Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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here is part 7

arter the engagemant manya was at her house thinking about the time she had with akash at the jungle when they got lot and the way om look aftered her when everyone thought that akash was dead. manya was about to fall asleep just as akash rang on the house phone
A: hi maddamosel
M: hi akash
A: toh tum kya ker rahi ho mere baare main soch rahi thi
M: akash main tumhare baare main kyun sochoon tum mere kya lagtay ho( trying to wind him up)
A: manya mujhe lagta hai tumhari yaadash ko ghuki hai main tumhara hone vala pathi hoon
M: vo chodo pehle yeh bathao tum ne mujhe phone kyun kiya
A: oh vo maa ne kaha tha ki kal tum ajana kyunki kal holi hai aur hum sab dost a rahay hai holi saat khel ne ke liye aur tumhare liye ek gift bhi aya hai, mom ne bheja hai
M: kya hai akash
A: jab dek lo gi toh pehchaan lo gi.
M: leki akash
A: bye manya
akash hung up the phone and asoon as he hung the phone up the door bell rang
M: shayad voh akash ka gift hai
manya went to open the door and a guy was standing there with a thali in his hand
M: excuse me
the guy turned around and manya realised that it was om and he had her wedding dress with him
M: om tum andar ao na
O: aunti aur dadu kaha hai
M: vo hahar gay they kuch samaan bhi lena hai
O: yeh havaldar ne bheja hai tumhare shadi ke joda
manya took the tray out of om's hand and saw a georgous suit in it manya took the dupatta of the suit and put it on but the window was left open s the wind blew it and it landed in om's hands. om walked up to manya and he was about to give the dupatta when he hit his knee on the table and the dupatta fell on top of manya's head. they both looked at each other shocked just as the phone rang again. and it was akash
A: toh kaisa laga mera presant
M: akash bohth khubsurat hai lekin yeh joda toh shadi se chaar din pehle de they hai
A: patha hai aur humari shadi ab chaar din main hogi kyunki mujhe patha tha ki tum aur intasar nehi kar sakti. ab om ko phone do.
manya turned around to give om the phone but he wasn't there he had just left.
M: akash om toh chala gaya
A: chala gaya oh never mind, ok mnya bye ab mujhe bohth tyariyaan bhi kar ni hai aur haan vo holi ki party ab om ke ghar hogi.

holi party.

everyone from collage was at the party and om was at the door with priya. manya walked in with roopa
R: hi om hi priya
O,P: hi roopa hi manya
O: hi guys, baki sab kaha hai
P: baki sab ya akash
M: baki sab
R: akash bhi baki sab main shamil ho jata hai
akash came in from the back scaring manya, he wraped his arm's around manya's waist.
A: mere baare main soch rahay thay ya kisi aur ke bare main
R: oh shut up akash
P: akash kya tumne shadi de baad koi setting karni hai ya sari zindagi manya ke saath hi bithani hai
A: thori bohth ki hai, aur maine list bhi banaliya
Priya was trying to wind om up
P: acha toh kithne naam hai
A: abhi tk toh ginne nehi
P: kya tumhe koi naam yaad hai
A: haan saray yaad hai na pehla naam, manya, dosra naam manya, teesra naam manya aur
P: bas akash agar saaray naam ke liye toh main toh budi hojaungi aur thabhi bhi tumhara list nehi khatam hoga

kiran went and got hold of the mike just before everyone started to play holi
Ki: ajj holi hai aur jo ladka, ladki ko sab se pehle raang dalega us ladka ladki ki shadi ho jaye gi aur hamesha saath rahainge, mooth bhi unko agag nehi kar paye gi.
everyone srarted to put the raang on th people they love.
Rehan was the first one to put raang on kiran
And so was karan but he put it on roopa
And gopu put it on sanju
Akash was walking over to manya to put raang on her and om was standing next to her, om was about to walk off when purposely priya put her fot infront, making om fall. om and akash had red colour raang in their hands and just as om tripped akash filled manya's maang with the holi and at the same time the raang om had in his hand also fell onto manya's maang, she stood there shocked looking at both of them and everyone toped aswell in shock to see what happened but priya was standing thre and she looked at om who looked at her in anger like he was going to slap her, but priya looked at om and winked at him with a wide grin on her face

precap
R: chalo na manya ek gana gao na
Ki: haan manya gao na.....
while manya was downstairs singing with everyone else priya went up to manya's room and had a look around and under her pillow she found...............


sorry guys that this is short and late but promise next one will be longer

plz comment 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
i hate priya she is kabhab may haddyy betting Manya and Akash i am wondreing what priya found in Manya,s room still i hateeeee priya .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I loved Manya Dress and Sandels
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

don't worry shafoo you will find out very soon what priya found in manya's bedroom and i will update in afew hours and thanks for liking the suit, sandels and ff 😳 😳 😳

rukhsarahmed thanks for liking my ff

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am ver sorry guys but i will have to post the next part 2mrw cos i hd wrote ost of part 8 and i saved i but then i couldn' find it so n other wordsi have to write it all ove again and it is very late to write it again so i have to write it tomarrow 😭 😭 😭

i'm sorry 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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rukhsarahmed and ruky786 r the same pple so my name is actually rukhsarahmed thanks babyangel for liking my comment
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ure welcme rucky n thanks 4 liking my ff 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the comments guys

