As Fate would have it - Page 11

Originally posted by: mannz

Beautifully written. Loved the whole update but a few things stood out for me.

The coffee date and the closeness between the two. And then the ending when he closes his eyes and sees her face but he hesitates to see the full face and backs out by opening his eyes.

Can't wait to read the next part and thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: dheera_1

Heyy guys...thanks for coping up with my exams...and bearing with late update...but as promised...here is the 6th part...and NEXT part...sooner than u can imagine😊😉

Happy reading people...but pls do comment...abt ur views😃

PART 6

That afternoon when the duo returned to sets...every one saw
this change of wind...the two co star that couldn't stand each other were
retuning from some where together and both were laughimg continuously...well
actually meera was laughing...and dharam was smiling...bt since hardly even
smiled...so even that was big

Haider : arey yaar
kaahan gayab hogaye the tum dono ...kab se sab tumhe yaahan dhund rahe
the...common aaj se shooting ka second schedule begin karna hai...

Meera: sorry sir...wo mere wajah se dharam sir ko bhi late ho
gyaa...but we are ready..bus aap ek baar brief kar do about the scene

Haider : ok so here the scene goes...meera ur dad decides u to
punish u for ur late night Stunt and for lack of interest in studies...so he
asks you to do an internship with D.S...and D.S you...u have been asked by Mr.
modi to teach meera a lesson or two in humility and humblness...so u wd take
whatever ,measures at your office to tame her and make meera humble,...ok
so nowboth of u ready?

Yes they both echoed in unison

Dharam (on phone): haan mota bhai boliye kaise phone kia...sab
theek

Mr.Modi : wo dharam
bhai...mene ek baar dubaara aapko sorry bolne ko phone kia tha,,,...wo meri beti ne
jo aapke saath badtammezi kki na

Dharam : aabhi java de
ne mota bhai...aapke aur mere dhaande mein kitne purani dosti..chddo...haan par ek
baat zarur kahonga...wo ladki ko agar bachpan mein ek kaan ke neeche mara hota
na...toh aaj yeh haal na hota...

Mr. modi : mai janta
hu dharam bhai ki mene hi usse itna bigaad diya hai...par ab mein yeh galti
sudharna chahta hoon...aur mujhe aapki help chaiye...aap please mere beti ko
thodi tameez aur insaaniyat sekhane mein meri help karenge??...

Dharam : par...mai
kaise...yeh aapke ghar ka mamla hai...aur wo chokri mujhse nafrat karti hai...wo
meri baat kabhi nahi manegi...

MR. modi : uusko manni
hogi aapki har baat...kyunki ab se woh aapke yahan internship karegi...apne kaha
than a...ki apki company mein ek marketing manager ki jagah khaali hai...aur meera
ka specialisation bhi wohi hai...bass aap pls mana mat kariyega...

Dharam : kya...nan
a...mota bhai...maaf karo...aapki uss pagal dikri ko mai apne yahan nahi rakh
sakta pata nahi kab kisska sir phode
wo...

Mr.modi : pls dharam
bhai aapko mere liye ye karna hi hoga...aap meri akhiri hope ho...aur mai aapko
freedom deta hu...usko zameen par laane ke liye aap usse kitna bhi daante ya
regular employees jaisa behave kare...i don't mind ...but you have to do it

2 hours later at Modi
mansion

Meera : Dad...no no
no!!!...how can you do this...mai iss gawwar ke pass internship nahi kar sakti...i
mean ...ye kaunsa badi financial firm ke malik hai...i know what he does for
living...mirch ka business hai inka...wahan mai kya internship karungi..please
dad...aap

MR.Modi : bass
meera...tum baat karne ki tameez bhul gayi ho kya...and mirch ka business hai
toh kya hua...aisa koi chota-mota business nahi hai...pure India mein hi
nahi...balki India ke baahar bhi unki chilli powder and pepper export hoti
hai...500 crore ka turnover hai...not a small thing...and aur vaise bhi toh
tumhara specialisation marketing mein hi hai na...,..toh tumhe wphi karna
hai...kaise wo apne spices and products ko international brand banaye...u have to
help him out...aur aagar tum iss challenge mein successful hui toh...jaisa
tum chahogi wahi hoga...okay?

