Sandhir FF:Romancing Mr.MCP - Page 4

Originally posted by: yoyoanjali

hey thatz awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
please do pm me!!

Originally posted by: myrahh

superb start dear
want 2 knw hw randhir is gng 2 stop his luv
update soon pls
nd pm me :)

Originally posted by: federized2210

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I've read it and can give u a feedback now...
But I won't!!! This deserves a detailed review! So after lunch and this time I won't be late!! Pakka!!!! :D -------------------------------------------------------

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Sneha!!!!!

Wow!! Just wow! What a start!!

And what an awesome sequence to start with...

Sanyukta's impending marriage and Randhir's turmoil!!👏

And just how beautifully u penned it all!!!

This was completely RD's POV and u managed to keep him completely in character!

Your writing is simplistic and realistic! That's the best thing about it!!!👏

My favourite part was where RD was reiterating and convincing himself that he wasn't in love

and then ultimately the realization dawned on him that he loved Sanyukta

That part was amazingly penned!

And the last sentence..."Sanyukta, I'm coming for u"...Aaahhh!!!!😳

I can't wait for the next part...U gotta update soon sis!!!!

Love u loads and more,

Your soul-sis,

Anuradha❤️

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

OMG! It was sooo good!

Loved it :*

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Title is really interesting.. Romancing Mr. MCP.. that reminds me of an English Novel I read years ago.

Sanyukta is getting married to Chomu but he has problem with her would be surname "Mittal". He thinks that Agarwal suits her better.. don't worry after some time you will say Shekhawat suit her much better 😆

Glad he flied away on his bike to save her from the ordeal of marriage but wonder how will he do that esp, it was him who made her stuck into his mess?