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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Dwipanita


Fabulous totally. loved it so much

@blue bold, radha, shabri kya?😆

@brown bold, high point😳



lol thanks btw u did nt answer my question..?? i quoted pichle page par😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: dheera_1



@dwipanita ...any comment about the name of director😉😛 ...i thought u wd notice😆

oh I missed the question. but yes I noticed director name very well, sayad I forgot to tell, whenever I read the name mere dimag mein yeh hi baat aayi are isne toh haider ka nam hi de dia, not bad
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
mannz , jasminerahul, tanika, anondo...thanks ppl..next part soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwipanita

oh I missed the question. but yes I noticed director name very well, sayad I forgot to tell, whenever I read the name mere dimag mein yeh hi baat aayi are isne toh haider ka nam hi de dia, not bad



kya kare dil o dimag pr haider hi chaya hai abhi toh😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
I love the tension they have between each other! And both of them admitted that they're good looking lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update...👏
Waiting for next part....
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3:

Dharam made the entry to the sets on first day of shoot..he was prepared with all the homework he has been asked...moustache checked light stubble ..dhoti-kurta get up...and desi gujrati accent with a touch of male chauvinism checked...so was his character of this middle aged gujju business man who has mullti-million business of chilli processing and allied agro products.

As dharam walked towards the entry point ..he thought to himself that it was better that he and that modi girl didn't have much of scenes together..as his character wdd just be build for about one month before they finally shoot their scenes...and he can largely avoid her off shoot...hence avoiding her stupid presence too...why did he dislike her so much..? he didn't know...bt hey well then..he doesn't like pretty much anyone..he thought...he and his brooding nature was enough for him.

Meera was so excited for her first day of shoot but a bit nervous too... she was asked to portray a brat-y girl ...and her image was already that of a Hotel heiress ,and people would just simply assume that she wd be brat..which she wasn't(to some extent) but playing this role would further enhance that thinking...but she had decided that she would be nice , warm and friendly to everyone on set so that they would know the real her...before judging her and she had also decided that no matter what the industry rumours say. She would also be friendly to the apparently Rude Dharam suryavanshi.

They both reach the sets simultaneously..and after appears to be infinity of an eyelock...director introduced them to other co actors and crew...

Meera : hi everyone ... I am so glad to meet everybody on the sets...we shd have great fun here ..and here are some sweets... I have brought it for everyone

Dharam(under his breath) : what a show off she is...(and then going with flow ) yeah hi everyone..i guess if intro is over we shd start shooting

As he has guessed she and dharam didn't had scenes together today.. In between the shoots and takes..while everyone ganged up together laughing..or joking..eating together..he used to politely excused himself...and finding a lone corner he used to sit and read his fav novel... but he couldn't help but observe this young girl...laughing...hugging everyone..clicking senseless stupid selfies...what was about her...why does she have to prove to everyone that she is so happy in her life thereby demean the lifes of others...lesser mortals...and why was she trying to became best friends with everyone on first day?...was it possible she was really that nice? he thought

Dharam : no...she cant be that nice...after all she is a high and mighty princess..born with silver spoon..how can she understand humility ..all she is ..is a pretense...oh god...why am I giving her so muc importance ...why do I keep thinking abt her...oh god I really need to keep my nose in this book rather than analysing her

He starts reading again this time with determined concentration

Meera : dharam ji...ye aap apne aap se kya baatein kar rahe the?...btw I am so sorry wo uss din studio mein hum ache se baat nhi kar paye..wo sorry.. I was a bit cranky u see I had not..

Dharam (cutting her sentence mid way): its ok..really..i don't even remember.that day...and as for talking... I really don't bother much for talking.. I don't really like to chat

Meera : ooh..par kya kare baat toh karni padti hai na set par..set toh family ki tarah hota na...vaise aap kya pad rahe...maiko toh na novels padna bilkul acha nhi lagta...merkko toh na chapad chapad karna acha lagta hai..no really I love to talk..aur jab mai nervouse hoti hoon na,,.toh aur bhi ...

Dharam(cutting her again) : haan wo dikh raha ki aapko bakad bakad.. I mean bolna kitna pasand hai..unfortunately mujhe apna solitude and privacy bhot pasand hai... and I wd now like to read my book ..if u pls excuse me now

Meera: ohh..ok...fir baad mein milte hai...waise mai apko batana chahti wo jo role kia than a aapne mihir ka..?

Dharam gives her such a furious look...if looks could kill..meera would have been dead...

Meera : ohh ok...koi nhi ..hum baad mein baat krte hain...I think abhi I should go..

Meera(to herself) : kya sadu banda hai yaar..itna attitude..sab sahi kehte iske bare mein...mujhe kya zarurt hai isse baad karke apni bezatti karne ki..huh...

But then she closes her eyes for a brief second and think wat her mother would have said...

Gopi : have faith in kanha ji...don't give up on something so soon...and be nice too everyone..even those who are not nice too you

Meera(talking to herself): you are right mum..i am not giving ... I ll try again ..

After pack up...

Haider : hey..dharam..i am taking the unit for dinner..join us

Dharam (looking at a very excited meera) : No thanks...but I like to do dinner at home.. I ll take your leave now...bye..see you all tomorrow

Dharam reaches home

Dharam : priya priya... Where are you...khaana lagao jaldi yaar bahot bhook lagi hai ...

Priya : you came early..i didn't prepare anything coz earlier I had called on your set and the director told me ...today was a crew dinner for ...so I thought you would come after dinner

Dharam : priya ..you know me ...in past 5 years...how many crew dinner have I attended..? Don't I always have dinner with you and rohan...unless its an outdoor shoot..? par nahi tumhe ye khayal nahi aaya ki ek baar apne pati se puchlo phone par,...

Priya : oh please..how convenient of you...jab yaad aya toh mai aur rohan tumhari family hog aye...jab saara time apne shooting and theatre mein busy rehte...ya jab pichle 2 saal se apne sharab ke nashe mein doobey the..tab wife aur bte ki yaad nahi aayi tumhe?

Dharam : ...you know I was in a serious depression..and frustrated on the career front...and tumne kaunsa wife hone ka farz nibhaya hai... I was depressed but you didn't make it easier for me either...priya...roz roz ke taano se meri life hell bana rakhi thi tumne...aur role bhi mene sirf tumhare kehne par hi liya tha,,,nahi toh I wanted to dedicate my self to theatre...par...tum ho ki u r not doing anything to support me

Priya : bas...aate hi tumne ladna shuru kar diya na...u cant change ...and role le kar kya koi ehsaan kia hai tumne...mai and rohan tumhari responsibility hai...aur ek baat sun lo

Priya was about to go on and on when she stops seeing her 5 year old kid appearing silently from behind the door...seemingly frightened watching his parents watch...

Rohan: mum..dad...pls don't fight..pls its scary

Dharam( now visibly softened) : no no...baby we are not fighting...we were just discussing...sorry did disturb ur sleep

Rohan : no papa...I was just waiting for you...you told me na...ki aap mujhe aaj wo prince wali kahani ka part 2 sunaege...

Dharam: yes my baby ..of course papa remembers...priya you go and sleep I ll make something for my self..and will spent sometime with rohan...then will come to sleep

Priya silently walks off

Rohan : papa can u make something for me too... I just had some milk..but I think I am hungry...

Dharam : mumma ne tumhe bhi khaana nhi dia..how could she...priya mai abhi usko

Rohan : no pls papa...mumma kuch mat kehna...aaj maid aunty bhi nahi aayi...mumma bahar gayi thi to meet her friend..wahan se late aayi thi..unhone wahi dinner kar liya tha...and then she was too tired ..so she gave me bournvita

Dharam : koi nahi beta..papa will make some yummy pasta for both of us...then we will read together ok...

Late that night when dharam finally came to his room and get into his bed...where he slept with a virtual stranger for past 3 years in 5 years of their marriage ...he thought of his life...what a mess it had been..and then slipped into dreams...of happier time...when rohan was born..when ...then nightmares of the bad times...and his current mess of life...and then as if unexpectedly ...his traitor dreams showed him a face...he least expected in his sleep...a beautiful young girl...meera...meera modi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Too good man, you have written both the characters very well. You are Just killing it. Waiting for the next update😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

Too good man, you have written both the characters very well. You are Just killing it. Waiting for the next update😃



thanks tanika😛...btw who is the couple in ur dp? they look nice

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