Pyar Ka Safar FF Part 4 Pg5 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hi Annie.... Sweetie...Iam very sorry.....

If my comments hurt u....
What was i thinking......this was ur 1st FF....n all i cud do was complain...
Sooo sorry sweetie....hope u forgive me....
Okay...now lets change the topic....lol
Soo.....u needed more views n comments...
Well look no further...Iam here sweetie...
Gr8 update...
Nice name....
Perfect for their story...
It is a lamba safar haina...
I think even if Ganga is modern....that does not mean that she has no manners......
I mean if sum1 helps her...she shud thank him....
I hav lived abraod n i think the "modern" girls r not this way...yes they r more free n hav an open mind....but they do not lack manners...atleast i think so.....
So how abt my vies...need more comments then just tell!
Bye sweetie..
Take Care..
XxX

thnx Ash next part will be up by tomorrow or Saturday.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
hey!! it's too good...loved it...and i agree with swanthina...probably ganga will scold sagar...anyway keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
I will update part 2 2day.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey annie...how r u?
nice update..
gr8 job..
keep it up..
ganga in jeans...so cuteee...lol
do continue..
i think ganga will thank sagar..and be friend with him..lol
tc
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zunni-

hey annie...how r u?

nice update..
gr8 job..
keep it up..
ganga in jeans...so cuteee...lol
do continue..
i think ganga will thank sagar..and be friend with him..lol
tc
bye

me too i think the same that G will be S friend and thnx for liking it sweetie.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Part 2
Recap: The goon grabs G and G asks to let go but he does not let go and G shouts help help Just then our hero none other than S comes to saver from the goons and S beats up the goons and then the goons run away from there.
G: Thank you so much for saving my life.
S: Tum Kyun Mujhe thank you khai khar Sharmindah khar rahi ho
G: Jaante ho agar tume sai wah pe nahin atte toh pata nahin kya ho jah tha.
G: again says thnx.
While G is about to leave S stops and asks what is your name?
G: mer naam Ganga hai , aur Tumhara kya naam hai
S: I am Saagar
S: nice name
G: acha S main Chalti hoon Main tumse baad main mil thi hoon main abb gahr jah rahi hoon?
S: Gana Kya main tumhe Chor dhoon
G: nhain iss ki koi zaroorat nahin hai mare pass car hai.
S: acha teek hai
G: says byex tc
S: u tc too.
G: sits in the car and go home . G arrives home and goes insid and decides to have a shower. When G comes out of the bathrrom with robe on her hair is all wet she picks up the phone and it's Sanju:
Sanju: hi kya kar rahi ho
Ganga: Kuch khaas nahin yaar bahi shower se nik li hoon
Sanju: ajj raat kya program hai
G: nothing special kyun
Sanju: main soch rahi thi kyun nahin main aur tum kahi raat movie dekhne chalte hai
what say babes
G: Sanju ides burah nahin
Sanju: phir teek hai main tumhare Ghar 7:30pm poonch jaon gi.
G: teek phir Shaam koi mil thi hai. aur waise Sanju hum loog konsa film dekh ge
Sanju: we are going to see Kismaat Konnection.
G: ok
G hangs up the phone and opens her wardrobe and decides what to wear.
G: ajj to main Shalwaar kameez hi pain no gi.
She goes into the bathroom and Changes into a nic red and gold Shar waa kammeez. comes out and go nears her dressing table and wears make-up and chudiyan and brushes her hair and leaves it open.
When G is ready she takes her cell and her duptta goes down and sits in the living room and waits for Sanju to come.
The door bell rings g opens the door and it's Sanju.
Sanju: Chale
G: haan Chalte
Sanju and G go into Sanju's car to the Cinmea They reach the Cinema and go and get the tickets for Kismaat Konnection. G says to Sanju i will be back.
Sanju: says Jaldi ana
G: yah i will
G is about to go to the washroom when Someone says from behind excuse me
G swings hair and turns back and it's none other than S.
S: G Tum yahan what a pleasnt surprise.
G: S: tum yahan
S: lekin tum yahan kya kar rahi ho woh bhi akele.
G: main akele nahin hoon meri friend bhi meri saath ayhi hai.
G: who actually hum dohon yahan pain Kismaat konnection dik nai ayi hai.
S: acha aur waise
S: just looks at G and can't stop staring at her he also says you are looking so pretty and very beautiful.
G thnx for the compliment.
S: waise main Tumse ek baath pooch na bhool gya tha.
S: kya tum mujhe se Dosti karo gi.
G: haan main tumse Dosti Karoon gi lekin meri ek sharat hai
S: Kaisi Sharat
G: hum dono ek dhoos re se koi baath nahin chupain je muskil gahri main hum mainsha ek doosre ka saath dein ge.
G: Manzoor
S: Manzoor
S: ajj se hum ek dhoosre ke achi dooste hai.
G: haan Sagar Why don't u join us for the film.
S: Ganga actually mujhe kuch kaam hai
G: nahin S main kuch nahin Sona Chati hoo main abhi tumhara ticket lekar athi hoon.
S: acha if you insit then i will come with you.
S,G go to Sanju who has been waiting fro them.
that's the end of this part what do you think is going to happen next
leave your view and comments sorry guys for my bad hindi.
Edited by Chait-Jenn-4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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reserved..
1st!
Hi Annie..
Hows u?..
Very umm...frndly part..
Too cute lol...
Its moving fast...glad no misunderstandings...
Gr8 thoughts...
Ganga is looking nice....in my imagination n ur description..
Nice movie to watch...
Defo. suits them...akhir Kismat ki hi wajah se aaj donoi mil paaye hain..what say?..
Gr8 they r frndz...
Very sweet Shart (dont know the spelling)...
Nice dialogues...
Wanna know what happens...
Hav a feeling the movie experience is gonna be fab...
What else can i say?...
Really nice...
Keep it up...
Gud luck wid the next part...
TC....u too...
xxxx
Luv *Ash*
Edited by styleislife13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: styleislife13

reserved..

1st!
Hi Annie..
Hows u?..
Very umm...frndly part..
Too cute lol...
Its moving fast...glad no misunderstandings...
Gr8 thoughts...
Ganga is looking nice....in my imagination n ur description..
Nice movie to watch...
Defo. suits them...akhir Kismat ki hi wajah se aaj donoi mil paaye hain..what say?..
Gr8 they r frndz...
Very sweet Shart (dont know the spelling)...
Nice dialogues...
Wanna know what happens...
Hav a feeling the movie experience is gonna be fab...
What else can i say?...
Really nice...
Keep it up...
Gud luck wid the next part...
TC....u too...
xxxx
Luv *Ash*


thnx Ash thnx for the copliment u tc too thnx for liking this part the next part will up on Tuesday.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
hey annie...how u doing?
gr8 job..
yay..i was right...they became friend..lol😆
ganga wearing bangles and going to watch a movie...thats funny..srry...hope u dunt mind..
very sweet update..
keep it up..
do continue...
i cant guess wats gonna happen next..lol
tc
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Gr8 job Annie ..................Keep it up
Really Cute update sweetie
Awaiting next one ...........

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