SanDhir TS 'Tu Mujhme kahin pe bas jaa - Part2 - page3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oaley...!! 😳😳

I love u yaar!! β€οΈπŸ€—and I love every piece that u write! πŸ‘πŸΌ

abhi toh yeh nahi parr raa rahi coz abhiu time nahi hai πŸ˜”...parr i promise time milte hi..(roughly translated, 5 dinn baad...5 din baad mere exams mei break hai!) I'll read aur accha sa detailed comment karungi! Pakka! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

luv ya baby!! keep up the good work! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Oyshee...

Oaley...!! 😳😳

I love u yaar!! β€οΈπŸ€—and I love every piece that u write! πŸ‘πŸΌ

abhi toh yeh nahi parr raa rahi coz abhiu time nahi hai πŸ˜”...parr i promise time milte hi..(roughly translated, 5 dinn baad...5 din baad mere exams mei break hai!) I'll read aur accha sa detailed comment karungi! Pakka! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

luv ya baby!! keep up the good work! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—


oysheeπŸ€—

you really r my soul-sis n will always beπŸ˜ƒ
yeah its ok u read whenever u get time from examz dear!😳

love ye tooπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tu Mujhme kahin pe bas jaa - u dwell inside Me now


Part 2

Finally,sufficent blood was provided to Sanyu,n Randhir's drip was removed...The doc assured Randhir saying "She will be back to her concious self after few mins,or maybe an hour...but she is out-of-danger now...U also go and have something to eat please...U too r very weak now,u need energy to survive n stay up" Saying this th doc left from there,leaving Randhir alone with sanyu...Randhir stood up n went near Sanyu...She was breathing lightly...still looking weak...but now he knew she would be fine,yes she would be back to life in few mins...back to him...He sat beside her n gazed her for a few mins...wiped his tear,n was about to leave,but just then her littile finger locked itself in his little one...He was stunned...

Tune chhuaa.. toh main dhadakne laga
Dil ki duaa.. hothon pe rakhne laga

He couldnt resist it anymore,so he bent down n kissed her forehead...She moaned a bit...He smiled gazing her...n then slowly as he tried to standup,he felt his own senses fading out...Oh damn,ye bhi bhi hi hona tha,he thought...n within a few seconds,he had the blackout...he fainted then n there on Sanyu's bed,just beside Sanyu...the nurse arrived there just then,n seeing him fainting she called the doctor...Randhir was shifted to another room n once again nurse injected drip,but this time if was for glucose bottle as he was very weak now!!

Sanyu gained back conciousness n found herself on the hospital bed...She tried to recollect what had happened n then remembered the whole accident,in her heart blaming herself for it...She looked for Randhir but couldnt find him...For a second she got scared if anything severe had happened to him...but then on the other hand she thought he has left her there to heal all herself...She was a bit angry that he wasnt there.."Maybe he doesnt even care weather I live or die" she mumbled to herself angrily...Just then the nurse came to her n Sanyu asked her how she came her...the nurse told her that a boy brought her here in a very critical condition,n gave his own blood to save her...Sanyu was stunned by the guy's generousity...She asked the nurse "where's the guy,I want to than him for saving me" ...The nurse told her that he is in the adjacent cabin as he had fainted after giving blood,n then she left from there...Sanyu thought to go to him n thank him...So she moved out of her cabin n went to where Randhir was...As sanyu entered his cabin,she was shell-shocked to find that her Saviour was none other then Randhir himself - the guy whom she always thought to be an MCP,who always pretended she is his mortal enemy...Sanyu clasped her hand over her mouth to stop herself from shreiking...She fell on her knees n cried ..."Why did u do this Randhir??Why??Who m I to U,tell me??i can feel U in myself now...do i need to live my whole life with this feeling of u being a part of me?" saying this she cried again...she could feel her veins bursting into flames at the thought of having his blood running inside her veins...Finally she wiped her tears,gathered some strength n stood-up...In the meantime,Jiggy,Parth n Professor Vardhan also arrieved there...They took her to her cabin n led her rest there...After all this had happened,Sanyu felt like she turned into stone...She just sat there,looking nowhere,saying nothing...

Randhir gained back conciousness n was told that Sanyu is OK now...Randhir was happy hearing this...He went to her cabin,n saw her sitting there,stone-cold...He wanted to hug her,take her into his arms...He was thinking that she will come running to him...but she just gazed him...A gaze that sent shrill down his spine...He couldnt understand what it meant...He dint knew what to do,what to say...Just then Vardhan sir arrieved n said "The doctor has said U both can be discharged now..Lets get back to the college then...Sanyukta n Randhir u both come with me in car...Parth n Jiggy have gone to ur accident spot to bring back ur bike Randhir"...N they drove back to the college with Vardhan sir...All the way,sanyu didnt said a single word...

