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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys I'm new here thank you for encouraging. I am writing a ff of gopi pregnant with her first child. Ik it should been written 3 years ago sorry about that but I just though of it.

One morning gopi found out she was pregnant she was happy however worried what she is going to tell ahem. Rashi found out and told everyone everyone was excited however ahem was confused. Suddenly ahem found out about how it all happened and is guilty and says sorry and confesses his feelings. Gopi is really happy and both spend time however they didn't spend it that much because of her side affects of pregnancy. One day ahem became so Angry and grabbed gopi and took her downstairs and said "I don't want this child! It ruined my relationship with gopi. I am not taking responsibility at all and I didn't want a child of a gawar (in my ff gopi is still unpar) and also I still love Anita" gopi gives him a tight slap and says that her child would not need a father because she has a mother and this mother will give the best. Kokila breaks all the ties with ahem and gopi leaves the manison

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

6 years leap:

A girl who is on her bike with her friends behind her is riding through the garden and a lady comes with dark brown hair and she is wearing salwar kameez. she was wearing pink earring and white bangles. It was gopi. She shout Aradhaya come here you cheeky girl. (She worked as kavya from pyaar ko Ho Jaane do)
And Aradhaya replies sorry mumma.

Gopi: why did your teacher called me and said you were messing about!
Aradhaya: because the lesson was boring
Gopi:I understand it's boring but you need education and mumma has to miss office because of you
Aradhaya: you don't need to jatin papa is here!

Jatin is the lawyer of gopi. He started helping go when aradhaya was 1 years old. When aradhaya was 1 years old something bad happened to gopi. After that she started to get nightmares everyday and everything has changed.


At the modi bhavan everything is different. Rashi has 2 twins called Samar and sahir they are 5 years old.
Samar is a prankster
Sahir double prankster

Ahem has changed aswell! He is back with his same old ego! And still not with Anita! He thinks because of that gawar I have no one!

Kokila has also changed and now she doesn't speak to ahem properly since she broken the ties with him.


Jatin came home and saw aradhaya. She said where's my chocolate? Jatin says there you go my sweetheart. Don't tell mumma! Gopi was behind aradhaya and says I heard everything! no more mischief Aru. Understand! Yes mumma! Jatin said that there's a good news! Her company has joined the biggest company in India! M and sons will meet you tomorrow's and remember forget your past! Ahem was happy that he's joining up with the Florence industry. It's Saturday and jatin has to go and fight a case so gopi has to take aradhaya with her. When she arrives office she tells aradhaya to sit in her cabin while she gets her some books to study through. After she goes aradhaya started to do her drawings of her and her mother and jatin with the house behind. Gopi comes back and sees the drawing she is pleased however someone knocks on her door and says the boss of m and sons industry's ceo has came gopi said she will be their in about 5 mins and asks to get dai to look after aradhaya. Gopi has arrived at the ceo office she says hi my name is gopi kapoor. And suddenly their was a big shock when the ceo turned his chair it was non other than ahem! He was so shocked and gets flashback where gopi said that the child is no longer yours! And gets angry. And he thinks she's still unpar and may be a servant here and asks her to get him green tea. EXUSME mr ahem modi I am not your servant! Infact I am the ceo of Florence industry. He says hahahah nice try gawars don't even know how to even say a full sentance in English about the solar systems. And gopi says the facts about the solar system in English and Spanish fluently. Ahem is stunned to see gopi changed. Jatin comes in and says he was one the case and hugs gopi. Gopi hugs him back which makes ahem jelouse that gopi never hugged him.

