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crazy_sweeto

@crazy_sweeto

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hi I am sorry for not commenting on your previous but I've liked it, I think.

Anyway coming to your OSs, both were as amazing as anything. You just did an amazing job. Keep it up.

Love

Aparna

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

simply alluring

beautiful update.

u have described randhir' s pain so well .while reading this os i was thinking about that friday's episode .the way param has acted and the way u have descibed randhir's emotions is just same.

really like ur works

keep writing

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: crazy_sweeto
Hi I am sorry for not commenting on your previous but I've liked it, I think.
Anyway coming to your OSs, both were as amazing as anything. You just did an amazing job. Keep it up.

Love
Aparna

It's totally okay, Thanks :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres
Ress again xD
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Beautiful!
Simply alluring ...

Short sweet and magical!
Aptly described!😳

Yeah...you are defo on a roll!
N m loving it ;)

Preeti<3

Thanks

I found it extremely sad though XD

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Irishlily-7795
Wonderful song u've chosen as inspiration:)
Your OS regarding current track is fresh and has successfully melded imagination and track dialogues 👏.
I really love to read your work and am eagerly waiting for more 😉
U girl write less but you work oozes quality and emotion ⭐️
Keep writing####

I heart Taylor <3

I've quoted her songs more times than I care to count :)

I didn't really want to edit the scene, but I didn't have an option. I couldn't remember all the dialogues from the actual episode, so I had to make do.

Thank you :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Na1na
Ri, this is so amazing!

Loved it!!
Specially the last part where Sanyukta tells him that she's there for him!
Beautiful.
You really seem to be on a roll! :D And im loving it!
Way to Go! :)

Why does no one say that it was sad? Because I definitely think so XD

I'm itching to write more, but I'm not sure I'll be able to find the time.

And Thanks :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: aastha3688
This was so touchy...It pierced through mah heart...It was in accordance with the ongoing track...short but intriguing...keep writing
Love, Aastha

I know right! The episode basically broke my heart into teensy tiny pieces . . . and I wanted to write about it. Weird, but that's so XD

Thanks :)

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Na1na

@Na1na

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Oh of course. It is.
Its really sad. Forgot to mention that bit.
My amazing was like 'so-amazing-that-it-broke-my-heart'.
Really.

Now, I hope that does make you happy. :P

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Amazing... but I didn't understand what Vidushi was doing in this OS.

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Amazing... but I didn't understand what Vidushi was doing in this OS.

Vidushi was the one who ended up telling him about his parents divorce, not Sanyukta. That's what I meant. She isn't actually, physically present there.

And Thanks :)

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