~Confu$ion~ - My first OS!

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"Randhir, its ok..." she said, why wasn't he understanding that none of this was his fault, infact it was hers! She had forced him to come for this so called party, his only mistake was he pressurized her to accompany him!

"No, its not ok sanyukta!" he yelled, his pitch so loud that sanyukta took a step back, only to bang in the wall behind her. Tightening the grip on her shoulders, he continued, "How dare he question ur character? How dare he question ur intentions? Who is he to hold ur hand that tight and threaten u?"

"He is ur dad..." those words left her mouth in a fraction of a second, though somewhere she knew she shouldn't have said them .And she was soo right -her words hit him like lightening, yes the person who insulted his sanyu was his dad! And doesn't he do the same thing with her?
Then y was it that he was soo angry on his dad? He really had no answers!
All he knew was that he was sorry, and would do anything to seek forgiveness...

"I am really sorry.." he said again, looking straight into her green eyes, and all sanyu could see was pain,hurt,guilt,anger...All she wanted was to free him off all these emotions, and just as a reflex action, she touched his face, caressing his cheeks, going all the way down to his lips...

Stop, what are u doing!- Her brain screamed, but her heart retaliated saying this was all she wanted! Listening to her heart and going by randhir's response, she knew she was doing the right thing, and almost a second later Randhir felt her lips on his, and he responded by taking his hand all the way down to her waists, clenching them tight while her hands made their way to his hair, holding them tight!

Sanyukta wondered what this new unknown feeling was which was giving them both a high, while all randhir wanted was to stay like this forever...
Just when she decided to give a thought to this new feeling, she felt randhir's lips turn into a smile- This was it! This was all she wanted...to free him of his pain! She did it!
And both of them continued enjoying this new found feeling,that was like their personal brand of Heroin....


Ok, i would be more than happy to know ur views..Please state what u liked, what u didn't...feel free to criticize coz thats what will help me improve! 😊
And i know the title does nt go perfectly with the OS, bt it portrays how they r confused abt their new found feelings...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!!!RES!!!!!!!!!RES!!!!!!!
unresing!!!!!!!!
U r writing an OS!!!!!!
OMG ...!!!!!...
Always ur post r awesum...
and nw os tooo...
Awww...It was so cute!!!!!
I really loved it...
Randhir wud fight with anyone for Sanyu...Even if its his father...That was so cute!!!!!!
It brought a smile to my face...!!!!!
And the new found feeling...Let it develop with no boundaries!!!!!!!!!
Please keep Writing!!!!!!!!
Love Rekha!!!!!
Edited by Rekha85 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!!!!!!!!!!
UNRES!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Me second!!!!!!!!! dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika ya ya ya ya ehe ehehe!😆😆
This OS was really really really awesome!!!!!!!!!
are u sure its your first time?
I loved your concept!!!
The title too was good. i mean it was apt for the os totally.
Oh god! i so loved loved loved Randhir in this os. he actually was blaming his dad just coz of his enemy?
And sanyukta!!!!!! u go girl!!!!!!!
I liked how portrayed the whole scene. it was perfect with the sandhir touch intact in it. i could actually imagine them.
And she kissed him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *goes off to sandhir world*
*screensaver appears*😲
*jerks off the dreamland nd gets back to the comment*😆
All in all i loved the os. you definitely shud write more.
wud love to see more of your works!
Love
Shreya

Edited by swarontruelove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written... Yeh dil mange more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres---

Awesome os 👍🏼

Beautifully described 😊

The start was too gud!

Sanyu did it only to bring a smile on randhir's face 😳
The confusion thng was vey clearly described! How dey wer confused n ol
The title goes with this os 👍🏼

personal brand of Heroin...
😆. 😳

Do write more ⭐️

Edited by Awesome-blossom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rekha85

RES!!!RES!!!!!!!!!RES!!!!!!!

unresing!!!!!!!!
U r writing an OS!!!!!!
OMG ...!!!!!...
Always ur post r awesum...
and nw os tooo...
Awww...It was so cute!!!!!
I really loved it...
Randhir wud fight with anyone for Sanyu...Even if its his father...That was so cute!!!!!!
It brought a smile to my face...!!!!!
And the new found feeling...Let it develop with no boundaries!!!!!!!!!
Please keep Writing!!!!!!!!
Love Rekha!!!!!


Rekha, i am sooo glad u liked it so much! 😊 I was nt expecting it too b appreciated so much..thanks alot! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swarontruelove

RES!!!!!!!!!!

UNRES!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Me second!!!!!!!!! dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika ya ya ya ya ehe ehehe!😆😆
This OS was really really really awesome!!!!!!!!!
are u sure its your first time?
I loved your concept!!!
The title too was good. i mean it was apt for the os totally.
Oh god! i so loved loved loved Randhir in this os. he actually was blaming his dad just coz of his enemy?
And sanyukta!!!!!! u go girl!!!!!!!
I liked how portrayed the whole scene. it was perfect with the sandhir touch intact in it. i could actually imagine them.
And she kissed him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *goes off to sandhir world*
*screensaver appears*😲
*jerks off the dreamland nd gets back to the comment*😆
All in all i loved the os. you definitely shud write more.
wud love to see more of your works!
Love
Shreya



Ur reply brought a smile on my face! Yes, i am writing for the first time..😆
I wil write more...
Thanks alot for liking my work...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supertrouper

Beautifully written... Yeh dil mange more...


Thank u! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m so late..sorry iffu baby..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

m so late..sorry iffu baby..


Ur not late...!! its ok! 😆

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