SanDhir OS : The Nameless Feeling

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!
This is my second try on SanDhir! First was :
www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3902497

Anywayz this is an one shot! I hope you enjoy! Criticism is welcomed with open hands!! 😊

THAT NAMELESS FEELING (Inspired by the precap of 03/02/14 and Jab We Met)

General P.O.V.
Sanyukta told Sameer that she was obsessed with ants "Choti Choti, cute cute ants. Maene to paali bhi hai. Par mere mumma papa ko mat bolna. They know nothing about it"
He nodded, not sure how to react.
"Acha mae aapko apni paaltu ants dikhau? Aap yhi rukna. Kamre se jaana mat. Mae abhi aayi"

Sanyu got up and came out. She saw Randhir working on the car and an idea came to her. She smiled, wickedly, and went for the stairs.

Meanwhile, Sameer got bored in the room and decided to look around for Sanyu. He came outside to see Sanyu and Randhir in front of each other.

"Vo aa gya?" Sanyukta whispered to Randhir
"Haan" Randhir replied, confused.
"Hume dekh rha h?"
"Haan. Kya chal rha h tumhare khurafati dimaag me?" He asked through knotted eyebrows.

"I don't want to go in. I want to be with you. Lets run away. I love you, Randhir. I love you so much!" She said and hugged him, much to his suprise.

Randhir noticed Sameer watching them and pushed Sanyu away.

"Bro ye sab ye natak kar rahi hai" he said to him.
"Haan, sameer, esa kuch nhi hai jesa tum soch rahe. Hum to bas by-the-way friends hai. We are both in the same college na. Humare beech college me bhi kuch nhi hua tha" Sanyu said, innocently.
"Dekh, ye natak band kar apna!" Randhir said to Sanyu. "Bro humare bich me kuch bhi nhi hai. Ye tumhe bas dikhana chahti hai ki esa kuch hai" he said to Sameer.

"And woh mujhe esa kyu dikhana chahegi ?" Sameer asked. But, before Randhir could reply, he went inside the house.

Sanyukta looked at Randhir and smiled, wickedly.

"Aww tumhara plan to fail ho gya"

She put her arms around his neck and pulled him closer, as if trying to tell that she was the boss here. That she made him work for her today.

Randhir's eyes were burning with anger.

She got up into her toes and captured his lower lip into her lips. She didnt move, didnt kiss him. Just stayed that way and then left his lip and chuckled. Randhir was too shocked to reply.

"Mujhe dhamki de rhe the na. Lo. Ab to maene hi kiss kiya tumhe. Bata do sabko andar ja k" she said, wickedly.

She knew Randhir wont do that. He will get nothing but "chappals" of agarwal males if he did that.

There was a part of Randhir which had started hating Sanyukta even more. But there was another part, that was taking over now. The part filled with passion and a feeling he didnt want to name.

He grabbed her hair and pulled her closer, kissing her as hard as he could.

It was Sanyukta's turn to get shocked now. Her eyelids shot open. She didnt kiss back. Hell, she couldnt even register a thing. But then she gave up to the passion building inside her.

She kissed him back, her arms around his neck, pulling him closer. Randhir's other hand went for her waist. He gripped her waist pulling her closer. Their bodies was grinding against each other. Still they would have pulled the other one closer, if provided the chance.

Randhir left her lips and attacked her neck. Kissing every sqaure of skin he could find there. She moaned his name with her eyes closed.

Then, the realisation hit her and she pushed him away, their eyes showing pure passion and that nameless feeling.

They said nothing to each other. They had no explainations, no reasons. They just stared into each others eyes. Their passion changing into hatred again.

"You know what, farzi engineer? Just stay away from me" he finally said and started walking away.

But one thing was clear now, and they both knew it. There was a pull that made them come in front of each other. There was an attraction that made them do things to each other that no one would think of doing to there enemies.

They knew there was this feeling that they didnt want to name. They didnt want to think about it.

Hell, they wished they could ignore it.
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I'm sorry it came out as crap. /.\

But it just came in my mind and I wanted to share. Do temme what you think about it. Thankz! I love you so much! Bye! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its so beautiful... every precap give us great os:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee...!!!!!!!!😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Nice take on the precap! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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They kissed AGAIN???? They really cnt keep their hands off of each other can they?? N i loved the jab we met twist u introduced here...wish they had shown the same thing n nt this bitchy randhir...im hating him nw!! But, ur os ws awsome...keep it up😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So full of passion! Felt like I was watching a dark Hollywood movie with the fun twist of Jab We Met! Do write more and pm me when you do! Please read my OSs also :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Da lajie soul phinally commants!!

This is crazy!! I have always loved your work not knowing its you! Damn man!! I got to be a lunatic!! This is sheer bliss! The way you portrayed the kiss out of passion and no vulgarity!! You are teaching me how to write sensuality!! I am totally in love with you!!
Love
Iptisha 🤗

P.S.---Did you notice the absence of NaRi in my comment??🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Da lajie soul phinally commants!!

This is crazy!! I have always loved your work not knowing its you! Damn man!! I got to be a lunatic!! This is sheer bliss! The way you portrayed the kiss out of passion and no vulgarity!! You are teaching me how to write sensuality!! I am totally in love with you!!
Love
Iptisha🤗

P.S.---Did you notice the absence of NaRi in my comment??🤣



That first line and I was Loling!!

Haha!! You lazy soul!! Hadd hai by god!!

P.S. As soon as I saw your comment I silently prayed "Please god.. Dont make her imagine NaRi like this" before reading the comment !

Pheww!! I'm glad you let this one go !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Nikki :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awesome. Keep writing such great OS, SS & FF on SanDhir :)

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