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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Part7

Urmilla was delighted to see the modi family and asks them what they want to drink. Gopi who is scared says she will help in the kitchen and she goes. Urmilla turns on the TV and on the news it says a rapist has just killed a lady in her 40s and his name is Shekar kumar. Behind gopi sees it and drops the plate. (Shekar also raped gopi) ahem turns around and says gopi you are not a gawar are you why are you reacting to this? Was she you sister? NO then don't act like you are one! Kokila says ahem is right how can you be irresponsible! Jigar had understood why she reacted and he was shocked that Shekar raped her aswell!

Aradhaya pushes sahir because sahir called her a moti rashi comes and stops them.

Jatin rings gopi and gopis phone rings, gopi picks it up and jatin says suman has just saw Shekar in rajkot he was in a Dhaba with a few people. Gopi asks where? Near Monday's market. Be careful and stay with jigar for now until I organise you security (btw jatin is that confused doctor from itna karona mudge pyaar)

Gopi says she will be there in a few hours.

She tells jigar about it and he also agrees. Ahem sees gopi with jigar again and goes to gopi and grabs her arm and says jigar is your devar! Gopi is confused that what the hell he is doing! Ahem said that he has important work to do so he's going with Gopi. Jigar says why can't babhi stay? He said if you needed company be with rashi but not gopi! Rashi takes jigar to a room and says you have broken my trust and jigar blurred out everything. Rashi was really shocked she was about to collapse and cry but jigar said for babhis sake be quite and don't tell mummieji, rashi promises she won't and won't tell anyone. Ahem brings gopi home and starts to shout at her. FIRST OF ALL YOU STAY AWAY FROM JIGAR AND HE STAYS AWAY FROM YOU OKAY AND DONT BE STUPID BY REACTING TO A NEWS! Gopi is upset at ahems behaviour but didn't cry because she needs to be strong and fight! Rashi comes home and started crying by seeing what state gopi is in but wiped her tears when gopi came to her.


Aradhayas room

Gopi was getting Aradhaya to sleep and ahem comes and kisses Arus forehead and says sorry to Gopi. Gopi says its fine.


Gopi goes to jatins office and sees suman and their, jigar also came. Jatin said that gopi you are strong that you still living after that gang rape. Jigar also hugs gopi and says he got the best babhi ever!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Part 7

Ahem paces in is room and wonders where gopi went. Gopi comes in and ahem asks where did she go? She says she had went to meet jatin he needed help. What help? Erm he has problems with his documents. Said Gopi.


After gopi leaves the room ahem is getting suspicious about Gopi and he knew she lied because jatins house is 5 mins away. And it took an hour there!


Rajis room

How's gopi asked rashi. She's fine and suman knows where's Shekar. He lives near your mummy's place!
Rashi is shocked.

Aradhaya wakes up and sees a moustache on her face. She screams and Gopi and ahem comes and see. Gopi starts laughing openly and ahem glares at her peacefully and in his mind is the lala song.
Gopi then kisses aradhaya on her cheeks. Aradhaya then sees milk in Gopis hand she knew it was hers and runs away and gopi chases after her and ahem giggles.

In gohems room

Ahem was reading his files and Gopi is reading her book (private peaceful is what she is reading) ahem goes upto her and ask if there is any problems tell me as I'm your husband and bestie. Gopi nods but still didn't tell ahem about 4 years ago.

Jigar knocks on the door and says to ahem that tommorrow he can't come to the meeting because rashi has an doctors appointment. Devarji what happened to rashi? She never told me? She is getting back pains. Oh.

