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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you everyone 😃

Part 6:
Manya looked at Akash and rolled her eyes.
M: Don't worry, Akash. Main tumhe haath dhoon gi bhi nahin!
A: Acha?
He reached over and grabbed Manya's hand, laughing. He raised his eyebrows.
A: Nain, nain, tum tho mujhe haath dho gi nain, right?
M: Akash! Chodo!
Manya shrieked as the door opened and a woman stepped out. She was wearing a silk sari, covered with sequins, and her hair tied in a bun.
M: MA!!
MM: Kaun hai, Manya?
A: Oh..uh, Aunty, main Akash..Mom ne kaha tha aapko invitation dhaina hai...
MM: Haan, haan, mujhe phone aya tha. Thank you, beta. Uh..tumne Manya ka haath kyun--?
Akash let go of MAnya's hand as if it were on fire. Manya smirked as he waved and raced to the car. MM went back in the house. Manya watched Akash enter his car. He looked at her one last time. She stuck out her tongue at him and laughed.
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Akash, wearing a tux, stepped down the stairs. The girls praised him and he smiled.
MR: Kyun, beta, bahut tareefein ho rahi hain?
A: Kya karun, Dad? MAin hoon hi aisa!
They laughed. Akash excused himself and went out to the yard for peace and quiet. The party music was loud, booming over the whole yard. Suddenly, the wind picked up. Akash rubbed his eyes, and just as he looked up, he gasped.
Manya was walking in the party, wearing a beautiful red gown. Her hair was curled and tied up. Akash stared as the iamge of Cinderella covered MAnya's looks. Akash was still confused when Manya crossed him. He closed his eyes as her arm brushed past his.
A: Manya!
Manya stopped. She turned around and smiled.
M: Hi, Akash.
A: Tho tum--tum apne culture ko bhool gayee?
Manya rolled her eyes.
M: I'm not stripping, Akash.
Akash smirked at the word "stripping." Manya walked inside the party, and Akash followed.
A: So? Ghar kaisa laga?
M: Kyun? Main yahan rehne ayee hoon?
A: You wish!
Manya turned and looked at him.
M: Wish what, Akash? Ki main iss ghar mein rahun? Well, excuse me, lakein iss chuth ke neeche rehne ka mathlab tumhe jailna bhi hoga..and I'd rather NOT do that!
A: OH pleaseeee! Tum kismat vaali hogi agar tum MERE saath reh sako!
M: Yeah right! I bet you're a slob. Kapde idhar udhar, jhooti yahan wahan--
A: Oh, so you're the neat freak? (Mimicking Manya's voice) Akash, jhoote utao! Akash, kapde hang karo!
M: And you SHOULD do that! Kyun nahin karoge?
A: You can't force me! Tum khud utta ke rakh dhaina!
M: Acha? Mathlab kaam main karun aur mazzai tum looto?
A: Nain, jab main job se ghar aoon ga, tho tumhe gumane phirane le ker jaoon ga na!
M: Haan, haan, yeh teek hai! Main din bar tumhare kapde utaoon, kaam karun, and at the end you just take me out?
Akash folded his hands and bowed his head.
A: Acha, baba, acha! Apne kaam main khud karun ga, tumhe koiii kaam nahin kerna paray ga, and PLUS main tumhe iss poori dunya ki sair karaoon ga! Khush?
Manya stared at him. Akash stopped talking and stared back.
A: Woh, uh..
Manya took a step back.
M: Uh, main..
MR's voice suddenly boomed.
MR: Ladies and gentlemen! Please give a hand to the best day of my life! Aaj mujhe mera purana aur sabse acha dost mila hai!
Manya watched her father walk up on stage. Manya smiled seeing the happiness of her Dad's face.
A: Itni khush kyun ho rahi ho?
M: Because mujhe apne Papa ki khushi dekh ker acha laga. Not ki tum samjo ge iss baat ko..
A: MAthlab?
M: Mathlab, yeh, Akash Rathod, that you only care about yourself!
A: Acha?
M: Yeaa! Itne selfish insaan ho tum, girre hue, gatiya kisam ke-
A: Ayeee! Main kya kiye tumhare saath? Tumhari izat per haath daale?
M: No, no, no, akash! Tum aisa ker hii nain sakte!
A: Acha?
He leapt at her, making her shriek. Manya ran outside, laughing.
M: Akash!
A: Nain, nain, tumhe tho main dikha ker hii rahun ga ab!
He laughed and grabbed her waist.
M: AKASH! Chodoo!!
They were in the back yard, where nobody was there. Akash laughed and he fell backwards, Manya on top of him. Manya stared at him as the wind picked up and flowers flew around them. Akash stared back, a confused look on his face.
From inside, the song came on:
Ek Dooje Ke dil mein apna ghar banana haii..
Teri khatir sabhi hadun se guzar jaana hai...
Tujhse lipta rahun ga banker...
Kangana tera...
Chand Taroon Mein Nazar Aye Chehra Tera...

