~~chinese whisper ~~ ONE SHOT!

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this OS goes to piyu (piya1702): MY OLDEST FRIEND ON IF!

she is a complete sweetheart! quite older to me , but yeah, i am shameless,, we dont have formalities between us... :P

her stories and creations are awesome!

i am soo lucky to have met you... :D

i love you piyu 🤗

(hope you like this) :D


The backdrop: whole of the dream team is narcotized by the LITE folks...

Parth , vidushi and jiggi are also present... Don't ask me how XD

The state of being stoned was confusing, yet funny...

All of them were behaving no less than a 5 year old, giggling unnecessarily... perishing to their desires , which , each of them had somehow ,safely locked up, somewhere deep down ...

" lets play a game !" yoyo advised wobbling...

" yeey! " all of them jumped in unison...

" we will play Chinese whisper! Ok kaustuki ji" yoyo gazed at her lovingly...

"eeey youh! I will chop you into pieces! " jiggii shouted, banging his hands on the floor,, then

mimicking the process of chopping with both of his hands...

"you shut up DHOKLE! " yoyo sneered ...

"heheehehe" kaustuki muffled ...

" UFF! Shut up all of you... lets play !! " sanyukta whooped...

all of them stumbled somehow , and managed to form a circle ...

The sequence was yoyo-parth-kaustuki-jiggi-sahil-vidushi-randhir-sanyukta-yoyo.

"I will start!! " yoyo shouted unnecessarily ...

Everyone clamped their ears while randhir braced sanyukta's...

" I will go deaf!! " parth cried...

"tum apne kaan pakdo na ! mere kyu pakad rae ho MCP" sanyukta hiccupped ...

"sorry sorry" randhir copped a plea...

"ok sory ! " yoyo made a face...

He grabbled parth by his collar and pulled him towards himself... and whispered in his ears ...

"chandu k chacha ne chandu ki chachi ko chandni raat mai chandni chowk mai chandi ki chamchi se chutney chatai!!"

"whaaat " parth gasped in horror!

"fatuuu" randhir giggled, he never missed a chance , even in this subconscious state...

Sanyukta gazed at him lovingly ,... such a rare sight,,, she thought!

"say again " parth pleaded...

"no! I will not tell you" yoyo stuck his tongue out, showing him a thumbs down ...

"fine !" he huffed and muffed...

He signaled kaustuki to come near him and whispered in her ears...

"chandu k mama ne chandu ki chachi ko ...ummm...chutney chatai ... raat mai !"

"hehehe" kaustuki giggled ...

She whispered in jiggis ears...

" chandu k mama ne chandu ki chachi ko raat mai chutney chatai "

" eeeh kya? " he scrunched his face in bafflement ...

He yanked sahil and whispered

"kisi k chacha ne chachi ko chata"

"whaaat ? " sahil bursted , laughing!

"gande bache jiggi!" he continued ...

After 2 minutes , he whispered in vidushi's ears ...

"jiggi k chacha ne uski chachi ko chata mara"

"haw! " vidushi clamped her mouth, trying to suppress a laugh...

She whispered the same to randhir...

Now it was randhirs turn to whisper in sanyuktas ear...

He pulled her towards him,with such force ... she bumped against him...

He was mesmerized, from the very moment he felt the first stoke of the drug attack...

He bent towards her ...inhaling the smell of her sweet perfume ,, he was completely plagued by her aura..

Unable to control he pecked her on her cheeks..

"hawww!! " all the members squealed...

The lightest shade of crimson crept up her cheeks...

"naughty boy !! " sanyukta pulled his cheeks...

"I will complain to vardhan sir !" she stood up STOMPED her foot ...

"no pleaseee... randhir tried to woo her...

"I will not insult your for two days! " he showed two fingers to her ...

"umm ... theek hai ! " she sat back...

"your cheeks are soo soft! Duplicate of my favorite teddy! " randhie cooed...

"randhir has a teddy !!! " sanyukta barked in merriment...

All of them started making faces ... teasing him...

He pouted and shouted...

" katti ! katti from all of you"

"no no ... Sorry sorry ! " sanyukta beseeched ...

"no one will tease my randhir now! Understand all of you!!" she faked anger...

All of them stopped at once... keeping a finger on their lips...

"please play na randhir!! "

"Fine,, come here ! "

Sanyukta bent towards him... Keeping two hands on her cheeks...