In the morning rashi jigar goes to meet jatin. Jigar lied to ahem for Gopis safety. Jatin says that gopis life is at massive risk if Shekar sees gopi he will kill her or get a wrestler to handle her (male wrestler) rashi said why are those bad people making gopis life so miserable! Jatin says you should tell ahem if he finds out from a third person his life will also go miserable. We will have to ask babhi however rashi says she's so going to say no jigarji so why can't we just tell ahem jiju? Because babhi trusts me and if she want me to not to tell ahem so I won't. Rashi agrees.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
after a long time a nice gohem ff.gopi left ahem when he said that he doesnt need d baby.sh is no more illiterate,she is in top position now.lawyer jatin helped her a lot.nice charac.gopi's daughter aradhya is so cute n naughty.sad n shocking that gopi is a rape victim.finally gohem confrontation..that was nice.they got married again as per kokila's wish.now rapist is behind her 2 kill him.jigar is trying 2 help gopi with rashi's support.but ahem is frustrated abt gopi jigar closeness also.oh...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
It is better if Gopi tells ahem & kokila that the one who raped Suman was also among the who has raped her.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

after a long time a nice gohem ff.gopi left ahem when he said that he doesnt need d baby.sh is no more illiterate,she is in top position now.lawyer jatin helped her a lot.nice charac.gopi's daughter aradhya is so cute n naughty.sad n shocking that gopi is a rape victim.finally gohem confrontation..that was nice.they got married again as per kokila's wish.now rapist is behind her 2 kill him.jigar is trying 2 help gopi with rashi's support.but ahem is frustrated abt gopi jigar closeness also.oh...

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jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#16
hope u'll continue this n update regularly without disconinuing it like most writers do

Originally posted by: Saggar888

thank you for liking it xxx

Saggar888 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Part 8

Kokila tells everyone to come to the hall. She says that everyone will be going to a
Massive event where whole rajkot will be there because the massive kana ji ki murti will be here. Everyone is excited except gopi and jigar. Gopi says to jigar that what shall we do? He says tell ahem
He would help trust me! Gopi says no because she doesn't trust anyone except you and Aru and jatin. Ahem hears that and he's angry that gopi doesn't trust him and then wonders what is she hiding?
An affair? No who would date her!
Illness? No why would she needs trust for that she can tell anyone?
Or somthing major? Yeh I think it's major. Well it's major for her and it would be like some boring old stuff? And he wonders off.

Everyone is excited specially urmilla.
Gopi phones jatin and tells the situation and he said that he would be there aswell but he said to remember that stay with jigar understand and she agrees. Ahem is behind listening to all this and asks her what is she been hiding for days. Gopi says no..nothing. Ahem locks the door and comes close to her and grabs her arm and he says tell me now! I have nothing to tell you ahemji I'm happy where I am. Oh really! If you are happy why is jatin always calling you?
Why is jigar glaring at you?
Why don't you wear a sari?
Why did you drop the plates after hearing the name Shekar?
And on your phone contact who the hell is suman?

Wait! Have you been looking at my messages ahemji? Replied Gopi
Yes because your are being really wierd!

Gopi says there's nothing to say and there is nothing! Understand and also don't go suspicious because I got. New friend called suman.

Ahem fumes and says GOPI YOU ARE HIDING SOMTHING AND I WILL FIND OUT! Gopi said I have nothing and btw ahemji if there was somthing where were you 6 years ago and where's the girl who you wanted to marry?

Even if I was in pain I wouldn't tell you. And I married you for maji. Don't think we are married again and you can still touch me.

Ahem: or really 6 years ago you liked to get touched by me remember and now you scream. Wow Gopi I never knew that you were a drama queen infact you married me again because you know that you are going to lose the money so you married me again to get the fame back! Well that ain't happening! Gopi was in the mood to slap him but the fear was still with her. What if she did and ahem forces her?
Her mind was going through all this. Ahem says if not today he will find out another day. And Walks off.


Everyone arrives at the event Gopi was with jigar and jatin and rashi while ahem was with his friends. A guy was near Gopi it was Shekar he saw Gopi and glares at her and gopi turns around and sees him Gopi gets frightened and bye time she looked jigar rashi and jatin left her behind by accidentally because Gopi never came with them. Shekar tells all his muscley men and tells them to grab her she runs away and the people are chasing her.

