Broken - Randhir OS {Dark-Short}

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BornAries

@BornAries

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Its Beautiful... A sheer brilliance... 👏

Amazing Os... His emotions are beautifully penned Down...

Loved it <3

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

RES

Unress...oh my god that was something unreal yaar...first I absolutely love that song from ek villan n secondly your writing is so good...its intense, layered, n intriguing n that is very rare in a writer these days so I bow down to u for that...it lived upto its title - it was dark n broken n i absolutely gat what u r trying to convey so kuddos oin that...plz continue soon n thanks for the scrap!!plz pm me when u update if possible!!also i wanted to know have u written anything other than this...if u have then scrap or pm me the link😊😊😊

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Anjali

@AnjaliAnand

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Amazing OS 👏
well written...loved it !!
thanks 4 d scrap 😊

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: skm27395
RES
Unress...oh my god that was something unreal yaar...first I absolutely love that song from ek villan n secondly your writing is so good...its intense, layered, n intriguing n that is very rare in a writer these days so I bow down to u for that...it lived upto its title - it was dark n broken n i absolutely gat what u r trying to convey so kuddos oin that...plz continue soon n thanks for the scrap!!plz pm me when u update if possible!!also i wanted to know have u written anything other than this...if u have then scrap or pm me the link😊😊😊

OMG! You're words are so emotional appeal for me hahah! 😆 Thank you so much! I'd love to be friends with you! :) Thanks so much.. I wanted a layered os so i wrote it.. :P Yes, I've written two os. Sure, I'll send them.

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: BornAries
Its Beautiful... A sheer brilliance... 👏

Amazing Os... His emotions are beautifully penned Down...

Loved it <3

Thanks so much yarr.. sree. 😃

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand
Amazing OS 👏
well written...loved it !!
thanks 4 d scrap 😊

Thanks so much! 😃

Welcome.. anjali...

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pari1995

@pari1995

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

oh dear,its...its too emotional yaar

thanx for informing me abt this os

loved it,such a lovely os,that too a tragic one

update another of ur os soon

love

pari

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Infinity-

OMG! You're words are so emotional appeal for me hahah! 😆 Thank you so much! I'd love to be friends with you! :) Thanks so much.. I wanted a layered os so i wrote it.. :P Yes, I've written two os. Sure, I'll send them.

yeah i would like that...that would be gr8 if u sent me the link😊😊

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Suma.

@-Infinity-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pari1995
oh dear,its...its too emotional yaar
thanx for informing me abt this os
loved it,such a lovely os,that too a tragic one
update another of ur os soon
love
pari

Thanks so much! hehe, welcome 😃

sure.. thanks..