Akash looked over Manya's shoulder and saw the moon high in the sky, covered with stars. They stood up. Manya shyly began to walk away.
Akash grabbed her wrist. Manya turned and looked at him. He pointed to a beautiful place in the backyard. It was a cute little circle decorated with flowers and hearts. Manya laughed as Akash raced into the circle. He held Manya's hand and they began to sway around. He spun her around so her back leaned on his chest, and he brought her around again.
Pyar Mein hum sanam yeh saara jag bhula dhein ge..
Mer ke bhi vaade chahtun ke..hum nibha dhein ge...
Jaan se bhi mujhe hai pyara...
Sajna Mera...
Chand Taroon Mein Nazar Aye Chehra Tera...

Manya leaned down in Akash's arms. He stared into her eyes, shocked. Suddenly, he whispered,
A: Cinderella??



Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
wow im first one to comment on this fab part 😃 !
loved the part!
continue sooooooon asap! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing! now thats like my cutie akash!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow what happend to Akash hee called cindrella soo amazingggg partt plz contuiedd soon part 7
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you 😉

Part 7:
Manya's heart beat faster. She stood straight up and staredi into his eyes. Thoughts rushed her mind.
Main kaise kahun ki main hi Cinderella hoon? Lakein...mujhe keh dhaina chahiye...I mean, abhi woh almost mera dost hi hai na? He won't make fun of me--
Manya's thoughts were cut off with a whistle. She spun around and saw Karan, laughing.
K: Lo! Behnji aapne aanchal ko chod ayee!
Om came up and laughed.
Om: Haan, yaar! Yeh kahin kisi ka jadoo tho nahin? Hamari behn ko..PYAR ho gaya hai kya?
Tears struck Manya's eyes angrily. She turned to see Akash. He looked like he was about to burst out laughing. Manya glared at him and raced away.
She ran out of his house and sat down on a bench in a nearby park.
M: MAin jaanti thi! Yeh sab ek jaise hain!
She hugged herself in the chilly cold weather. She was shivering and crying. Suddenly, she felt something warm cover her shoulders. She looked up at her shoulders and a saw a black coat. She looked up and saw Akash sit down next to her.
M: JAo yahan se, Akash!
A: They were just joking, Manya. Come on!
M: Joking? Kuch jokes kisi ki feelings hurt ker sakti hain!
Akash bent close to her.
A: Per jo Manya pehle din SZ mein kadam rakh ker ayee thi, woh in jokes se pareshan nain hoti thi.
Manya looked up into his eyes.
A: Woh Manya apne fears ka saamna kerna jaanti thi.
M: Mujh koi fear nahin hai, Akash. But I don't like being made fun of!
A: Kaun sa fun, Manya? Just close your eyes once, Manya. Aur apne aapko dekho. Jis roop mein tum khud ko pao gi na, wohi roop tumhara dunya apnaye gi.
Manya looked at him. She closed her eyes. An image of herself in a churidaar dress walking flashed in her eyes. But suddenly, she flinched, her eyes still closed, as Akash's face flashed in her eyes. She opened them quickly.
A: Kya dekha?
M: HuH? Oh..woh..uh..
Akash laughed.
A: Vaise Manya, you can't blame them.
M: Mathlab?
A: Tum un kapdu mein behnji type tho lagti ho--
Manya opened her mouth in shock and slapped his shoulder.
M: AKASH!!!
Akash laughed and stood up.
A: Come on, Manya. Vappas chalte hain.
M: No, Akash. MAin ghar ja rahi hoon..
A: Come on, don't be soo offended, yaar!
M: I'm NOT offended, Akash. But I'm tired.
A: Fine. Main tumhe chod aata hoon..
Manya sat in the car with him, thanking God secretly. Did he forget their whole Cinderella conversation?
Akash stopped the car in front of MAnya's house.