Meera modi : Mai kabhi challenge se backout nahi karti...fine... I
accept it

Haider : ok ok...cut...perfect
Take

Over the next few hours some more shots were taken, before
it was finally called a day

Meera : dharam sir...dharam
sir...wait...apko pack up k eek dum baad kya jaldi rehti hai jaane ki...lets
have coffee together??...for saving my superman?? My treat

Dharam : wo actually meera ...mujhe ghaar par jaldi jana tha...and
wo meri

Dharam was about to mention his wife...but before he could
say any further ...meera made probably the cutest pout he has ever scene...and
just like that...something warmed inside the ice cold D.S that he had become over
the years...and he melted

Dharam : acha baba...abbey roni surat mat banao...will go

Meera's face lit up like a 100 watt bulb...and before could
listen to the rational part of his brain...his pinched meera's nose...later of
course he cursed himself...but it was too
late...meera blushed pink...and shifted her face to ground

Dharam(trying to normalise fangirling meera) : I guess we
should take our respective cars ...and just meet at the coffee house itself...it
would be easier for us to go to our respective places after coffee that way

Meera just nodded a yes...blush still colouring her cheeks...but
thankfully at coffee things were more normal ...meera was her chirpy self...she
kept asking questions about all her favourite character that he has played...about
his love for theatre and reluctance for T.V

Meera : kabse mai hi bole ja rahi hu...bakad bakad...aap bhi
toh mujhse puchiye kuch??

Dharam : really tumhe yaad aagya...ki kissi aur ko bhi mauka
dena chaiye...kya pata usse bhi kuch puchne ka mann kar raha ho??

And with that meera started laughing again...it was the 5^th
time in a day that dharam had said something a little mean...and instead of
getting annoyed she had laughed again for the 5^th time

Meera: acha acha...sorry...aap puchiye

Dharam: tum isse pehle I mean acting se pehle kya kya kia
hai...and tumhaari acadmic qualidication kya hai

Meera: hmmm...well isse pehle mene thoda theatre and
musicals kiye hai in college,...and mere education abhi khatam nahi hui... I am
in last semester of my B.com...Dad chahte the ki mai unka business join karo...he
doesn't like my acting... you know

Dharam (smirking): haan toh achi acting seekhlo na so that
he likes your acting

Meera(who was laughing copiously again) : Omg...dharam sir...u
know wat I mean...he doesn't like me in this profession...but...god...u r so funny...i
don't know why people say u are brooding...u have such a good sense of humor...mai
itna kabhi nahi haansee

Dharam: actually
whatever they say...is right...I can be brooding ...infact downright mean...it
takes a level of patience and ability to laught at ur self to like my sense of humor...and
u seems to have hit

He then placed his mouth very very close to meera and
whispered..."but I would suggest to not to become to free with me...infact
while you still have chance run away from me little girl"

Meera was perplexed ...her mind dazed...all she could see
was his chocolate brown eyes...all she could feel was his breath on her face...and
a sweet yet masculine fragrance of cologne

Even in her dazed brain she could recognize it was dior's
that was her love for Branded things

And then suddenly with a confidence she did nt realise came
from...she returned to her senses...and brought her face even closer...such that
dharam had to back a bit...

Meera : I am meera modi...and I don't run away from
things/people or events no matter how tough...abb toh mai yeh dosti hamesha
nibhanogi...par aap toh nahi bhag jaayenge na??

It was now dharam's turn to get startled...he hadn't expected her to be this
brave...

Dharam: ...hmmm...meera I think we should go its late...and kal
fir early morning shoot hai...good night

And with that dharam ended their such a nice evening on an
abrupt note

While driving to her home...meera couldn't divert her
attension from the events of the evening...Dharam pinching her nose...she blushing...then
dharam's close whisper...and she having goosebumps...she could yet again feel
butter flies in her stomach

Dharam on the other
hand reached home in a very happy mood...

Dharam(whistling and humming) : Yeh laal ishq...yeh malal ishq...priya...where
are u babes...

Priya(as usual in a sour mood) : ...what is it...?? And I see
you are late again...??...why are u singing..