Jatin asks where's Gopi everyone looked for Gopi. Gopi ends up in the car park and the men gets grab hold of her. They hold her kneck behind and grabs her arms and then one of the men turns the lights off at the car park. A man whips her for running away and Shekar was about to rip her clothes but a hand stops him. It was ahem. He was boiling with agony. Even gopis clothes weren't fully ripped. Ahem beats them up badly and the officers take them. Gopi who is again paranoid is bleeding. Her nose was bleeding and majis favourite clothes were ripped. Ahem grabs her arm and puts her in the car and takes her home.


He was boiling because Gopi didn't tell him that she got ganged raped and didn't even bothered to tell him and thinks that because of him Gopi suffered a lot

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Ahem is rly sick.in d show as well as in this ff he keeps blaming gopi.gopi was caught by shekar n gang.but loved ahem saving gopi n punching them.they r caught by d police.now ahem is shocked 2 know abt gopi's gang rape n he feels guilty.i ope he apologizes 2 her n gives her all d luv she deserves
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Ahem is rly sick.in d show as well as in this ff he keeps blaming gopi.gopi was caught by shekar n gang.but loved ahem saving gopi n punching them.they r caught by d police.now ahem is shocked 2 know abt gopi's gang rape n he feels guilty.i ope he apologizes 2 her n gives her all d luv she deserves



I too hope that Ahem apologizes to Gopi & give her overflowing love & happiness that she will come out of her sorrow & depression. It was nice that he rescued her & handed these men to the cops. His guilt is the first step for improving their relationship.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Part9...

Ahem dragged gopi in the hall and everyone came behind him. Kokila was shocked to see Gopi in that state and asks who done this to her. Gopi is not talking and shocked about what just happened. She was lost and she was not talking to anyone at all. Ahem says what happened to tell me and everyone started saying it and finally gopi collapsed and spoke out she said to everybody about who was Shekar. Th...that Shekar raped me 5 years ago with 3 other members. It led the whole family a massive shock specially ahem and kokila and then gopi starts narrating what happen from the start to the end. Everyone had tears in their eyes and ahem was in a deep shock and kokila was crying. Baa nearly had an heart attack.

-flashback-
Where gopi was in hospital that day for 3 weeks and that day ahem was out partying.

Ahem has a massive guilt the way he treated gopi and wants gopi to be his wife for real.


Gohems room

Ahem was crying his heart out and thinks that he's gopis culprit and remembers when gopi faints when he was about to kiss her. Gopi thinks that she is a burden to everyone and will leave the house at night with aradhaya and go somewhere else.


Morning

Ahem wakes up and notices a note near him he reads it

"Dear ahemji I cannot stay with burden longer, I am ready to suffer but can not take burden.
I am going to leave the house with aradhaya and when you read this then I'm gone... Please get married.
I don't want you to be shameful because your the husband of a rape victim..

Your gopi"

Ahem is devastated, by the time he came downstairs he notices a spare shimla ticket for jatin but he's not going and the date was the today's date and gopis train will come in 3 hours time so he gets his stuff packed and books the ticket to shimla.


Gopi is at the station and aradhaya is staring at a young boy that she likes at school. Ahem sees gopi and smiles and taps her shoulder, gopi sees him and asks why are you here? Didn't you read the note? Go back.
He says no because he's coming with her. She asks why? Because I want to and I have a business trip so yeah.

Gopi is shocked but agrees.

In the train everyone is a sleep. Aradhaya wakes up and decides to be naughty. She pinches a lady and run backs to gopi. The lady wakes up for a second then goes to sleep. Aradhaya keeps doing that until when ahem woke up and sees aradhaya doing it, at first he gets annoyed then he starts giggling and goes and brings aradhaya and puts her to sleep before gopi gets disturbed. Ahem smiles at her sleeping.

Part10 is coming up


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