Pyar Ka Safar FF Part 4 Pg5 UPDATED

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1
G get's up and goes into the bathroom and has a shower. And then comes back and Changes into a nice Kurti and Jeans when G is ready her friend Sanju phones.
Sanju: hi G hows u?
G: i am fine hows u?
Sanju: i am fine too G when are you reaching college?
G: in about 5 minutes.
Sanju: ok i will cu then tc bye
G: ok byexx tc
They both hang up from the phone. And then G takes her mobile, books and then locks the door and then goes to the car and drives to college.
when G aririves at college she get's out fom the car and phones Sanju and asks where she is.
G: hi Sanju where are u ?
Sanju: G i am waiting for u by th canteen because we have our Phsycology class so hurry up.
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G: haan Baba i am coming
G: sees Sanju and the goes to her Sanju says shall we go to our class.
Sanju and G both go to their Physcology class and sit down on the Chair
when the Teacher comes everyone get's up and says good morning Sir.
The Teacher says Sit down Student please.
Everyone sits down when G is listining a boy from behing flicks a note to G an on th note it says will u meet me in the canteen after class.
(a boy is messing with G)
G wonders who could have played this prank.
when the class is over Sanju goes to G and asks what happened?
G: shows the note to Sanju and Sanju reads the note.
S: but G who could have played a prank on you?
G: i really don't know.
When the College is over while G is walking to the Canteen she could feel that someone is following her.
She turns around and sees no one is there.
As G is about to leave the canteen. The boy comes and with them there
4 boys andy they say to hi beautiful hows u?
The boy who wrote the note try to grabs her hand and try to kiss her
but G slaps the boy.
G: says leave me
Goons : not so easily
G try's to escape form the boys but the boys catch her again.
G: screams help help.
G is about to get rape but she doesn't because our hero S comes on
time and saves her and fights with the goons.
S beats the goons then the goons get so scared and run away.
What do you think is going to happen next.
please leave your comments and view.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow...............Wonderful update dear......keep it up 😆
Ganga in Jeans ..........Soooooo cute
Sagar fought with the people who teased Ganga ...............Of course Sagar is for Ganga and viceversa .
I think as Ganga is the Modern girl here wearing Jeans etc., she won't Thank Sagar instead she might scold Sagar saying that he has done all these to show his heroism in front of her ..............How is my prediction ?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi....
Nice update....
I just hav one problem.......
I dont think u shud write abt sensitive stuff like a rape in college....
Thats not acceptable wid me....if u just didnt add that part it wud be okay.....sorry for the lame complaint...
Otherwise it was okay...
Agree wid SWANI...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oops!! psychology or physcology.....or u gonna invent new subject....lol

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I was about to say same too !!
Ganga in Jeans ..........Soooooo cute
Sagar fought with the people who teased Ganga ...............Of course Sagar is for Ganga and viceversa .
I think as Ganga is the Modern girl here wearing Jeans etc., she won't Thank Sagar instead she might scold Sagar saying that he has done all these to show his heroism in front of her[/quote]
continue till forum closes.....really loved it!! new concept new idea..hmmmm

Edited by Passionaire - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i need more comments and i will surely continue soon.
Chait-Jenn-4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swani_saku

Wow...............Wonderful update dear......keep it up 😆
Ganga in Jeans ..........Soooooo cute
Sagar fought with the people who teased Ganga ...............Of course Sagar is for Ganga and viceversa .
I think as Ganga is the Modern girl here wearing Jeans etc., she won't Thank Sagar instead she might scold Sagar saying that he has done all these to show his heroism in front of her ..............How is my prediction ?

Thnx Swanitha for like liking the next part will be up soon just need more comments.
i am glad u liked it. you are right will edit the rape part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Passionaire

oops!! psychology or physcology.....or u gonna invent new subject....lol

[quote]
I was about to say same too !!
Ganga in Jeans ..........Soooooo cute
Sagar fought with the people who teased Ganga ...............Of course Sagar is for Ganga and viceversa .
I think as Ganga is the Modern girl here wearing Jeans etc., she won't Thank Sagar instead she might scold Sagar saying that he has done all these to show his heroism in front of her[/quote]
continue till forum closes.....really loved it!! new concept new idea..hmmmm

Thnx Passionare i will continue 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hi....

Nice update....
I just hav one problem.......
I dont think u shud write abt sensitive stuff like a rape in college....
Thats not acceptable wid me....if u just didnt add that part it wud be okay.....sorry for the lame complaint...
Otherwise it was okay...
Agree wid SWANI...

Thnx Ash for the lovely comments i will continue thnx once again. 😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i need more comments ans views.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Annie.... Sweetie...Iam very sorry.....
If my comments hurt u....
What was i thinking......this was ur 1st FF....n all i cud do was complain...
Sooo sorry sweetie....hope u forgive me....
Okay...now lets change the topic....lol
Soo.....u needed more views n comments...
Well look no further...Iam here sweetie...
Gr8 update...
Nice name....
Perfect for their story...
It is a lamba safar haina...
I think even if Ganga is modern....that does not mean that she has no manners......
I mean if sum1 helps her...she shud thank him....
I hav lived abraod n i think the "modern" girls r not this way...yes they r more free n hav an open mind....but they do not lack manners...atleast i think so.....
So how abt my vies...need more comments then just tell!
Bye sweetie..
Take Care..
XxX

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