya: Mama!! (she is getting panicky!)

Ganga: Kuch nahin hoga beta! Mama yahan hai!! Batao kya hua!! (Gudiya stops panicking a bit!)

Saagar: Gudiya beta, Mama aur Saagar chachu ko batao kya hua!!!

Gudiya: Saagar chachu!! (Ganga and Saagar look worried!! Just then Shubodh and Shanta come running into the room!)

Shubodh: Saagar? Jhanvi? Kya hua?

Saagar: Pata nahin jiju, Gudiya kuch bol nahin rahe!!

Gudiya: Chachu? Mama!!

Ganga: Haa beta, kya hua batao!! (Gudiya slowly starts to walk up!! She sees Ganga and hugs her!) Beta kya hua?

Gudiya!! Mama!! (She starts to cry!!) Mama!!!

Ganga: Beta??

Saagar: Gudiya batao humko, kya hua??

Gudiya: Chachu, maine bohot bura sapna dikha tha!!!

Saagar: Kaunsa sapna?

Gudiya: Tumhara aur mama kya accident hogaya tha!!! (Ganga and Saagar are shocked! They both look towards Shubodh, who is looking at them worriedly!)

Ganga: Beta aisa kuch nahin hoga!!! Tumhari mama aur Saagar chachu kahin nahin jayege!! Yahan pe hai!!! (She hugs Gudiya, and a few tears run down her eyes! Saagar strokes Gudiyas back and looks at Ganga in awe!!!)

Shanta: Mein bhool hi gaye, gas par dudh rakha hua hai!! Mein dekh kar aati hoon!!! (She leaves! Shubodh faintly smiles as she leaves! Saagar then puts his hand on Ganga's and reassures her!!)

Ganga pulls Gudiya away from her!! She wipes her tears!!!

Ganga: Mama ki baat suno, yeh sab bura sapna tha, mama aur Saagar chachu ko kuch nahin hoga!!

Gudiya: Par mama, agar tum dono ko kuch hogaye, toh mujhko bhi nahi jeena hai!!

Ganga: Gudiya! Aise baat nahin karte, bte!!!

Saagar: Apni mama theek keh rahe hai!! Aisi baat kabhi maat karna!!! Abh good girl ban kar, tum shower lelo, aur phir mein, tum aur tumhari mama kahan baar jaate hai!! Theek hai?

Gudiya: Sach chachu??

Saagar: Haa!! (All three of them smile, while Shubodh looks at them three in awe!!)

Ganga: chalo, (to Gudiya!) Hum nahne chalte hai!!! (Them two leave the room!)

Saagar smiles and he gets up off the bed!!! Shubodh puts his hand on it!!

Shubodh: Sach Saagar, tum thin ko dekh kar acha lagta hai!! Gudiya tum dono ko kitna pyar karti hai!! Usko tumhare rishta ka koi aitraaz nahin hoga!! (Saagar faintly smiles!)

Saagar: Par intezaar karna parega jijaji! Agar voh hum dono ko saath nahin dekh payegi toh?

Shubodh: Saagar, abhi abhi maine Gudiya ka pyar dekha tumhare ke liye!!! Voh zaroor yeh rishta manzoor karegi!! Yeh toh sapna hai uska, ke tum aur Ganga saath saath unki zindagi mein raho!!! (Saagar faintly smiles!)

Saagar: (he puts his hand on Shubodh's arm!) Thanks jiju!! (Shubodh smiles!) Jiju mein fresh ho kar aata hoon!!!

Shubodh: Jee!! (and Saagar also leaves!)

Shubodh: (to himself!) Mujhko pata hai Saagar, tumko dar hai ke agar Gudiya ne tumhara aur Ganga ka rishta ko manzoor nahin kiya toh?? Par mera vishwas karo, voh bohot kush hogi yeh rishta ki baare mein jaan kar!! Agar tum aur Ganga saath nahin the, toh voh toot jati!! (and he smiles to himself!)

At the dining table, Ganga and Gudiya are already at the table!! Saagar arrives, and Shubodh also arrive, just finishing off a phone call!! Shanta comes in with some parathas! Saagar sits down next to Ganga!! Ganga is feeding Gudiya!! Just then Saagar starts to tease Ganga under the table!! He starts to stroke her leg under the table!!! Ganga realises this and moves her leg, but banging it on the table! Shanta looks up and wonders what this is!!