A: Get off, loser.
M: Oh pleassee!
She laughed and got out of the car. But Akash also came out. He turned up the radio of his car and smiled flirtatiously.
A: Excuse me, ma'am, but I believe hamara dance adoora reh gaya tha?
Manya rolled her eyes. She went upto him, her hands behind her back. She whispered in his ears,
M: Main sone ja rahi hoon, Akash. But you can dream all about it in YOUR sleep...
She walked inside the house. She turned to see Akash peer down at her, a teasing pout on his face.
A: Yaad rakhun ga, Manya Sharma! How you DITCHED me!
M: Tum meri HAR baat yaad rakho ge, Akash Rathod!
She laughed and shut the door. From inside, Manya leaned against the door, laughing. Akash kicked the ground outside, shaking his head with a smile on his face.
Kuch To Hua Hai...Kuch To Hua Hai...Kuch Ho Gaya Hai...
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Manya was about to pick up a pair of jeans in the morning before college, but let them go when she remembered Akash's words. Jis roop mein tum khudko pao gi na, wohi roop dunya apnaye gi...
She smiled and picked up her regular churidaar dress and left her house for college.
She entered the college and heard Karan whistle.
K: Return of the behnji!!
Manya sighed angrily. She remembered what Akash told her and went upto him.
M: Jab koi ladki tumhe apni jhooti ke laik bhi nahin samje gi, tho tum yuhin bakvaas karo ge, Karan.
K: Excuse me?
Manya glared at him.
M: Tum mujhe behnji kaho yaan nokerani, you can't affect the girl who thinks NOTHING of you!
She was walking away when Karan's words stopped her.
K: OF course, Manya. Because you're too busy thinking about AKASH!
Manya spun around, furious.
M: Kya kaha tumne?
K: Kyun? Burra laga? Per sach hii tho hai! Humein sabko apni behnji vaali side dikha ker, Akash ke saath gown pehn ker, dance karte hue tumhe apna culture yaad ni aya?!
Manya glared at him. She walked upto him, ready to slap him. But before she did, a hand slapped across KAran's cheek. She looked up, shocked, and saw Akash's angry face staring at Karan.
A: Dobara apni bakvas apne paas hi rakho tho acha hoga!
Manya, embarrassed, stepped back and raced into the college garden. She sat on a bench, angry and ready to cry.
A: Manya!
K: Haan, haan jao uske peeche! Mera mooh bandh kerva ker kya hoga?
A: Shut up, Karan! MAnya SIRF AUR SIRF meri dost hai! I don't think of her anyyy other way!
Manya closed her eyes at this. Acha hua maine Akash ko apna Cinderella hone ka nahin bataya...
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Akash sighed angrily and turned around, looking for Manya.
A: Manya?
Kahan gayee? I shouldn't bother her about asking her if she's Cinderella. Woh nahin ho sakti Cinderella; verna woh itna pareshan na hoti KAran ki baatein sunkar..
He spotted Manya sitting on a bench, tugging her dupatta angrily.
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A: Manya?
Manya looked up.
A: Come on, yaar, itna pareshan hone ki kya zarurat hai?
M: I hate it jab mujhe koi yoon--
A: Come on, yaar. Akhir agar unnai kuch ghalat kaha...tho mere saath hi kaha na...!
M: HUH?
A: Ladkiyan MERTI hain iss opportunity ke liye ki unka naam mere naam ke saath joda jaye. Aur tum ho ki--
M: Well, if you haven't noticed, I'm not lke those girls!
A: Trust me, I noticed.
Manya glared at him.
M: MATHLAB?
A: MATHLAB..saaf hai...I noticed. That's it.
Manya stood up, her hands on her hips. Her foot suddenly twisted, and she fell in Akash's lap. Akash's hands, out of instinct, covered her waist. Her dupatta flew on his face. He stared at her through the thin cloth, and she stared back...



Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowow coolllll thtt reallyyyyyyyyyy amazinggggggg part7 plzzzzz put more partsss too i loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz put more parts plzzzz i luv ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks 😊

Part 8:
Manya picked her dupatta off Akash's face. He closed his eyes as the dupatta slipped off his face, and then opened them again. Manya stood up, shyly, and began to walk away.
A: Manya!
Manya stopped, her heart racing. She turned and stared into Akash's eyes.
A: Tumhari..payal..
He picked up Manya's anklet from the ground and held it up. Manya laughed a bit and took it from his hands. As their hands touched, they stared into each other's eyes.
Kuch To Hua Hai...Kuch Ho Gaya Hai...
Manya walked away, smiling shyly. From inside the building, she turned around and looked at Akash. He was still looking at her. When he realized she had seen him, he laughed to himself and turned around quickly, his hands on the back of his head. Manya smiled...
Dho Chaar Din Se Lagta Hai Jaise...Sab Kuch Alag Hai...Sab Kuch Naya Hai...
Manya sat down in class as Akash entered and sat down too. Manya stared straight ahead at Khanna Sir, but Akash kept stealing glances, smiling to himself.
KS: Okay, class! Today is our trip! Hum sabb beach pe jayein ge!
The class cheered and followed Khanna Sir. The beach wasn't far from the college; in fact it was only a few steps away. Manya stepped into the sand, feeling the wind in her hair.
Akash came up behind her. The moment he reached, the wind flew MAnya's hair back and it hit Akash's face. He closed his eyes...
Manya turned around.
M: Oh! I'm sorry, Akash--
A: Nain, its okay...
Manya smiled. She looked at a cart and grabbed Akash's arm.
M: Akash! Nareal paani!!
A: WHAT?
M: Haan! Chalo na!
A: No way, Manya! Itni germs...hum kisi restaurant se laite hain, yaan--
Manya frowned.
M: Teek hai. Main khud chali jaati hoon. AKELI!
Akash groaned and followed Manya. She laughed.
A: Manyaaaaa!! Yeh sand bahut thick hai...I'm about to fall down...aisa kerte hain hum kahin ja ker baithe hain--
Manya rolled her eyes. She stopped and grabbed his wrist. He looked at her as she tied her dupatta's end to his wrist.
M: Hmm?
A: Yeh kya?
M: Ab tum mere saath raho ge! Kahiinn nahin girro ge!
Akash grinned.
A: Just like a kid, right?
Manya gave him a teasing smile.
M: Nain. More like a dog!
Akash opened his eyes in wide shock as Manya laughed and continued walking. His wrist tugged as he felt himself being pushed towards Manya. His foot slipped in the sand, and he bumped into Manya.
Manya was about to topple over. She turned around, shocked. Akash grabbed her waist suddenly before she fell down. He stared into her eyes...
Manya looked at him. She stood up straight.
A: Kya, Manya! Kitna girti ho tum!
M: Main girti hoon?! You're always the reason!
A: Tumhi ne tho dupatta baandha!
M: You're right! Tum ek leash ka kaabil nain ho!
A: LEASH?
M: Haan, leash! Kyun ki tum ek normal dog nain ho! Tum ek JANGLI janwar!
A: Ek tho maine tumhe bachaya, oopar se tum mere oopar hii chilla rahi ho?
Manya rolled her eyes and pulled her dupatta away.
M: Mujhe nareal paani peena hai!!
A: Tho jao, khud piyo!
M: FINE!
Manya turned and began to walk, but stopped when she noticed a bunch of boys crowding the cart. She swallowed as they looked at her and whistled. Akash looked up.
M: Akash--
A: Huh! You think itni bisti sehne ke baadh main hero ban ker tumhe bachaoon ga?
M: Tho tum mujhe wahan akele jaane dho ge?
A: Haan! Tumhi tho heroine banthi phirti ho na! Tho phir jao!
M: Akaasshh!
Akash rolled his eyes. He grabbed her wrist and walked to the nareal paani cart. Manya smiled.
He walked to the boys and looked at them. Suddenly, he tugged Manya's wrist, bringing her in front of the boys.
A: Here you go guys!
Manya opened her mouth in shock.
M: HOW DARE YOU?!
The boys whistled. Akash smirked and began to walk away, shaking his head. One of the boys grabbed Manya's hand.
M: Akash!
Akash stopped walking. He turned and saw the boy touching Manya. He walked up to him. Manya smiled.
M: Main jaanti thi--
A: Suno, bhaiya, tum iss churail ke peeche nahi paro tho acha hai!
M: WHAT?
A: Yeah, man, iss ke saath koi bhi touching type of cheez muth kerna. She's like, infected and all--
M: Akash!!
The boy let go, laughing, and they walked off. Akash looked at Manya and shrugged his eyebrows.
M: You...saand!!
Akash laughed.
A: KYa saand? Sach hi tho bola!
Manya narrowed her eyes at him. She asked for a nareal paani and began to sip it. She looked up at Akash, smiling. She motioned it over to him.
Akash shrugged and bent over for a sip. Manya laughed and pulled over.
A: Manyaaa!
Manya put the nareal paani in front of his face. He bent down again, and she pulled it back again. She burst out laughing. Akash narrowed his eyes at her.
A: Manyaa!
Manya shrieked and let go of the nareal paani, racing away. She ran into the water, laughing.
A: Rukkk!!!
Manya splashed water on his face. Akash laughed and bent down, splashing her face too. They laughed and threw water over each other.
M: Akash!
A: Manya!!
Manya laughed. She stepped out of the water, waving her dupatta over Akash's face. Akash suddenly saw her circling under the sun. He stared at her eyes which danced in joy.
A: Cinderella?
Manya stopped spinning. She turned and stared at him, a smile on her face.
M: (Singing) Na Woh Inkaar Kerta Hai...Na Woh Ekraar Kerta Hai...
Akash opened his eyes in wide surprise.
A: CINDERELLA!
Manya laughed and ran away. She turned around and stuck her tongue out, waving her thumb at him teasingly. Akash laughed and kicked the sand as it flew in the air.
Kuch To Hua Hai...Kuch Ho Gaya Hai...
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Precap:
As the rain fell, everyone raced inside. The water blew out the fire in the middle. Manya was running inside when Akash grabbed her hand and pulled her back.
A: Aye, Cinderella...! You owe me a dance!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is soooooooo beutifull part reallyy i enjoyed soo much
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice......... cool... keep it up

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