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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Tried Adding You But It Doesnt Work. ): I Really Want To Read Your FF.

sweets added u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
wow...aaliya and ranveer dating in strt
i would love to read ranya ff
i was looing for any here and here i got itplz pm me whenevr u update nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Hello guys thank you for all the lovely commentsJI am yet to make the banner..will do soon.without much ado,here is the next part!

Part One

London..

The whole penthouse was bustling with activity.Butlers running from one end to the other.Maids cleaning their aprons and the whole scenario was utter chaos!

"Girls,Stop grinning too much!The boss may not like it!"Miss.Marisa Ventura's voice commanded.

The girls nodded their heads and lined up.

"Jonathan,can you please check on his room?He is particular about the cleanliness!"Miss.marisa warned.

"Yes senorita!"Jonathan replied as he hurried upstairs.

After five minutes,the man returned and reported,"Everything is fine the way he wants,Senorita!"

"Good"the lady exclaimed as she lined up.

The sound of the car horn alerted everyone regarding the arrival of their boss,Ranveer Chauhan.

~*~

Aaliya yarned as she stretched her legs.Yesterday night was a long one.

Two IIFA awards-one for best actor and the other for Internal icon of the year.It had been wonderful to receive two awards.

Aaliya smiled looking at her glass shelf which was neatly stacked with trophies.She felt her heart burst out with immense pride!

The initial days of struggle,humiliation and verbal abuse did not matter to her anymore!

Infact she was thankful to those people who made her fight hard for the goal.She loved the amazing feeling of pride that was beginning to settle down in her heart.

Checking the digital clock that read 09.30 hours,Aaliya rushed into the washroom as she remembered she'd to be at the sets sharp at 10.15.

~*~

"Seriously,Nargis.What's wrong with you?"Ranveer said frustratingly over the phone.

"Wrong with me?You've been wrong dada!"she retorted back rather angrily.

"Choti,tell me what did I do?"Ranveer said calmly.

"You told me you'd marry the girl I chose,didn't you?"

"Of course sweetums,I did"

"Then how can YOU DATE THAT GOOD-FOR-NOTHING-SHOWOFF AALIYA!!"Nargis yelled the last few words.

Ranveer had just sipped his coffee when he heard Nargis yell.He spat the coffee and shouted "WHAT?"

"Of course,dear brother!Yesterday your so called lover Aaliya issued a statement to the press that you and her are in a relationship for nearly a year.Is it true?"Nargis asked impatiently.

"NO!"Ranveer said as he continued quickly,"I don't know her!Tell me,how can you date a person you barely know?Whatever that woman is telling you and the nation it's absolute shit!"

Ranveer heard nargis heave a sigh of relief.
"Thank God for that"she said as she hung up.

Nargis sat on the sofa controlling her heartbeats.She was glad that Aaliya had issued a wrong statement about her relationship with her brother.She'd heard a lot about Aaliya from the magazine reports and her husband,Rishi Roy.

After knowing that Aaliya had a very BAD obsession for men,Nargis had been scared for her brother.She already knew he'd suffered an heartbreak and it had taken her a lot of effort to bring her brother out of his pain.

Nargis sighed as she reminiscenced those golden days when her brother would laugh so heartily.Everything had changed when their parents left them all alone with Nargis' responsibility solely on Ranveer's shoulders.

And,Nargis would do anything-ANYTHING to save her brother from that snake,Aaliya.

~*~

Gals,I know this part is kind of short but trust me the next one will be longer,for sure.

Love,

Sally

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Wonderful..
Can't Wait For Your Next Update!!!!
It Seems To Get More Intresting ...
Please Keep Writing...
Thnx...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajdaluver

Wonderful..

Can't Wait For Your Next Update!!!!
It Seems To Get More Intresting ...
Please Keep Writing...
Thnx...👏

Thanks a lot for ur comment dear...I am sally nd u?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
oh wow. great epic start👏
speechless, continue soon😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Great Chapter
Can't wait for the next part !
Hope you update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
This is soo good.. Well done, and please update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
This part was good.want to know more about their lives.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
I really can't wait for other Parts.. This part is soo good.. Ranveer is a cleanliness freak then 😉.. Luvd Nargis concern for him.. Really waiting for Aliya and Ranveer track to take off..

Thanks for the PM..

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