~Confu$ion~ - My first OS! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is so cute..but so small.. kash aisa sach main hota..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

this is so cute..but so small.. kash aisa sach main hota..


Frankly, i feel an OS should be small...isliye chota likha...😆
Next time il keep it abit more long!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O.M.G sishta...you write...and you write so well...hehe another similarity 😉 [yes I am bragging about myself... and you cant deny it now 😆]
I loved the concept on the whole...how randhir was defensive about sanyu and how sanyu was so understanding...it was just beautiful their protectiveness towards each other...I've always wanted to see randhir this way about sanyu...and sanyu trying to reduce his pain...you fulfilled my wish...thank you so much behna 🤗
But I have a complaint... I don't like something about your OS damn...why was this so damn short? 😭 isse lambe toh analysis posts likh leti haina... 😡 Jaldi se write more...and agli baar lamba likhna warna you know your punishment don't you 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--

O.M.G sishta...you write...and you write so well...hehe another similarity 😉 [yes I am bragging about myself... and you cant deny it now 😆]

I loved the concept on the whole...how randhir was defensive about sanyu and how sanyu was so understanding...it was just beautiful their protectiveness towards each other...I've always wanted to see randhir this way about sanyu...and sanyu trying to reduce his pain...you fulfilled my wish...thank you so much behna 🤗
But I have a complaint... I don't like something about your OS damn...why was this so damn short? 😭 isse lambe toh analysis posts likh leti haina... 😡 Jaldi se write more...and agli baar lamba likhna warna you know your punishment don't you 😈


Behna i am sooo happy u liked it!!!!! Evn I wish to see such an equation between sandhir...pata nahi kab woh din aega...
N yes, i know u r a good writer..so feel free to brag abt urself!😉
next OS bada likhungi..pakka..😛
plzzz, mujhe woh punishment mat de!! I promise next one will be lengthy!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that is something I am dying to see on SH ... Just imaging this being a huge smile on my face

Dakku daddy needs to know where he is standing and how his son will not take orders which will make his life unhappy.

Randhir standing up for sanyukta awww my fangirl heart all fluttering ... *imagining*

Very well written girl do it more often totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

Awww that is something I am dying to see on SH ... Just imaging this being a huge smile on my face

Dakku daddy needs to know where he is standing and how his son will not take orders which will make his life unhappy.

Randhir standing up for sanyukta awww my fangirl heart all fluttering ... *imagining*

Very well written girl do it more often totally loved it


Yeah, the drunk dad needs to knw randhir is nt hsi puppet!
Happy u liked it!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Afra.. awesome OS..
do come with more..
i wish i could give you a long comment, but hope you understand my time limit..
best of luck..


p.s: i'll always love your poems more than OSs though.. waiting for another one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher

Afra.. awesome OS..

do come with more..
i wish i could give you a long comment, but hope you understand my time limit..
best of luck..


p.s: i'll always love your poems more than OSs though.. waiting for another one.


Yeah, i undrstand the time constraints!!😊
Ok, i am definitely goin to write more poems then...!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suumi

Its amazing...
❤️


Thank u!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Awesome-blossom

Res
Unres---

Awesome os 👍🏼

Beautifully described 😊

The start was too gud!

Sanyu did it only to bring a smile on randhir's face 😳
The confusion thng was vey clearly described! How dey wer confused n ol
The title goes with this os 👍🏼

personal brand of Heroin...
😆. 😳

Do write more ⭐️


Harshu...i am glad u liked it!!!!😊

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