A Randhir FF:The Broken Souls (chapter 3 updated) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ishq2051

Guys!!

Uss nidhi ki baat mat manna..

It is 49-51 ok??

Aur haan tysm for comments!!😊

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

wow Nidz you started writing great

i never visit this forum though i am Sandhir fan yet i don't god knows why

well there are many forums i don't really go yet being a big fan

i just went through your profile and found this

and for a first time amazing prologue

beautifully written

all the best to you both on this

hope this becames a great success

Superstars trhat too with pain great

it would be really interesting to read

update soon

pm me too

for title umm...endeavoured love

or endearing you

if you guys don't find a good title after checking all then i guess rather than compromising you two should go and ask for some titles in the fanfiction forum's writer to writer corner that would help

anyways all the best

Originally posted by: anu_anya

gud concept
interesting
continue asap
all d best 🤗

title no idea
idea ayega tho bathaungi

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Interesting...sounds pretty good..

penned very well girls !!

so sanyu is broken n randhir is carefree..

nice concept..

lets see where yu will take it n how yu will unfold n mould it..

continue soon...

Love,

Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on yu..

Originally posted by: Lunalovegood

woah u gals r truly talented writers.

The prologue sounds interesting.

2 superstars ,one consider her life to be a living hell and one' s life which everyone craves for!!

Unlike poles attract each other ,

waiting for the next update