'FOREVR' A SanDhir OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Reminescence

You heart breaker. T_T

Loved itt, btw.
My FF takes quiet a similar turn though. :O

Well written, Arpita. :)

Originally posted by: vishruta

OMG

it was simply beautiful

you made me cry at the end...

lovely os

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

what an amazing piece of work. totally unusual and unique.

with her groom Sameer... it shattered me to the core but further you carried out the story really amazingly. both had loved each other but didn't know the feelings of other. that's why they say confess it before its too late.

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

THIS OS WAS THE BEST OF YOUR WRITINGS👏👏👏

IT MADE ME CRY AGAIN😭😭😭

BOTH DEAD ON THE DEATHBED OF RANDHIR THAT ALSO AFTER 28 YEARS!!!

OH GOD!!1PLS HELP ME STOP CRYING😭😭😭

AAPKO ITNE FABULOUS IDEA KAHA SE AATE HAI?????

THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED EACH AND EVERYTHING IS SOOO PERRRFECT!!!!

I HAVE TO LEARN FROM YOU TO HOW TO WRITE A STORY AND I AM SERIOUS

A VERY IMP REQUEST:

PLS PM ME IF YOU WRITE ANYTHING

thank you sooo much prachi!!!!!'
and haan i have always PMd you😭😭😭😭😭

Originally posted by: nehapachori

So heart touching...you made me cry 😭..It was hard to continue reading ICU part.. But finally they are Together Forever 😊
👏

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

"I won't let you die alone MCP!" she smiles too as she comes closer.

"Ummm... I guess we're dying at the age of 52. Why do we look like 20 years old college students?" he asks, confused.

"Coz we stopped living the day we parted ways!" she whispers.

I hope you know how wonderful this thing is that you wrote 😛 I was really being all happy-happy and then you had to put a twist, didn't you? 🤔 But me likes. I feel so sad for Randhir, even though he didn't knew until she was sitting there with Sameer that he loved her 😒

The time lapse! Oh damn. Did you have to kill them? I guess you did .. because the lines I quoted above are one of the best I've read so far in this forum ❤️

Kudos man! Excellent work :)