Dharam : offo...tum humesha kharab mood mein kyun rehti ho...see I brought ur and rohan's
favourite ice cream...so please chill dear wifeyy

Priya(sees the brand and sulks) : what is it
barista??...you know I eat only baskin robbins?...here you go,...eat it
with ur son...i don't want eat...and dinner is the fridge...ask kamla bai...she
will warm it for u ..in micro...i am gong to bed

Dharam..wanted to taunt her back...or say something mean...but
he thought he would not ruin his good mood for someone who doesn't care...he
took the ice cream in two bowl...and went to his son's room for some good time

Rohan : daddy...u brought me ice cream wow...that too my
favourite flavour

Dharam : off course daddy had to bring it for the best boy
in the world...chalo lets quickly finish this...and then we would play ur
favourite video game...ok

Rohan nodded and hugged his father tight...dharam became
guilty for a moment he know how much the boy misses him now...earlier when he
was doing theatre he would be home in 5 hours max but T.V requires 7-8 hours
minimum...and he also knew of priya's careless attitude towards rohan...he felt
his anger returning on himself as well as on his excuse of a wife...and then
a sound of a certain laughter and giggling echoed in his ears...having
calming effect on him...he hugged his son even tighter and closed his eyes...taking
deep breath...with closed eyes ...He then saw a dimpled smile...exposing
pearl like teeth...and he realised what he saw...he did not want to go any further and
see the full face of this smiling person...because he exactly knew who she was...so
he immediately opened his eyes...crashing back to hard reality ...

To be continued

Originally posted by: ninag

Love your writing so much!!! My best part was when Dharam told Meera she still had time to escape and she should run away from him. Look forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: dheera_1

Heyy guys...thanks for coping up with my exams...and bearing with late update...but as promised...here is the 6th part...and NEXT part...sooner than u can imagine😊😉

Happy reading people...but pls do comment...abt ur views😃

PART 6

That afternoon when the duo returned to sets...every one saw this change of wind...the two co star that couldn't stand each other were retuning from some where together and both were laughimg continuously...well actually meera was laughing...and dharam was smiling...bt since hardly even smiled...so even that was big

Haider : arey yaar kaahan gayab hogaye the tum dono ...kab se sab tumhe yaahan dhund rahe the...common aaj se shooting ka second schedule begin karna hai...

Meera: sorry sir...wo mere wajah se dharam sir ko bhi late ho gyaa...but we are ready..bus aap ek baar brief kar do about the scene

Haider : ok so here the scene goes...meera ur dad decides u to punish u for ur late night Stunt and for lack of interest in studies...so he asks you to do an internship with D.S...and D.S you...u have been asked by Mr. modi to teach meera a lesson or two in humility and humblness...so u wd take whatever ,measures at your office to tame her and make meera humble,...ok so nowboth of u ready?

Yes they both echoed in unison

Dharam (on phone): haan mota bhai boliye kaise phone kia...sab theek

Mr.Modi : wo dharam bhai...mene ek baar dubaara aapko sorry bolne ko phone kia tha,,,...wo meri beti ne jo aapke saath badtammezi kki na

Dharam : aabhi java de ne mota bhai...aapke aur mere dhaande mein kitne purani dosti..chddo...haan par ek baat zarur kahonga...wo ladki ko agar bachpan mein ek kaan ke neeche mara hota na...toh aaj yeh haal na hota...

Mr. modi : mai janta hu dharam bhai ki mene hi usse itna bigaad diya hai...par ab mein yeh galti sudharna chahta hoon...aur mujhe aapki help chaiye...aap please mere beti ko thodi tameez aur insaaniyat sekhane mein meri help karenge??...

Dharam : par...mai kaise...yeh aapke ghar ka mamla hai...aur wo chokri mujhse nafrat karti hai...wo meri baat kabhi nahi manegi...

MR. modi : uusko manni hogi aapki har baat...kyunki ab se woh aapke yahan internship karegi...apne kaha than a...ki apki company mein ek marketing manager ki jagah khaali hai...aur meera ka specialisation bhi wohi hai...bass aap pls mana mat kariyega...