Shanta: Kya hua? (Ganga is shocked!)

Ganga: Kuch nahin!!! (she looks at Saagar angrily! And continues to feed Gudiya!)

Shubodh realises what wrong and starts to laugh to himself!! Shanta notices and is confused!

Shanta: Aapko kya hua? Akele akele kyun has rahe ho?

Shubodh: umm… Kuch nahin!! Kuch yaad aaya!

Shanta: Kya?

Shubodh: Kuch nahin begum!! Aap kahna kha lijiye, mein baad men bata tha hoon!! (Shanta looks at him with a confused look, and continues to eat!)

Saagar and Ganga look at each other as they realise that Shubodh was laughing at them!!! Saagar then tries again to tease Ganga, he starts to play footsie with her under the table!!! Ganga then steps on his foot!! Saagar bangs his leg against the table!!! Everyone looks up to him, while Ganga tries hard not to laugh!!

Shanta: Saagar kya hua? Tum theek to ho?

Saagar (in pain!) Jee didi!!! (and starts to hold his foot under the table!)

Shanta: Saagar tum yeh kya kar rahe ho??

Gudiya: chachu ko kuch per main laga!!

Shanta: Kya lagaa Saagar?

Saagar: Kuch nahin didi!! (He looks back at Ganga angrily)

They continue to look at each other, while Shubodh observes all this and tries not to laugh incase Shanta notices again!!

Shanta: Gudiya beta, tumne kha liya?

Gudiya: Jee!!

Shanta: Toh chalo, hum tayar ho kar aate hai!! (She smiles and her and Gudiya leave the table!)

Saagar is still holding on to his foot!!!

Saagar: Tum bhi na!! Yeh karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Ganga: Kya? Tum kyar se table ke niche mujhko cher (tease!) rahe ho! Aur phir mujhhe poochta hai ke maine hai kyun kiya!!! (she starts to angrily put food on her plate!)

Saagar: Mein toh bas mazak kar raha tha!! Aur tumne, haati ki tara tumne mera tang ko kuchal diya (like an elephant you squashed my foot!) (Ganga shocked!)

Ganga: Haathi ki tara??

Saagar: Jee ha!! (He angrily starts to take some food on his plate, he goes to take a paratha!!)

Ganga: Hmphhhhhh!!!

Saagar: Aghhhh!!! (Ganga and Shubodh are shocked! Ganga looks at Saagar!)

Ganga: Saagar kya hua?

Saagar: Aghh!! Meri ungli!! (Ganga notices him blowing onto his finger, she realises that he burnt it!)

Ganga: (She takes his finger!) Saagar tum bhi na!!! (She tends to the burn but putting it in her mouth! Saagar looks at her in awe!) Tum kya sambhal ke nahin kha sakhte, kahan tha aapka dhyan?

Saagar: Nahin, mera dhyan aap par tha!! (Ganga looks at him with awe! Saagar then takes his finger!!) Aur abh mujhko pata chala ke agar meri ungli jaal jaati toh tum kitni pareshaan hoti!! (He then starts to wave the finger in Ganga's face!) Meri ungli ko kuch nahin hua! (Ganga's face drops!)

Ganga: Tumahra metlab… keh tumne yeh sab….. (Saagar laughs and nods! Shubodh also starts to laugh!) Bhaiya tum bhi! Tum yeh bhudhu par has rahe ho!! (She starts to hit Saagar!)

Shubodh: Ganga, tumne yeh nahin dekha ke Saagar tumko kitna pyar karte hai!!

Ganga: Pyar?

Shubodh: Jee ha!! Usni yeh natak kiya tumko kareeb lane ko!! (Ganga looks at Saagar upsetly, while Saagar looks embarrassed!) Sach, tum dono ko dekh kar aisa lag ta hai ke iss duniya mein pyar kam nahin hai!! Tum dono ek dusre ko kitna pyar karte hai!! Ladte bhi, kitna pyar nazar aata hai!! (Saagar and Ganga both look at each other slyly and with embarrassment!) Abh mein sirf yeh chaata hoon, ke tumhari prem kahani uski manzeel tak poche!! (Saagar looks up at him and smiles!)

Saagar: Thank you jijaji! (Gudiya then comes running into the living room!)