"I wont kiss you! Come here"

He whispered "I love you"

"hawww ! " sanyukta clamped her mouth ...

"so what was the original sentence sanyukta! ? " yoyo inquired!

" I LOVE YOU!!" she answered proudly!

" hahahahahahahahahaha " all of them clamped their stomachs and fell down laughing...

"buddhu sanyukta!" parth stuck his tongue out"

" randhir told me that ! waiiin " she started wailing like a toddler ...

"vidushi told me that !" randhir lied, pointing towards vidushi...

" you vidushi! How dare you say I love you to MY randhir@!

I will slap you " sanyukta suddenly spit out...

"haw vidushi...katti from you...I thought you loved me ! " parth added..

While randhir braced his mouth laughing silently ...

The whole of the dream team started arguing...

Spiting out curses on each other...

" this is MY dream team" a bewildered vardhan sighed!


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denouement!

i end it here...

do tell me if you like it!


amour,

preeti<3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy me first!!
Unres
Heyya
This was supercute n hilarious n amazing!!!!
I simply loved it...
Randhir's mauke pe chauka kinda confession 😆
Too good! !
Keep writing!!
Love
Mansi
Edited by .scarlet. - 11 years ago
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dude! this was sho cute!
Im still laughin n blushing🤣
aisa KABHI nai hone wala🤣 show mein🤣
but i love it!
aww.. such cute these peoople get when they re drunk🤣
loved it preetu!

-machhu🤣
Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago
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----UnRes----
'wakes up n logs-in IF'
'Bumps into Pree's OS n rushes to see it'
'Rubs her eyes thrice" - Aaaw what did I just see...my name in the dedication😲
Thats so so sooo sweet of U Preee🤗
Yeah indeed its a unique bond...we have a huge age difference,but it doesnt matter when we actually connect at hearts so well🤗
P.S. I too m a huge fan ov ur work,n infact i dunno how my fanship for ur work...gradually turned into sucha beautiful friendship❤️

M honoured to have found such a lovely n amazing friend in U🤗

Now lets come to the OS...
It was sooo humurous...I was ROFLing soo much reading it that moi sis got scared watching me in that condition... 🤣

This is one unique OS...So funny yet absolutely fulll of love...😳


"you shut up DHOKLE! " yoyo sneered ...
lolzz preee kya naam diya jiggi ko😆


kisi k chacha ne chachi ko chata"
hadd tha ye too...i read this line 10times n the tried to come back to my senses😛

n then Randhir pecked on Sanyu's cheeck...OMG that was sooo unexpected...plus supercuteee☺️


He pouted and shouted...

" katti ! katti from all of you"

that was witty...


And ultimately end me "I LOVE U" n the confusion...that was sooo adoreable n funny...🤣

This is one unique OS is reallly one of its kind...Its moi fav. one now...

Love u more n more 🤗

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Preetu!!!
That was sooo cutee!!
The cutest OS I hav evr read!!
Frm wer do such ideas pop up in ur mind yaa??
I cud jus see it all goin in frnt of my eyes!!
Awesome work as always!!
Edited by panchan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️ ❤️ ❤️

from where do you get such ideas Preetu 😲
you should go live with DD i tell you!
i love and just love your writing..
This is the cutest piece of writing on sandhir or shud i say dream team?!
i can totally imagine their expressions!
OMG! 🤣
Edited by tiara888 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...this is the cutest os ever...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMGeee
This is the cutest thing I have ever read😃
I was laughing and Awwing in whole OS
Randhir's I LOVE YOU is out of the world
Love Vardhan sir's reaction at the end🤣
plz keep writing

Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unresd pretty fast dis tym 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reasss
Unres
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Ok first of all...moi very angry...!!!

Mujhe Pm nahi milla PREETIKA...!!!! 😡

And uska result u can very well see...

I'm on EFFING SECOND/THIRD PAGE...

Anyways coming to the os...

It was sooo damn funny...

Jiggy ko dhokla bola..!!🤣
N then jiggy ne jo bola...

"kisi k chacha ne chachi ko chata"

"whaaat ? " sahil bursted , laughing!
"gande bache jiggi!" he continued ...

I was like is this only me thinking like that...😳

Par tu bhi toh aise hi likhti hai...

It was sooo cute...

Loved it yaar preetu...

Love
Ayesha...

Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago

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