part 8

priya went inside the house laughing and om followed her
O: eh sab kya tha priya
P: kya, maine kya kiya
O: tunne ke kiya, tang larane zarori tha kya
P: om main toh sirf...
O: mujse baat math kerna verna mujhe patha nehi main ke har betoon ga
P: om kya tunne nehi sunna kiran ne kya kaha tha, ki jo ladka sab se pehle ladki ko holi ka raang lagae ga un dono ki shadi ho jaye gi aur sab se pehle tumne raang dala tha aur vo bhi manya ki maang main
O: eh laundia ek baat kaan khol ker sunle, manya, akash se pyar ker thi hai aur vo ussi se shadi kere ge, aggar tu ne yeh shadi rok ne ke liye kuch bhi kiya toh bhool ja ki main kabhi tumhara dost tha, kyunki us ke baad humari dosti khatam.
om walked of in anger and priya just smiled
P: (to her self)om main tumhari dushman nehi dost hoon, aur jo raang tumne manya ke maang main dala tha voh holi nehi sindoor tha tum galati se puja ki thali ko holi ke rangoon ki thali samaj betay aur us thali se tumne raang ki bijay sindoor utta liya aur manya ki maang bhar li, uppar vala bhi yeh chahta hai ki tum aur manya ek ho jaye, aur aise baat nehi hai ki manya tumse pyer nehi karthi hai kyunki jo pyar maine tumhare ankhoon main dekha hai, vohi pyar maine manya ki bhi ankoon main dekha hai. aur main yeh baat jaan na chahti hoon ki manya tumse pyar ker ke akash se shadi kyun kar rahi hai. aur main yeh baat jankar hi rahoon gi.

meanwhile om was outside looking for manya, he couldn't find her anywhere but then he spotted her on the terrace on the swing sitting there crying, om walked up to manya and put his hand on her shoulder.
O: jo bahar hua main uske liye maafi maang na chahta hoon, ab roona band karo
manya got up and faced om showing her maang filled with akash's holi and om's sindoor. om looked at manya shocked and then he started laughing,
O: ey havaldarni tu is baat se roh rahi hai, fikar maat karo, is maang main sirf akash ke naam ka sindoor he sajega,
Rubbing his hand all over manya's maang removing the sindoor and holi colour
O: lo ab toh chala bhi gaya, ab rona band karo

The next day in the evening

It was roopa's and manya's mehndi and all the girls were sitting around roopa applying mehndi to her hands in manya's house, just as om and priya walk in
Ki: hi om, hi priya andar ao na
O: manya kaha hai nazar nehi arahi hai (looking around hoping he will spot her)
Ki: manya toh tyar ho rahi hai, ab idhar ao aur humare liye gana gao
O: ey laundia om prakash gana nehi gatha
Just as om said this, everyone turned around looking at a figure on top of the staircase, it was manya she was looking gorgeous. She came down trying her best to ignore om and she came and sat next to roopa. Some girls came and sat around her, and started applying mehndi to her hands.
Ki: manya tum om ko kaho na ki humare liye ek gana gaye na
M: om please ga do na, mere liye
O: teek hai
(singing ek din)


Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai (2)
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai


Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga


Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)


After om had finished singing everyone went to manya and tried to persuade her to sing
Ki: manya om ne toh ga liya, ab tum gao na
M: kiran mujhe gana nehi atha
Ka: kithne jhoot bolthi ho tum manya tumhe toh gana acha lagta hai
M: karan
O: agar om prakash ithne pyar se puchey ga toh uski gaiy bhi ga pareygi, ab tum toh galo.
M: ithna insist kar rahe ho toh main ga hi leti hoon
( singing aja ve saajan)


M: Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Nayan Bichaaye Teri Raahon Par
Saathi Saki Sab Raha Thake Hain
Dhoond Rahi Hai Tujhe Sab Ki Nazar
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan

Ru: Taaro Se Teri Mang Sajegi Meri Behna Dulhan Banegi
Mujhko Pata Hai Woh Aayega Teri Doli Le Jaaegya
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan

M: Pheeka Na Pad Jaaye Mehndi Ka Rang
Itni Kahin Der Ho Jaaye Na
Jis Pyaar Pe Hum Ko Yakin Hai
Us Pyaar Ki Haar Ho Jaaye Na
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Nayan Bichaaye Teri Raahon Par
Saathi Saki Sab Raha Thake Hain
Dhoond Rahi Hai Tujhe Sab Ki Nazar
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan
Aaja Ve Saajan Aaja Ve Saajan

While manya was singing priya dropped some drink on her dress
MM: beta uppar manya ka kamra hai vaha ja ke isse saaf ker dena teek hai
P: teek hai aunti
Priya went upstairs and went to the bathroom to clean her dress. Arter she had cleaned it she came out and sat on the bed looking at a picture of the whole gang hugging each other and om had hold on to manya who was held on to akash
P: (to her self) shayad main galat thi, shayad manya sach main akash se pyar ker thi hai. Aur manya ke liye om ka pyar mera vehem hai
Just as priya got up, she grabbed her bag that she put on he floor, she thought that something had just fallen into the bag but then she thought that she was just imagining it.

Later that night priya went home and she threw her bag on her bed, she went to go have a shower and get changed. when she picked her bag up something fell out of the bag. She picked it up to see what it was and it was a diary, but not just any diary it was manya's secret diary. Priya opened the diary and she started to read the diary……………………………………..

Ooohhh what will happen now will priya go and tell om everything or will she just leave it all behind her?????????????? To find out stay tuned to mohbbat kabhi maine ff

Precap: priya goes into manya's room and puts the diary on her bed. She walks out the room and after 5 minutes someone walks into manya's room and found the diary on the bed ………………………….

Thank u and plz comment

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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here is roopa's dress

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and her shoes

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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~~BaBy~AnGel~~ u r doing such a gd job i luv it it is amzing

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