Dharam : kya...nan a...mota bhai...maaf karo...aapki uss pagal dikri ko mai apne yahan nahi rakh sakta pata nahi kab kisska sir phode wo...

Mr.modi : pls dharam bhai aapko mere liye ye karna hi hoga...aap meri akhiri hope ho...aur mai aapko freedom deta hu...usko zameen par laane ke liye aap usse kitna bhi daante ya regular employees jaisa behave kare...i don't mind ...but you have to do it

2 hours later at Modi mansion

Meera : Dad...no no no!!!...how can you do this...mai iss gawwar ke pass internship nahi kar sakti...i mean ...ye kaunsa badi financial firm ke malik hai...i know what he does for living...mirch ka business hai inka...wahan mai kya internship karungi..please dad...aap

MR.Modi : bass meera...tum baat karne ki tameez bhul gayi ho kya...and mirch ka business hai toh kya hua...aisa koi chota-mota business nahi hai...pure India mein hi nahi...balki India ke baahar bhi unki chilli powder and pepper export hoti hai...500 crore ka turnover hai...not a small thing...and aur vaise bhi toh tumhara specialisation marketing mein hi hai na...,..toh tumhe wphi karna hai...kaise wo apne spices and products ko international brand banaye...u have to help him out...aur aagar tum iss challenge mein successful hui toh...jaisa tum chahogi wahi hoga...okay?

Meera modi : Mai kabhi challenge se backout nahi karti...fine... I accept it

Haider : ok ok...cut...perfect Take

Over the next few hours some more shots were taken, before it was finally called a day

Meera : dharam sir...dharam sir...wait...apko pack up k eek dum baad kya jaldi rehti hai jaane ki...lets have coffee together??...for saving my superman?? My treat

Dharam : wo actually meera ...mujhe ghaar par jaldi jana tha...and wo meri

Dharam was about to mention his wife...but before he could say any further ...meera made probably the cutest pout he has ever scene...and just like that...something warmed inside the ice cold D.S that he had become over the years...and he melted

Dharam : acha baba...abbey roni surat mat banao...will go

Meera's face lit up like a 100 watt bulb...and before could listen to the rational part of his brain...his pinched meera's nose...later of course he cursed himself...but it was too late...meera blushed pink...and shifted her face to ground

Dharam(trying to normalise fangirling meera) : I guess we should take our respective cars ...and just meet at the coffee house itself...it would be easier for us to go to our respective places after coffee that way

Meera just nodded a yes...blush still colouring her cheeks...but thankfully at coffee things were more normal ...meera was her chirpy self...she kept asking questions about all her favourite character that he has played...about his love for theatre and reluctance for T.V

Meera : kabse mai hi bole ja rahi hu...bakad bakad...aap bhi toh mujhse puchiye kuch??

Dharam : really tumhe yaad aagya...ki kissi aur ko bhi mauka dena chaiye...kya pata usse bhi kuch puchne ka mann kar raha ho??

And with that meera started laughing again...it was the 5^th time in a day that dharam had said something a little mean...and instead of getting annoyed she had laughed again for the 5^th time

Meera: acha acha...sorry...aap puchiye

Dharam: tum isse pehle I mean acting se pehle kya kya kia hai...and tumhaari acadmic qualidication kya hai

Meera: hmmm...well isse pehle mene thoda theatre and musicals kiye hai in college,...and mere education abhi khatam nahi hui... I am in last semester of my B.com...Dad chahte the ki mai unka business join karo...he doesn't like my acting... you know

Dharam (smirking): haan toh achi acting seekhlo na so that he likes your acting

Meera(who was laughing copiously again) : Omg...dharam sir...u know wat I mean...he doesn't like me in this profession...but...god...u r so funny...i don't know why people say u are brooding...u have such a good sense of humor...mai itna kabhi nahi haansee

Dharam: actually whatever they say...is right...I can be brooding ...infact downright mean...it takes a level of patience and ability to laught at ur self to like my sense of humor...and u seems to have hit

He then placed his mouth very very close to meera and whispered..."but I would suggest to not to become to free with me...infact while you still have chance run away from me little girl"

Meera was perplexed ...her mind dazed...all she could see was his chocolate brown eyes...all she could feel was his breath on her face...and a sweet yet masculine fragrance of cologne

Even in her dazed brain she could recognize it was dior's that was her love for Branded things

And then suddenly with a confidence she did nt realise came from...she returned to her senses...and brought her face even closer...such that dharam had to back a bit...

