Sandhir FF:Romancing Mr.MCP - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

60

Views

17.2k

Users

32

Likes

101

Frequent Posters

snehatalk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#21

😳 Sorry baby!
Irij55 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Amazing upload next part soon
snehatalk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: azina

Amazing upload next part soon


Sure...thanx for reading
Supertrouper thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#24
@ sneha : it sounds so very interesting... Plz do continue...
ShefaliMalhotra thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#25

The whole chapter was based on Randhir

And you too have done justice with the character

The Randhir we see in the show is what I saw in this FF

His inner turmoil was beautifully represented

It's only right that I should be the first one to congratulate her on her marriage." He grinned "I made it happen after all."

These lines were the best!!

After all they portrayed THE RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT!!

He drove to Delhi only because he wanted to taunt on her marriage!! Typical Randhir!!

Then the way you made him realize his feelings was fab!!

Will wait for the next part!!

If possible, PM me when you updt!!

Love,

Shefali

P.S. I wished to give a detailed review but have to leave for my coaching...so am ending it here itself

Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
snehatalk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Supertrouper

@ sneha : it sounds so very interesting... Plz do continue...


Thank you supertrouper
snehatalk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

The whole chapter was based on Randhir

And you too have done justice with the character

The Randhir we see in the show is what I saw in this FF

His inner turmoil was beautifully represented

It's only right that I should be the first one to congratulate her on her marriage." He grinned "I made it happen after all."

These lines were the best!!

After all they portrayed THE RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT!!

He drove to Delhi only because he wanted to taunt on her marriage!! Typical Randhir!!

Then the way you made him realize his feelings was fab!!

Will wait for the next part!!

If possible, PM me when you updt!!

Love,

Shefali

P.S. I wished to give a detailed review but have to leave for my coaching...so am ending it here itself



Thank you shefali for reading and for your lovely comment...its ok ...i loved the feed back you have given...makes me feel as if am on the right track...will try to pm you when i update
100littledevils thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome start! I just loved how u explained his panic LOL. Panic attacks.. I can so imagine them ! Finally he realized! Can't wait for him to reach her house <3 please update soon!
snehatalk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

Awesome start! I just loved how u explained his panic LOL. Panic attacks.. I can so imagine them ! Finally he realized! Can't wait for him to reach her house <3 please update soon!


Thanx for reading ...yes will update soon
yoyoanjali thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#30
hey thatz awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
please do pm me!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".