'FOREVR' A SanDhir OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Appy di :( I am so glad I didn't read this last night or else I'd have slept crying away :'(

So damn...emotional! Kya jarurat hai itna dukhi aatma kahaani likhne ka :(

Sanyukta loved him. Randhir loved her. STill he fixed her marriage wd Sameer, Sanyukta's heart must've shattered :( And dey sacrificed their love for what? Sanyukta's wedding was a failure...Dowry nd divorce the next day!! ARghh!

28 years later...Sanyukta was in Punjab..away from everyone? :'(

Randhir...Oh my poor little guy x(

I am forgiving you for making me cry so much because you gave a beautiful ending. The part where Randhir AND Sanyukta both are in the ''other side of life'', it was beautiful! Thank god its never too late..and dey finally said I love you <3

"Coz we stopped living the day we parted ways!" she whispers.

My favorite line^^ So genuine..so true <3

Appy di not fair tho. I want a happy fairy tale next time!

Show mein kya kum taraswaate hai jo yaha bhi shuru?🤢😡

Happy vaala fic next time xD Get it?

Its an order by the hitlelr!

Love,

Tanya<3

Originally posted by: ..vanshika..

That was simply awesome.

I never expected such a marvelous OneShot

You are damn creative

Will love to read more os from you!

Originally posted by: ArSha_TillIDie

Arpita,
Oh man, this is so so sooo beautiful. *clutches heart*
That part where Randhir takes her to the Mandap, and the whole ending. Wow. It's heartbreaking, but it's also pure genius.
My tears kepy falling and I let it fall, it touched my heart so much.
You're one hell of a writer. Keep writing. :)
Kudos.
Love and respect,
Nivedita. :)

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Res!!!
---unres--
Appy!!!!!
I loved it!!!!!!!
Uh noe generally my comments are novel sized, but this the first time I duuno wot to say...uh made me cry en smile at the same time is all I can say!!!
It was ethereal!!!!
One more OS pleaseee????
Love ya
Samaira

Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher

arpita..

you made me emotional..

it was full of angst yet so touchy.

two eternal lovers paid back in their own coin.. so beautiful..