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Sukriti

@sukriti11196

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

You were not supposed to make me cry...

😭😭

nope not at all

*sniffs*

weren't they supposed to be dating enemies..

to be fighting..

to be clashing and proving each other wrong...

BUT

you made me cry...

they made me cry and

that too badly...

*sniffs again*

lovely piece of writing though...

and,

Randhir may i just say...

you are very close to become my dream man...

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vaishnavi

@sandhirfan25

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

simply awsome

made me cry ,it was so emotional randhir was as usual cute,actually d whole story was unbeilievably graet !!!!awsome !!!!!!loved it!

u killed it dear ,really u expressed their feeling s those words they were written beautifully.keep writing such great ff os and ss

pm me if u write any

once again loved it 😃!!!!!!!!!!

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Reserved.

O freak did I just read my name :o

Loved the starting darling. Being an inquisitive person, I was so curious as to what had happened that sanyukta was so weak.

Then I read the word "Leukemia" and I knew where this was heading :(

She said she loved Parth *me crying*

these lines <\3

She watched Randhir ignore her.
She saw the pain in his eyes.
She died a little inside, everyday.

I wish Ankit realizes that he is her brother soon.. in the show as well :\

this made me go all Awww...

"Sanyukta I like your hair open."Randhir said, pulling off the rubber band holding her hair in a bun.
"Arghh Randhir. It's so hot. And open hair just makes me feel hotter." Sanyukta replied.
"Really? Surprising that it makes me feel hot too!"Randhir replied mischievously, ducking a pillow thrown in his direction.

Freak yaar. The way you ended. I swear I have tears welled up in my eyes.

You are cruel. I hate you :'(

Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 11 years ago

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Aastha Aggarwal

@aastha3688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This was so beautifully penned.
😭 😭 Deep, Intense. I am not in the right state of mind to say anything else right now. I'll surely edit when I regain normalcy.

--------EDITED------

OMG!! This was so intoxicating.

It was one of the best OS's I've read in the genre of angst.

Did I tell you that u have an unmatchable potential of becoming one of the world's best writers?

Although I'm not a sadist, but this one was shear bliss.

Your admirer,

always and forever,

Aastha.

PS: I've written an OS too. Mind reading it?

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4036962

Edited by aastha3688 - 11 years ago

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whinyteen96

@whinyteen96

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautiful and heart-rending! 💔

Reminiscenced 'A Walk to Remember'...*sigh*

Keep writing!

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972633

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Tanya!

Would you believe that i had tears in my eyes after reading this? I feel this numb feeling that i don't even think i can explain!

Thank you so much for this!

Love you! ❤️

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Tanya, I'm literally out of words. I have seen a few family members dying due to this terrible disease. Knowing that you have only a few days to live is a living death in a way. All your dreams die, your body response slows down. And this exactly is the story of a real life cancer patient.

She wants to live but she sees no point in living thanks to the height of heartlessness her family showed earlier on. Felt so so bad for Randhir... the ending made me cry... please continue writing fabulous fiction. Hope get to see a happy one as well. Lots of love xxx

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

*Picture a wailing baby*

Why? Oh why you do this to me?

*takes a deep breath and focuses on the unadulterated beauty of the writing*

Tanya I'm literally stupefied (yes, HP wala stupefied) as I'm typing this.

I can not stop marveling at the way you penned it down. I don't know what you were you thinking or how you did this but the effect was breathtaking. Yes, my eyes welled up. And that's quite a feat cuz even Dumbledore's death didn't faze me enough to extract tears. I just get that hollow-kinda feeling when I read/see something sad but this- Idk- maybe it was the plain tender way you dished it that my eyes started burning by the time I reached Ankit realizing his mistakes. That moment was the scene stealer for me. :')

Having said that, I thought Randhir was an absolute sweetheart. Like I-want-a-husband-like-him sweetheart! He'd been so considerate and understanding of Sanyukta all along.

And Sanyukta- I loved her characterization. You did justice to the trait of her character that drew us all to the show- her mental strength. Blatantly lying to Randhir to protect him was bound to shatter her. Yet she kept going on. For her family. For Randhir.

I can't go any further without bursting into tears.(I have a reputation to uphold :') ) Just know this- You.touched.me. Moved.me. Blew.me.

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reet21

@reet21

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

i don;t have any single word to write...

OMG...

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Seriously have no words to describe what I am feeling after reading.. you portrayed the emotional scene very well.. the depth of their love was too deep to imagine. I am so overwhelmed after reading it...

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