Meera : I am meera modi...and I don't run away from things/people or events no matter how tough...abb toh mai yeh dosti hamesha nibhanogi...par aap toh nahi bhag jaayenge na??

It was now dharam's turn to get startled...he hadn't expected her to be this brave...

Dharam: ...hmmm...meera I think we should go its late...and kal fir early morning shoot hai...good night

And with that dharam ended their such a nice evening on an abrupt note

While driving to her home...meera couldn't divert her attension from the events of the evening...Dharam pinching her nose...she blushing...then dharam's close whisper...and she having goosebumps...she could yet again feel butter flies in her stomach

Dharam on the other hand reached home in a very happy mood...

Dharam(whistling and humming) : Yeh laal ishq...yeh malal ishq...priya...where are u babes...

Priya(as usual in a sour mood) : ...what is it...?? And I see you are late again...??...why are u singing..

Dharam : offo...tum humesha kharab mood mein kyun rehti ho...see I brought ur and rohan's favourite ice cream...so please chill dear wifeyy

Priya(sees the brand and sulks) : what is it barista??...you know I eat only baskin robbins?...here you go,...eat it with ur son...i don't want eat...and dinner is the fridge...ask kamla bai...she will warm it for u ..in micro...i am gong to bed

Dharam..wanted to taunt her back...or say something mean...but he thought he would not ruin his good mood for someone who doesn't care...he took the ice cream in two bowl...and went to his son's room for some good time

Rohan : daddy...u brought me ice cream wow...that too my favourite flavour

Dharam : off course daddy had to bring it for the best boy in the world...chalo lets quickly finish this...and then we would play ur favourite video game...ok

Rohan nodded and hugged his father tight...dharam became guilty for a moment he know how much the boy misses him now...earlier when he was doing theatre he would be home in 5 hours max but T.V requires 7-8 hours minimum...and he also knew of priya's careless attitude towards rohan...he felt his anger returning on himself as well as on his excuse of a wife...and then a sound of a certain laughter and giggling echoed in his ears...having calming effect on him...he hugged his son even tighter and closed his eyes...taking deep breath...with closed eyes ...He then saw a dimpled smile...exposing pearl like teeth...and he realised what he saw...he did not want to go any further and see the full face of this smiling person...because he exactly knew who she was...so he immediately opened his eyes...crashing back to hard reality ...

To be continued

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

gud 2 c them 2gether like this.coffee date with normal talk was nice.liked meera's attitude of answering dharam nicely.priya is so arrogant.loved dharam rohan.dharam is getting affected by meera.but he is controlling himself.
where were u?missed ur ff very much.

And Ninag...y r u not completing ur ff?

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

@bold, so sweet and romantic, i was getting goosebupms in those scenes. whole coffee shop wali scene was so so good. but 1stly jo main kahungi thats ur skills in dialogue writing. i mean in the shoot wali scene u have written dialogues in gujrati+hindi so well, it seems u know the language. and u have noticed that characters so well, woh kya kya kehte hai, kis tarah se bolte hai.👏

yaar aj toh update padhte padhte i feel like i wish mujhe bhi aisa koi milta.

and lastly obviously rohan-dharam scene, one of my fvrt duo, amazing scene

and ekdam last scene "taking deep breath...with closed eyes ...He then saw a dimpled smile...exposing pearl like teeth...and he realised what he saw...he did not want to go any further and see the full face of this smiling person...because he exactly knew who she was...so he immediately opened his eyes...crashing back to hard reality ..."-- lovely😳

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

gud 2 c them 2gether like this.coffee date with normal talk was nice.liked meera's attitude of answering dharam nicely.priya is so arrogant.loved dharam rohan.dharam is getting affected by meera.but he is controlling himself.
where were u?missed ur ff very much.

And Ninag...y r u not completing ur ff?