SanDhir OS: All too Well

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres


Yeayee I'm the first one! :D


Ri, You are a brilliant writer man. The description of Randhir's situation was just so emotionally deep. There was a point when he was too young to realize his parents unstable relationship.Wish his parents could understand his emotional needs.

Keep writing
Lots of Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress again xD
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Beautiful!
Simply alluring ...

Short sweet and magical!
Aptly described!😳

Yeah...you are defo on a roll!
N m loving it ;)

Preeti<3
Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful song u've chosen as inspiration:)
Your OS regarding current track is fresh and has successfully melded imagination and track dialogues 👏.
I really love to read your work and am eagerly waiting for more 😉
U girl write less but you work oozes quality and emotion ⭐️
Keep writing####
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So many to unres mane..!!🤣🤣
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Unres
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Ri, this one was so "GOOD"!!!
It really touched my heart..!!
His sufferings can bring tears to anyone's eyes.!!😭😭
That feeling which you experience on finding your 'LIFE SUPPORT SYSTEMS', your parents with you full of love is priceless and every noble soul deserves to experience that feeling..😭😭

It hurts deeply when you're surrounded by hatred, no one is there to support you..!!😭😭

Sanyukta' concern for him was genuine, she felt his pain as hers which forced her to open her tear tank..!!😭😭

Loved it..!!❤️
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ri, this is so amazing!

Loved it!!
Specially the last part where Sanyukta tells him that she's there for him!
Beautiful.
You really seem to be on a roll! :D And im loving it!
Way to Go! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was so touchy...It pierced through mah heart...It was in accordance with the ongoing track...short but intriguing...keep writing
Love, Aastha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update yar keep writing :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And again!
OS writing machine you are. xD
This is ineffable. You leave me flabbergasted with each and every work of yours. :'')
One writer you are.
Evermore,
Rini.
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful. Thank you for writing this and making my day. :D:D

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