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Dhruvi Mehta

@dhruvi_parsh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Hey
Loved it
U hv penned so well
Its really amazingg

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amulbaby06

@amulbaby06

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

loved it to the core...

penned very beautifully simply amazing... touched

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: coolishparul
awesome

thanks for scrap

Welcome. (; Thanks.

Originally posted by: CrazySandhirian
I love it!
You have described his emotions so well!!
Could feel the pain...😭
Have done an awesome job!!!👏

Thanks so much!

You're so sweet thanks. 😃

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh
Hey
Loved it
U hv penned so well
Its really amazingg

Thanks so much! 😳

Originally posted by: amulbaby06
loved it to the core...

penned very beautifully simply amazing... touched

Thanks dude :)

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

YESS !! I finally read it !!!

i know you probably are so mad at me .. but i really can't help it

i am so glad i read it because usually i don't read such tragic stories because they make me cry

and this certainly did .. which actually shows how good you are ..

the rash driving the scene near the sea it is so perfect to visualize...

your effort is clearly visible .!!

kuddos to you .. keep writing :D

and i wont be late next time promise !!

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty
YESS !! I finally read it !!!
i know you probably are so mad at me .. but i really can't help it
i am so glad i read it because usually i don't read such tragic stories because they make me cry
and this certainly did .. which actually shows how good you are ..
the rash driving the scene near the sea it is so perfect to visualize...
your effort is clearly visible .!!
kuddos to you .. keep writing :D
and i wont be late next time promise !!

Yes, you did! Girl . 😃

I'm not bad, such a little sad. This is a rhyming i guess.

Thanks yarr.. :)) Haha, okay!