sandhir:Hold my hand forever updated the last part on page 10 pa - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank ,I will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudi_4m_kol

hi gowri

welcome🤗

vry nice story ...really lykd it ...

well done dr :)

cont. plz


-- Sudi



Thank you! Paka I will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessaaliya

nice start...do continue!


Yes I will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz update soon. Nce cncept. plz sad endng mt krna...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just Brilliant start , do continue soon 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,sorry for the delay!next part unfolds here
She ran ...she ran as fast as much as her leg can take her
She caught a cab and told the directions whilst sobbing her heart out.promising the God that she will never see her fav serials so he will allow Randhir to live...with her forever
She wanted to be in his arms forever!
Will she ever see his smirk ,his angry face yet so cute
But why God ?why did you choose this time to play your cruel trick to us?
She was left unanswered fr all the qns which she shot at God!why?
Her eyes were glassy,her face pale she totally looked like a ghost
She was instantly pulled out from her thoughts by hearing the screeching sound of tyres
Drivers:madamji,hospital aagaya!
S:ham
She pulled out some notes from her purse and stuffed it into the drivers hand and ran to the entrance ..she entered the lift and ran to the ICU where he was admitted earlier
She peeped through the glass to see her soul but she can't as the doctors were crowding around his bed
She looked around to see uncle but he was nowhere
She thought of calling him
,she fished her bag to find that her phone missing oh !I left it in my hostel room
She suddenly sees a nurse stepping out from the casuality
She ran towards her
S: how is he sister nodding her head towards the ICU
N:he is in a critical condition ,we will try our best giving her a faint smile
Sanyu was going to broke down
When she saw the doctors stepping out from ICU
Doc to nurse
D:poor man !he just breathe his last breathe
Sanyu screamed :nooo this can't be happening no way my prince will come to me I know he will be mine
Sanyu broke down,her knees can't hold her back anymore
She saws a stretcher being pushed out from the ICU to the mortuary
She sseea a body covered in white
So my soul has eft this world for me to leave alone
She throws all things around
She thi king to herself"if he left me why should i live in this world
Why!why the he'll did you do this to me god ,I will never let you take him away fromme
I will never let you,you cannot separate us from death right!
I will come to you Randhir,we can live together forever in hell or heaven
I will !"
She rubbed all the tears which leaves all the stain marks on her face
She walks to the busy road,he had been hit by a truck,so I will take my life by hitting from truck saying this to herself she stepped in front of a truck which was coming in a high speed
Now she can only see some visions her prince fighting with those bas***ds to save my dignity,he getting jealous of yoyo for flirting WD me,,his brown orbs assuring her
Now she can only hear a buzzing sound and blood all over her
I will come to you my prince...
Sorry guys for stopping at. Dead end
I will update of tomorrow otsef
Plz leave your valuable comments
I won't be able to reply to some of your post as my limit for posting is over
With love,
Gowri:-)


Hshhd



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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a way to end an update ...
loved your comment at the end saying DEAD end part
can't wait to see what happens next
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sad ending diya tho i will kill u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U just gave me a heart attack! Me scared... :( and it was a fabulous update trust me! I loved it! What an end to the story! U scared me! Hope sanyu and RD , both will be fine! Waiting to read more! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u jst scared me yaar gowri...
I thought that was the end but no story is remaining...yeah..
but plz don't give a sad ending..plz..
eagerly waiting for the next part. .
update soon.waiting. .

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