You are mine for ever / my first os plz do peep in

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hellow every1 so this is my first os and I really don't know how its gonna be plz give ur feedbacks positive negative all will do so no much more talks and here I start

YOU ARE MINE FOR EVER


Randhir and sanyukta were sitting on the terrace of their collage it was the last night in the collage before their holidays they had completed their 2nd year and had became best friends

Randhir:hey sanyu wts going on why are you so lost tell me any problem is there I will help you

Sanyu:randhir promise me if I tell you you will not leave me and go

Randhir:what's the matter sanyu

Sanyu:randhir my engagement was not cancelled it was postponed

(randhir shocked by her words)

Randhir:sanyu i don't like jokes

Sanyu:am serious randhir and tomorrow is my engagement

(randhir was abt to leave sanyu holds his hands)

Randhir:now what do you wanna say?

Sanyu:I don't wanna do this engagement randhir

(tears in her eyes)

Randhir:you want me to help you so do as I say OK?

Sanyu:anything you say

Randhir:so tomorrow be ready and trust me

Sanyu:I trust you more then me

NEXT MORNING

Sanyu got up and started getting ready to go to her home her family had send the car for her

Sanyu texted randhir:randhir where are you am abt to leave

randhir texted sanyu back:look on your right near the gate am on my bike chill I will be right behind you

sanyu texted randhir back:thanks a lot randhir

(sanyu sat in the car and the car drove away and randhir on bike behind the car)

sanyu entered her house her house was fully decorated her mother welcomed her and told her to go to her room and freshen up

Sanyu texted randhir :where are you?

randhir texted sanyu:right behind you my friend

(sanyu turned around and found him sitting on her window she quickly closed the door of her room and came to him)

Randhir:as I told I will always be with you and he peck her checks

(sanyu was shocked by his act)

Sanyu:randhir what was that

Note:sanyu had some feelings for randhir and was sure that she has fallen for him

(and the next moment randhir bent on his knees and removed a ring from his pocket)

Randhir:Sanyu I really love you from the bottom of my heart will you plz marry me?

(sanyu still in shock but was out of her trance and)

Sanyu:I Love You too randhir

And she forwarded her hand towards him and their happiness was on cloud 9 randhir immediately put the ring in her finger and hugged her she too responded they both were lost in each others embrace but their trance was interrupted by the knock on the door it was sanyu's mom she quickly told randhir to hide and she opened the door her mother came and started talking to her typical mother daughter talks and after a while left sanyu quickly locked the door and told randhir to come out

Sanyu:randhir wts the plan what are you going to do?

Randhir:just wait and watch sanyu you just be normal OK and don't worry I will never let you be of some1 else you are mine forever with this he gave her a bone crushing hug

(she was very happy)

Evening
It was 6:30 pm

And the groom enters every1 welcomed him in a great way

Sanyu in her room sitting in front of the mirror she was looking very beautiful randhir was still in her room he was just gawking at her he was lost in her he went near her and hugged her from back

Randhir:you are looking soo beautiful just like an angel oh sry you are an angel my angel
and placed a soft kiss on her checks

Sanyu:and you are my prince only mine

They were again interrupted by the knock on the door and this time randhir went out from the window and sanyu opened the door it was her cousins they told her that its the time for her engagement she went down with them

sanyu to herself:oh god why can't this be fast forwarded I just hate these things and where is randhir oh god !!!

sanyu was bought next to samir she was not liking it at all after all she loves some1 else

Samir took the ring and sanyu was told to forward her hand she did but randhir's ring was still on her fingure every1 was shocked sanyu's dad was very angry and so was samir he orders her to remove that ring she spated back by saying no he was about to slap her but a strong hand caught his hand and you all know whoz hand it must be it was randhir her face turned in a broad smile by seeing him randhir jerked sammir's hand and said

Randhir:how dare you pick your bloody hand on my sanyu

and baam a hard slap on sammir's face all were just looking and the sceneario in front of them it was all happening as if a movie shooting is going on but this all is real

Sammir:how dare you do you know who am i I can destroy you

(but did sammir knew what's coming next)

Randhir:oh so show me who are you but first call ur p.a and ask who is Randhir Singh Shekhawat

Sammir just called his p.a and inquired abt randhir and was in shock after knowing the truth

Randhir: so know you know who
am I and what I can do one call and you will be on the road

Sanyu's Dad:samir yeah kaun hai aur tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe

Samir:yeh Harsh Shekhawat aur Renuka Sanyal ka beta Randhir Singh Shekhawat hai the top most leading company iske mom dad ki hai iske parents the most top leading business tycon hai

(and the next movement randhir went near sanyu and hugged her and gave a smirk to samir indicating that sanyu is his only his and sammir left fummimg in anger and randhir gave a peck on sanyu's checks in front of ever1 and sanyu blushed hard)

Randhir:bola tha na you are mine and will be mine forever

and they both hugged each other tightly with full passion and others were just gawking at the couple

sanyu's dad had no issues with randhir cuz he was handsome and very rich and soon he declared sanyu and randhir's marriage they both were very happy

(I forgot to mention after sammir went sanyu and randhir were engaged)


After the engagement

In sanyu's room

Randhir:soo thinking abt me? my dear fionce

Sanyu:how did you know?and what are you back for?

Randhir:something very important

Sanyu:and what's that?

Randhir:my goodnight kiss sweetheart

(by saying this randhir started moving towards sanyu)

Sanyu started moving back and soon randhir pinned sanyu to the wall and she was blushing hard

Randhir kept his one hand on sanyu's waist and one hand on her check he moved forward to kiss her and she closed her eyes he soon kissed her with full passion she to responded with the same passion they were fighting for dominance he soon picked her in his arms and made her lay on her bed and layed next to her hugging her he slowly whispered in her ears YOU ARE MINE FOR EVER and soon they both dozed off in each others embrace




So this was it all slippers,tomatoes everything is allowed if you liked it plz click the like button below if not plz tell me through your comments and sry for the mistakes




Love
Manal



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ritikaagrawal thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...awesome update dear plz do pm me nxt time 😉
sanyu aur randhir ki sagai omg...amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is amazing dear...loved it :)
Edited by Fairystar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was just amazing and avery sweet os.
Aww Randhir pecked her when she was in her room😳😳
Their kiss just loved it.Passionate and full of love☺️
please do write more would love to read moe
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good attempt dear...keep writing.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is this really your first attempt..????
It was Damn cute..!!
Very nice attempt..!!
Keep writing
Stay blessed..!!!
Love janavi... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey thanks every1 for your appreciation I din't thought I would get so good feedbacks thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nysshhh-wa OS!!!! Cute and funny! 😆

You had me laughing out loud the minute I read the part where Samir actually calls up and finds out about Randhir! 🤣 That was like so damn funny!! 🤣 Did he just really call his secretary up right in the middle of the confusion that was happening?! 🤣

And such a good attempt should not go unnoticed! You write well, pal! :D Just try to use more punctuation marks to differentiate between sentences. There are a few other grammatical errors, but it's okay.. I hope to read more from you! :D

Annie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks alot Annie for your appreciation and yeh am very poor in grammer so if possible ignore those mistakes😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Dear
lovely and cute OS😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it⭐️
keep it up
Do write more n more
Love
Bushra

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