Randhir was hurt,not because she hadnt Thanked him...but becoz of the fact that he couldnt see her like this,turning into stone...For the next 2-3days Randhir waited to talk to Sanyu.but instead,she didnt even came for the classes as well...Randhir was worried for her now...he had decieded that if she doesnt comes today.he will go to her hostel n talk to her...He was too disturbed to attend any classes n so he decieded to go to lab n spend some time alone...He entered the mechnical lab n acciedently bumped onto Sanyu...

Meri raahe.. kadmon pe tere ruke
Ye panaahe.. sajde mein tere jhuke

He gazed her stone-cold eyes ...it had an ocean full of tears in them...Sanyu saw its him,n deciede to leave from there immidietly...but Randhir grabbed her from her hand n took her into the lab n bolted the door...He was furious now...n she was scared...

"Damn U Sanyu...what the hell is wrong with U??" Shouted Randhir furiously at Sanyu...She backed out hearing him shout...but he didnt stayed back...He pushed her lightly to the wall n pinned her hands up n asked..."Why are u behaving so weirdly Sanyu??what have I done that has turned u into stone...Why are u avoiding me???If I have done any mistake then tell me atleast" Randhir said angrily,looking straight into her eyes...he continued"but dont stay soo silent like the way u r nowdays...plz...Itz killing me every single second I see U being so indifferent to me..." Randhir said this as if he was begging her to speak-up...She gazed into his tears-filled eyes...n then pushed him away from her n was walking towards door when again Randhir shouted "What the hell Sanyu atleast tell me whats my mistake??"...Sanyu froze there...n then slowly she turned around...Randhir could see her eyes filled with tears,n realised she's trying hard to hold them backk...Gradually Randhir moved towards her,took her hand in his,n asked her softly "I knw I had hurted u enough that the whole lifetime is less to repent...still if in anyways u can forgive me, I m really sorry Sanyu..." Oh why the hell is he saying sorry to her,she thought as her self-control was fading and she was almost on her knees when suddenly he ceased her from falling...He lifted her n layed her on the nearby table n careassed her face...Finally she spoke - "I dont have words or anything which is enough to thank you for Whatever U have done for me on that day,by being my saviour...But still,I want something from U Randhir...Will U answer honestly,from ur heart,for what m gonna ask from U?"

Randhir was astounded...he couldnt analyse what was going on in her mind...yet he nodded a Yes...she spoke again,n this time with her eyes closed "Marry me Randhir...Will U??" That was all she could say...for she too felt like she was not in her senses now!!n she hugged him tightly putting her head on his shoulders...

N he was horror-struck hearing it...Is she the same Sanyu,he thought...What has happned to her??Ek to ye mujhse do-teen din se kuch keh bhi nahi rahi thi,aur ab jab kaha,to aise,seeedha marry me??? Thinking this he hugged her back too...He stroked the back of her hair lightly n softly asked her "Kya hua Sanyu?ye achanak "marry me" kis liye?just because i gave blood to u??ohh plzz farzi agar tumhari jagah koi aur bhi hota to bhi mai yehi karta" he said that a bit mockingly...but she didnt moved...rather she gripped him even tighter...n said "that day when we were returning from delhi on ur bike n u were talking to me..,i saw a paper sneaking out of ur bag,I pulled it out n found the decoded version of what all u had written on the walls...I was shocked n freaked as I read it...I was highly confused reading ur thoughts on it,n my anger knew no bounds reading ur hyper-emotions about me...n specially the last line had strucked in my heart "Leave me alone"...I was irked to the core,n that the reason why I wanted to jump-off the bike...n ended up us meeting accident..."
Randhir gasped hearing it...he had never in his dreams imagined she would have known his truth n that too at that point of time...

But she held him tightly n said again -"when i woke-up in the hospital and I didnt saw u anywhere,at 1st I was scared that maybe something has happened to u,but then my mind said that u may have left me coz i thought u actually hate me...But then when I came to know that U indeed saved my life,I was lightening-struck knowing to the fact that ur blood runs in my veins now...ye kaisa rishta hai humara Randhir...mai khud confused hu...Do we hate eachother soo much that we cant live without eachother??...and so u led me live by risking ur own life for me??And now a part of u dwells in me too??"

"oh she said the same point that I had said too!!Woohoo indeed we are connected,well we always were"thought he...He loosened his grip over her n moved a bit away so as to face her directly...n said to her cupping her face "Sanyu,that day when I saw u in the pool of blood,i felt as if someone has removed heart from my body...I couldnt even imagine how I would live if something happened to U...but dont behave like u r indebted throughout life for what i have done to U...I saved u,to save myself from losing U"...Randhir's eyes had turned moist now...he continued - "I love U Sanyu, N I mean it from the bottom of my heart...I never knew I loved u untill that day when ur survival was the only thing that mattered to me in this whole world"

Randhir's tears rolled down his cheeks...N so had Sanyu's...She had never got so much love from anyone ever in her whole life...She stood-up from the table,got onto her toes,n kissed him lightly on his lips..."I love U too Randhir...n forever I will..." n he too gave a light peck on her lips...n she continued "n since now we have mutually agreed for our love for eachother,atleast ab to bata do,Will U marry me or no??" she winked at him as she placed her lips on his,for a long passionate one...after a minute or two,when they parted,he said "no way,do u think m mad to marry a farzi like U" n winked...n she laughed...n said "yes U r...mad...n evil...my MCP...n will always be..." she budged in his arms n poked him to say yess...n they ran round n round the tables,enjoying their time together...finally she caught hold of him,n holding his face n looking deeply into his eyes she said "seriously Randhir,plz tell me,Will U marry me??" Her eyes shone,might be coz of tears...He put his hands over hers n said "we are meant to be together u stupid silly gal...of course I'll marry...n not because m ur saviour...but because I love U...N u love me too"...He smiled...n They hugged till forever...

She could never thank him enough for always being there for her...but now she knew,wherever she might be,a part of him will always dwell in her...forever...


End of Part 2

A/N - Sorry i hadnt done proofreading yet
I know i did messed up the 2nd part😭...If ur mind has a better ending...plz suggest😊

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.
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Unres...
Sorry again for reserving first and unres at the last again..

Piya... After reading Part 2, the one line which I wanted to tell you from the bottom of my heart:

"I Love YOU DOST..!!!"😭😭😭


Tumhe meko rula k bahut khushi milti hai na...😭
It was shooo emotional and cute and deep and sensitive and lovely...
Sanyu went through a turmoil of emotions which actually left her dumbstruck... Poor her...
At the same time, Randhir suffered no less...
The affect she had on him and vice-versa... It depicted so much of pain, hurt and the solace: "LOVE"

I can't thank you enough for this one...
Thanks.. !!!
A Big Special wali: Jaadoo ki Jhappi...πŸ€—

And ya, aaj tumhe promote kr diya maine..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Yellow rose se "PINK ROSE"

Love ya..❀️
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PERFECT ending to the PERFECT OS...!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whoa!!πŸ˜†

What an ending!!
Love it ... Absolutely love it ...

That blood thing was awesome ,,,,

And randhir as usual was totally drool worthy ...

Sanyu asking him to marry her ?
Hahahaha ... 😳

Love it piya ...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Really !

Bdw what song is this? I haven't heard it ?
Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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di..please make a vm on this song..preety pleases..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kirtiarora111

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Unres...

First of all, it's very bad of me to reserve the first comment and unres it sooo late... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
What to do.. I had to prepare tea, then watch news and attend my dadi's call... To un sb me late ho gya...
Btw, ye sara bhi.maine phone pe type kia... πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Apologies...

And hey, what did I see u gave credit to kriti.. Is it me?😲😲
If yes, then thank you sooo veryyy much Piya...πŸ€—πŸ€—

Coming to the ts, you never fail to surprise me with your works...
I wish it'd come true in the show as well... But I know they won't let our wishes come true... Maze le rhe hain humse...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Randhir seriously just loves irritating Sanyu... His one and only favorite pass time.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
And jelousy has started taking a toll on him.. I don't know how will he be able to clear his mechanical engineering.. His one and only mission is Sanyu right now.. 🀣🀣

Sanyu is actually really very stubborn... I mean jumping off the bike... And SanDhir accident... Goddd...!!!
Sanyu's kinda seriously hurt.. 😲😲

Randhir is sooo selfless and worried for her.. He didn't even care about his own bruises... He's soo cute yaar...😭😭😭

And that O+ and universal donor thing from science book...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I studied that in school... Though I hated science but still... Even m O+...🀣

All in all, awesome bonanza ts..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Rocking mane..!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘

Love ya



Lol...itz ok dear to res n then unres a bit late too!!!chalta haiπŸ˜†
btw yeah the dedication was for u too(sorry i wrote kriti insttead of kirti)...

At somewhere down the line,i too felt all this was kinda unrealistic,...but then who cares when even our CVs dont care to make the story realistic!!!πŸ˜†
waisi m glad u liked the OS😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

di..please make a vm on this song..preety pleases..


okie baby...will try to make it tonight,else i m absolutely free tomorrow afternoon...will definately do it then!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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There couldn't be a better ending to this..and I love this song...

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