Written Update for Oct. 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I don't usually do this, but my Anthropology Proffessor is boring me with his lecture right now.....
My hindi isn't that great, so please do excuse my mistakes.


Ganga slowly turns around, she faces Nattu, who is standing there with a large stick. Ganga becomes furious.
"No one can keep me form meeting MY SAGAR, not you or your Madan!"
She picks up a rock, and is ready to hurl it at Nattu...
"No, Ganga, nahi!" Nattu discards the stick down and vehemently states- "I will not keep you from your Sagar , this Madan, kisi ki apna nahi hai! For my one mistake, he punished me and threw all my years of subsidence down the drain! Go Ganga...BHAG!"
Ganga gives Nattu a gratifying look, and runs.
*
Meanwhile, at home, Bua is crying, wailing, hitting her forehead with the palm of her head "Barbad kar diya, izat mite me miladya......" (Witch)
She's yelling at Savitry..."If not for yourself, tell the village members where you have hidden your damn choori!!"
Savitry just ignores what they are saying, her yes are glazed over, teary, but she does not break her resovle
*
Ganga is still running through the heavy village brush. She starts taking very heavy breaths, because she is very very tired.
She decided to lean against a tree, and then Madan's jeep pulls up right in front of the tree, she crouches down very low.
Madan gets out of his jeep, and walks towards the tree, Ganga crouches down lower and moves away to the left, Madan also shifts his gaze to the left.
Ganga holds her breath.
(I hold my breath)
Madan walks back to his jeep.
At the tree, Ganga slowly gets up a little to see that Madan has reached his jeep.
Madan looks at his rear view mirror, and sees Ganga's head (Did you have to get up from your crouch women!)
Madan drives away.....
Ganga Stands up, and takes a deep breath. The camera shifts to a show Madan's shoe, and Ganga slowly looking at it, and her gaze gradually shifts up.
Madan found her.
He takes slow steps towards her. Ganga is shocked and stands there (Stupid women, this is when you run)
Then her brains start to work, and she runs....
"GANGA!!! GANGA RUK!"
Madan chases her.
Ganga runs through the river bank, Madan tries to follow her in his jeep, but he gets stuck.
*
It's night time now, the search is still going on, Ganga comes to an abandoned house type thing, she breaks the window with a rock, and crawls in. Her breath is heaving, shes mighty tired....
Madan and his jeep approaches.
Ganga slowly peeks over to see them right in front of her window, her eyes look frightened, but then revealed when the Jeep drives away.
She closes her eyes, and collapses against the wall...
"Rasta dhikao baba...." (she says that a few times)
Ganga looks up, and shes the shadow of a man approaching her, she becomes instantly frightened, music plays....the man is approaching...Ganga is freaking out, (I was freaking out)....
Then.

LIGHTNING!!!

And......SAGAR!!!!! (Yay!)

Time stops...they stare at each other, they slowly approach each other....they stare at each other some more......Sagar brings his hand to Ganga's and entwines his fingers with hers.
Then.....that damn jeep pulls up and ruins the moment...Sagar runs to the window, runs back to Ganga, takes her hand, and runs to another room in the house.
Madan and his crew decides to check the house, and Ganga and Sagar run to different parts of the house to avoid them.
All the while, Sagar makes sure to tuck Ganga securly in his embrace, and Ganga just cannot take her eyes away from Sagar.
Mandan and his crew leave.....
Sagar and Ganga get the "baho ki darmia music" they stare at each other, almost kiss, they both slowly sit on the floor and hug (yay)
*
In another place, (god knows where) Kaveri is sitting down with a glass of milk in front of her, when all of a sudden a cat (where the hell the cat came from, i don't know) comes and knocks her milk over. . Kaveri jumps.
Her friends walks in, and asks her what happened "Preeti (or wut ever her name was) look..the cat knocked over my milk, I don't have a good feeling about this..."
Her friend tells her she's worrying to much...
"I have a right to worry, I wonder why Sagar has not called me, It has been three day's since the letter, I wrote all of my feelings in that letter, and he still has not called me Preeti!"
Preeti tells Kaveri to call Sagar.
(She was saying other things to, about how not to blame sagar or whatever, but i really didn't care, i was worried about Sagar and Ganga.....)
So Kaveri called.....
*
Sagar's phone is ringing, and the camera shifts from the phone, to some clothes......
*
Kaveri decided that since Sagar does not pick up, she will call tomarrow.
*
The camera keeps moving from the clothes to .......

Sagar and Ganga, wrapped in each others arms, in bed...without clothes on.

The End!



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harleen grewal thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the great update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow wat a episode finally ganga n sagar r to gether 👏 👏 👏 by the way thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thxxx 4 the wonderful update....2days epi was superbbb 😊 👏
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wow..can't wait to watch sagar and ganga.. 😆 😆 you are in college while writing the update. Thanks a lot! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG NO WAYYYY...the ending was jsut tooo much 😆

thanks for the update...ur really good u should do it more often...of course Marthika is really good too.and i really love the big font...it actually makes me wanna read..LOL


thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hehe ..monicaa ..

Thnx..Did you ask the permission from Misha(Charming*Angel)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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whoa! That was a bit fast...we finally found each other so let's make love! Interesting...indian dramas are promoting this sort of thing..Anyhow I am glad that they finally found each other.

let me make a prediction...ganga's gonna be pregnant in a few weeks as she slept with Saagar once and he is going to end up marrying kaveri and ganga wont tell him blah blah same old same old..i hope they do something new!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx for the wonderful update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome update, thanks alot!!! 😊 Finally, Sagar found Ganga!!! 😊 😛

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