Gudiya: Mama!! Chachu! Chale!!! (She stops at the table, in between Saagar and Ganga! She grabs hold of both of their hands!! Saagar and Ganga both get up! And all three of them leave! Gudiya waves bye to Shanta, who is near the door!)

In the car!!

Gudiya: chachu, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Saagar: Jahan meri Gudiya rani ko jaana hai?

Gudiya: mujhko beach par jaana hai, aur phir haathi par bes na hai! (Saagar looks at Gudiya confused!) Tumhara joke soon kar mujhe haathi kya yaad ayaa! (And she starts to giggle, Ganga looks at Saagar annoyedly, and he also starts to laugh!)

Saagar: Gudiya, kahan jaa na hai? Fair pe??

Gudiya: Sach?

Saagar: Haa!!

Gudiya: Haa! Fate mein kitna maza aayega!! Tum dono ke saath!! (Saagar and Ganga smile!)

Saagar starts to drive, they drive to the fair!! Throughout the trip, Saagar and Ganga keep staring looks at each other! They reach the fair, and the car comes to a stop!! They get out and go on a few of the rides and stuff!!! The whole time Ganga and Saagar were staring at each other!!! They then decide to get some ice creams!!

Gudiya: Bohot achi ride thin a mama?? (Noone answers! She wonders what happened, she looks back and sees Saagar and Ganga looking at each other and smiling!) Ohh foo, yeh dono bhi nah! (She hits her head gently with her hand!) Chalo thoda maza karte hai!! (She goes towards Ganga and starts to pull on her sari!) Mama!! (Ganga snaps out of it, so does Saagar, they both realise what they just did!)

Ganga: Ha beta! Kya baat hai? (Looking embarrassed)

Gudiya: Mein tumse kitni der se baat kar rahe hoon aur aap dhyan nahin deh rahe hai!! Aapko kya hua? (Ganga looks embarrassingly at Saagar, Gudiya giggles to herself!)

Ganga: Erm…voh… umm…. (She starts to hestitate and looks at Saagar with a plea face hoping he would help her out!)

Saagar: Um… Voh…

Gudiya: Ohh foo!! Chodiye, chalo ice cream khate hai!!

Saagar: (relieved!) Chalo!! (They start to walk! They get closer to the ice cream stall, so Gudiya runs to pick her ice cream!! Saagar looks at Ganga!!) Tumko kaunsi ice cream khani hai??

Ganga: (irritated!) Mujhko nahin khani!! Tum jao!!

Saagar: Kyun?

Ganga: Kya kyun? Tumhari vajase Gudiya ko sab kuch pata chal gaya hota!!

Saagar: Meri vajase? Maine kya kiya? Tumhari nazar hi toh hai, jo mujh par thi!!

Ganga: Meri nazar? Tum kitni der se mujhko dekh rahe the!!

Saagar: Madam! Mein tumko nahin, voh mini-skirt vali ladki ko dekh raha tha?

Ganga: Mini-skirt vali ladki? How dare you!! (they continue to bicker, Gudiya sees this and again puts her head to her hands!! She decides to really play with them!! She starts calling Saagar! Saagar – Ganga hear this and start to act normal again, just incase Gudiya questions them! Saagar and Ganga both walk over to Gudiya!! Guidya stands there with folded hands!)

Saagar: Kya hua? (looking puzzled and concerned! Gudiya doesn't reply! He looks at Ganga confused!) Gudiya beta?? Kya hua??

Gudiya: Mujhko beta mat kaho!! (Saagar is shocked!) Tumko meri bilkul parva nahin hai!!! Mera papa mujhse kitna pyar karte the, aur aap mujhko itna pyar nahin karte!! (Saagar and Ganga are shocked!)

Saagar: Gudiya!! Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? (Ganga goes over to Gudiya and bends down on her knees to come to her level!)

Ganga: Gudiya, chachu se aise baat karte hai?

Gudiya: Chachu? Voh chachu hone ke liyak bhi nahin hai? (everyone shocked!)

Ganga: Gudiya!!! Aise nahin kehte!!! (Ganga starts to feel hurt! Saagar cannot take this any more, so he starts to walk away!!)

That was part 23!! Why is Gudiya behaving like this? How will Saagar - Ganga react? What will they do?? Will they have to separate for Gudiya's sake?? Keep reading to find out!!

This was a very long part to make up for the time i havent updated!!! Please do leave your comments!!

it was mindblowing wat can i say superb excellent i really like it do continue soon yarr.