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Posted: 17 years ago
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~Part 2~

Manya was doing her course in computer science B tech and Om was to join army.He was proud to serve his nation . They met not actually at darjeeliing where both of them had gone for holidays before stepping into new life.

Manya was a happy go lucky girl and loved to enjoy her life.Om was dashing cool whom every girl liked .They had gone that day to the disco with their respective frenz and Manya was there dancing.She had worn a knee length mini skirt and a sleevless top.

I want you to work it for me like this
Oh yeah
Show me what you got
Show me when i m here
Come here..
Go head now
Yeah


Race Saanson ki
Race chahat ki
Race Dhadkan ki
My heart is racing on

Race Saanson ki
Race chahat ki
Race Dhadkan ki
My heart is racing on - (2)

Nasha Tera… Nasha… Nashila nashila
hai

Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein

Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein

When i m touching your body
All my touches are driving me crazy
Leave it just on baby no need to worry


Hasraton ki Jalan
Hum Bade din sahe
Haal Jo bhi raha
Na Kisi se kahe

Teri Zulfon tale
Ab to jeena mujhe
Mang le tu agar
Jaan bhi doon tujhe

Ada…aadaaa…aaadddaaa…ada ne hi loota hai

Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein

Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein

Faslon se mile
Ab yeh mumkin nahi
Zindagani meri
Kuch tere bin nahi

Teri hi khwaab hai
Teri hi pyaas hai
Arzoo meri kya
Tera Ehsaas hai

Fida…fidaaa…fidaa…fidaaa tujhpe dil mera

Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein


Race Saanson ki
Race chahat ki
Race Dhadkan ki
My heart is racing on

Nasha Tera…. nasha nashila nashila hai

(Allah duhai hai
Betabi chaayi hai
Muskil Judai hai
Haan tere pyaar mein ) … —- 2

When Om saw her for the first time .She seeme very elegant to him.Manya noticed him too.but they forgot that andnow they went back..who knows wat was in store for them.

5 years later....

Manya is working in a firm in Mumbai.Om had come there for some official work.He is a capt. now.

One day

someone got into his car in midst of traffic.She was dressed in a very corporate look with hair left loose and spectacles just enough of makeup..very beautiful...he didn't remember her nor did she...

"aap gaadi mein kyon baiti hai"

"actually i have an imp presentation and meri scooty karaab ho gayi hai..so can u dorp me plzz its really urgrnt"

"ok..par aap ek paraye mard ke saath...don't u feel afraid"

"shakal surat se to decent lagte hai"

"lagta nahi hoon'

"really"

"ok can we move signal green'

manya's mom calleld her parents were in mumbai naow

"mom aap jaanti hai na meri presentation hai'

"beta..woh tumhari shaadi"

"maa ghar aake baat karenge bye ..cya"

at that time om remembered something

***

tune in to know wt happens next..next update after exmas....

love

niti

Edited by liya16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
loved itt keep up the good work 😳

and goodluck with ur exams 😃 !!

continue soon afther ur exams 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

~Part 3~

"kahin yeh vahi toh nahi"-om thought

again there was a red signal and manya's mom called

"ab kya hua mamma"

"beta suno na bahut accha rishta hai"

"na jaane kyon aap mujhe shaadi ke liye force karna chahti hai...main abhi apne career par dyan dena chahti hoon"

"aisi baat nahi hai"

"theek hai...mein thodi tensed thi isiliye..i'm sorry"


"ladka army mein hai aur captain hai..tumhare papa ke purane dost ka beta hai...bahut accha ghar hai"

"army...mama aap jaanti hai mein kisi professional se shaadi karna chahti hoon"

at that time om remembered hearing the conversation that she was the girl selected by his mom ...well he ...umm......quite...liked her..

"beta om tujhe kya ho raha hai" om thought

"mamma ...i don agree...woh bhi armywaala...they r very boring...."

"beta..kam se kam ek baar mil to le"

"theek hai ...bye.."

"bye"

***
om rang up his mom and kept the speaker on...

"maa...mujhe ladki pasand hai'

"kal tak toh na na kar raha tha achaanak se"

"ghar aake sab samjha dunga"
***
after the conversation manya cudn't resisting asking

"aap ne bina dekhe haa kardi"

"aap ne bhi toh bina mile naa kardi"

"mera case alag hai...i mean these army people r..."

"well aap ko aisa kyon lagta hai...experience"

"na...bas aise hi"

"myself...om"

"manya"

"umeed hai aapse phir mulaakaat hogi"

"bye"
***

whole day manya thought about what om told her...
"y am i thinking so much....mujhe kya fark padta hai"😳

***
how was she to know that her life wud change completely soon..and that she wud fall for an army man

love

niti😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
nice part love itt!!
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
omg cute ff! Can't wait for the next parts...plz write longer updates!! 😳 lol Keep it up 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

I love it ^_^ Continue soon pleej <8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Part 4

At home om was thinking about manya...their frirst meeting...

om's mom was wondering wat happened to him..he was smilimg by himself

"om tu pagal toh nahi hua na"

he didn't reply

"oooooooooom..."

"jee..mamma...aap chilla kyun rahi hai...muje sunai deta hai"

"tum kiske kayaalon mein khoye ho??"

"nahi toh aisi koi baat nahi hai"

"acchaa...aur yeh batao tumne sirf photo dekhkar shaadi ke liye haan kaise kii"

he told about their first meet

"par prob yeh hai ki use army waale pasand nahi...zindgi mein pehli baar mein army mein hone se pachta raha hoon"

"toh tu use mat bataa"

"par...maa"

"everything is fair in love and war...tere papa ne bhi aisa hi kiya tha"

"acchaa"

"mein Mrs Sharma ko yeh khush kabha deti hoon"

"jee.."

sometime later..

"om jaldi taiyyaar ho jaa aur woh paas mein MV mall ke movie theater pahunch jaa"

"mom u know i don love moviez"

"o...manya wahi jaa rahi hai apne doston ke saath"

"on second thoughts i love movies'

"kair tumhe pasand nahi toh mat jaa"

"aisi baat nahi hai..ap ko kaise pata chala"

"badmaash...mirchi ne bataya"

"stop joking maa...mirchi baat kaise kar sakti hai"

"teri hone waali saas hai"

"oo..in that case ok"

he dressed himsself in casuals and went htere...

manya was buying tickets...he immmediately bouht a tickhet seated next to manya..

manya saw him and told

"kya pareshani hai ...jaha mein jaati hoon wahi pahunch jaata hai"

rupa was her best frend

"kya hua manu'

"kuch anhi ...andar chale..i don want to miss the boginning.."

om too went inside...it was a horror movie...while everyone was shouting om was watching manya..

then there was a horro scene and she clung to om...unknowingly...and her nails dug into his hands..

after the movie she realised that and said

"how dae u touch me'

"oye madam ..itna nakra mat dikayiye ...dekhiye gabraake kyaa haal bana diya hai aapne mere haath ka.."

she smiled sheepishley..

"chal manu yahaan se chalte hai...meri sagai ki tayaairi karni hai na"

before getting out of the mall she looked at om...and om was like mashaallah!!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Precap:Rupa's sagai...with akash...akash om's frend...

manya-om dance

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

love

niti

Edited by liya16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
nice part! 😳 continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
nice update 👏

btw which movie did they see? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
aww that was soo funny that reminded me of a movie lol....can't wait till the next part yay 😊 😆

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