A Randhir FF:The Broken Souls (chapter 3 updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Am I dreaming, or this is really happening?!
My Nidhi didu and Late Lateef ka collab ff! This is so good.
The prologue is simple amazing.
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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ikshu
amazing concept guyzz
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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
Ananya 🤗
And nidhi
Lovely prologue
Do continue soon
It's something out of box
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: anudoll
Am I dreaming, or this is really happening?!
My Nidhi didu and Late Lateef ka collab ff! This is so good.
The prologue is simple amazing.
Continue soon
Waiting

choti..!!!

this is really happening..!!!!

thank u so much..!!!

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ishq2051

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: anudoll
Am I dreaming, or this is really happening?!
My Nidhi didu and Late Lateef ka collab ff! This is so good.
The prologue is simple amazing.
Continue soon
Waiting

Anu..sachchi mein ho rha..

Tysm..

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ishq2051

@ishq2051

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

CHAPTER 1

"Dear randhir, i know u must be mad at me for not informing you before going away, forever.Yes randhir I've decided to give u the life which u deserved, a life which a person like you should have. But i will always love you though i was not successful in showing it to you. And yes i want you to make your life the happiest one, find your soulmate soon.And yes always follow your heart. Please never search for me and you wont if you love me.i want to lead a happy and successful life.Fulfill your dreams. And, i love you!"

This small letter destroyed two lives,two smiles and many dreams. But it also made him stronger than before,it rised a will power withing him. A passion for winning, for fulfilling his or to be precise THEIR dream. The dream which THEY had seen together and live it together,but alas he was all alone now. He was broken.

"Why ? Why did u leave me alone? I promised you that we both will together try to make your messy life a good one,didn't I? Didn't you promise me to give me one chance? But u broke the promise, you broke the promise and along with it u broke my heart also. Though u left me but my heart will always wait for you" YOU were the one who supported me when I needed the most and now when it was my time to support you u left me...you didn't even cared about me...why..?? I was that bad as a lover...?? he said to himself the smile of million hearts but that charming smile on which anyone could die had left him forever just like 'her'"

Reading the letter for last time he got up and started walking aimlessly where they became 'one', the place he had expressed his love for the love of his life.Sitting along the wide- pathway of Marine drive he started remembering 'their' golden memories.

"I love you randhir,i really do! And that is why I'm going far away from you,giving you the life you deserve." Flight no. 12XXX has arrived passengers are requested to move towards gate no.7" Wiping the tears that rolled down her pale cheeks which once glowed she got up and decided " im doing this for you.I will move on and i promise you to become strong"and started walking towards the path that she thought would change her life though she was somewhat true.

Three years passed 'he' thought SHE didn't need her and she thought he had moved on.The cold winds of Los Angeles touched her cold dull face but yet could never give her peace.she had come here to change herself, her life to move on from her past and especially from HIM though she thought she was successful to some extent she didn't know that she had not even moved a step ahead from moving on from HIM.The busy streets always failed to gain her attention, the bright lights which could shine the whole city could not enlighten her dark life. She was perfect from outside, a writer that wrote books that people thought were worth millions but broken and shattered deep down her heart. She could AGAIN have a life full of fame and glamour but chose the opposite because she knew the disadvantages of being under the lime light

Both of them thought that they had moved on but their hearts were untamed and chained together for eternity and they were yet to know that...

Done!!

Please read the author's note below

Edited by ishq2051 - 10 years ago

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ishq2051

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Hey guys!!

Please please don't throw your chappals neither the tomatoes for being this late!!

We both were a little busy and sice this is the first time I'm writing something it took a little,accha ok a little way too much time!!

Sorry guys!! Aage se nothing like this will happen!!

And i know this chapter is pathetic but yet give ur feedbacks and suggestions!!

Love,

Ananya and Nidhi

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hey anu 🤗 long time dude

And heya nidhi !!

You guys did a fantastic job !!

The emotions were beautifully portrayed

Oh feeling bad for them ;(

I want to see how u take this story forward

Continue soonish guys !!

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ishq2051

@ishq2051

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: CrazyKupKakes
Hey anu 🤗 long time dude
And heya nidhi !!
You guys did a fantastic job !!
The emotions were beautifully portrayed
Oh feeling bad for them ;(
I want to see how u take this story forward
Continue soonish guys !!

Awww..tysm sanya!!

A comment of this sort was needed!!

Love u man!!

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Awsme update
Loved it

Poor rd so broken
He loves sanyu so much
She left for his own good

Bt destiny has some other plans for them

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling