SanDhir TS 'Tu Mujhme kahin pe bas jaa - Part2 - page3 - Page 4

first of all sorry piya di i was not able to read it before

Omg Omg Omg this was one superb TS. Keep writing Piya. You are such a talented girl. God bless you. Lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Read the whole story in one go.. and it was mindboggling... The story has everything.. jealousy, care, guilt, love, confession, if there is anything missing i.e. romance. If you could writer little bit of their romance then it would be great but that doesn't mean that it makes story any less... its really superb.. seriously I cant find appropriate words to say how much I like it.

Heya...M glad U liked it😊
yeah u r rite,romnce is somewhat missing in this OS...Had I written another part of it,i would have definately inserted romance to it too...but in these too parts,it was already so much complicated that I was unable to even sprinkle romance into it!!!😕

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

piya...loved ur whole idea behind...nd d way u incorporated those verses was amazing...nd pure...i luved d way he cared fr her...awww

nd in the second shot...oh dear i kept on wondering her reason but the way u revealed it was so beautiful...
mesmerizing... sandhir at its bestt...
superbbb

heya...M glad u liked it😊
m glad u like the lil suspense of the 2nd part...😉

Originally posted by: Preetika-Sinha

R$!!

Whoops!!

I know ,,, I couldn't have been earlier !😛

Sorry !

*sees inbox *

*message from piya*

*rushes to re$$*

ANOTHER TS BASED ON PRECAP???

*dances all around the house*😆

Off piya ,,, I love you so much for these precap based OS's !!

And this was your best till now !

Man ,,.. RANDHIR is so worried !

Lol... I love the way you chomped off parth ! Hahahaha

Jaa beta bus mai jaa ! 😆

Then the accident 😭

Then blood...

Totally filmy and masaledar! 😳😃👏

Love it!

P.s. thanks for the acknowledgement!!

Love you!

Keep writing!

❤️

RES😛

Originally posted by: soumyamishra

first of all sorry piya di i was not able to read it before

secondly - hey what i see in the dedication

my name

aww...

thanks di

now to the final and the most imporatnt part-

OMG

u r so good.

it was amazing, like always

the way u told the piece of story was fab

i wish i could write like that too *feeling envious*

love always

soumya

piya di...I am running ou t of words now

Originally posted by: asmitadutta

piya di...I am running ou t of words now

everytime u manage to write such amazing os and leave me speechless..

as usual this was such fabulous

and the song...that was a perfect choice

I am really touched after this os

and the title ...is just out of the world

luved it di

buss aise hi dhamekadaar likhte raho

Wow amazing
Just read both parts and they are simply amazing
Can't wait to read more of your work