Parts 3 is coming tommorrow


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting post. It is different from the original show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharoon3210

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what about common sence
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Part 3

Ahem fumes seeing this and says to gopi WOW you are married again and now called Mrs jatin kapoor! Gopi is confused what the hell he is saying? She think "ahemji thinks I'm married to jatin when he is her best friend and her lawyer" no he's my friend mr ahem modi we are best friends like how you and Anita are. Ahem fumes after hearing this and gets angry seeing she's holding hands with jatin. And suddenly gopis phone rings, it was dai saying aradhaya has finished her homework and wants you or jatin because she is bored. Jatinji Aru needs you please go to my office and look after her says gopi. Jatin agrees, ahem asks gopi who is Aru? Gopi says non of your business ahem irritatedly said it is because I'm your... And stops. Gopi says she will be going and she goes to her cabin. Aradhaya comes and says she missed her and gopi hugs her.

Scene change: 12 am Florence lane villa,

Gopi gets flashback where she is screaming for help while three men were laughing. Gopi wakes up and screams suddenly jatin comes and gives her stress and depression tablet to her. Gopi goes calm and say why did this happen to me! She crys and jatin hugs her.

Scene changed: modi bhavan

Ahem was in bed thinking about gopi and suddenly remembers about the child and wonders what's the name of their child? Ahem thinks it might be a girl no a boy then remembers gopi was talking to a girl called Aru and thinks it might be her daughter he smiles and cant wait to see her in the morning.

Part 4 is coming
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4

In the morning gopi goes office with Aru while jatin is away. Ahem also thinks about Aru and thinks how she will look like. He sees a little girl watching him and it was non other than aradhaya. He sweetly asked what's her name and replies her name is aradhaya. Ahem is shocked and really happy that the cute girl is his daughter. Gopi comes in and sees aradhaya she is shocked that ahem was there aswell. She sends aradhaya with dai and says to ahem and reminds him what he said when she was pregnant and said that not to get close to her! Ahem is sad and angry that gopi is not letting ahem modi near his daughter. Jatin arrives at the office and tells gopi that aradhaya phoned me and kept nagging me to take you and her to the icecream parlour so I came to pick her and you up. Aradhaya you mischief child said gopi and smiled and said. Let's go. Ahem was behind and watched this all and feals jelouse and flashback is shown where gopi didn't want to go anywhere with ahem and back to reality ahem is fuming and thinks gopi is more comfortable with jatin and he thinks of somthing bad and plans it.


The next day aradhaya was at school and jatin went to drop her off and ahem thinks this is the chance to remind gopi who she is and always be. Gopi came to ahems office to give a file. Ahem locks the door behind and went towards her. Gopi went back since she is scared of getting touched by men after what happened to her

Flashback

when aradhaya was 1 years old aradhaya was ill and gopi gave Aru to dai to look after it.. On her way to the pharmacy 3 guys grabs her and takes her to a place of no where and and throws her on the floor. Gopi screams for help but no one was there and suddenly she gets raped by all 3 men. After that she got in depression.


Back to reality

Ahem walks to gopi even more closure that gopi was about scream and she started getting flashbacks of her rape. As soon as ahem tried to punishingly kiss her gopi collapse and starts screaming and sees flashback. Jatin runs to gopi however gopi faints.

Part5 coming
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Part5

Ahem is shocked to see gopis reaction. At first he think that it's drama however when jatin realises that gopis blood pressure went low and jatin immediately called the doctor. Ahem left to go home.

Gopi wakes up and tells jatin what happened. At first he was thinking to call the police but gopi stopped him and then he called kokila and told her everything

Kokila was shocked and was in to show ahems true colours.
Ahem arrived home and saw the whole family waiting for him and he asked everyone rudely. What is it?
Kokila came to ahem and gave him 2 tight slaps one for doing this to gopi and second not letting her live peacefully. Ahem went to his room and started throwing stuff about and thinks why gopi is reacting to this! Gopi decides to take a break and spend time with aradhaya however she is more concerned about what had happened to aham at home. I while jatin was studying his case gopi takes aradhaya to the park and while she was there gopi got the same fear and started getting flashbacks. Jigar and rashi was their also with samar and sahir. Rashi sees gopi and runs towards her however gopi faints and bangs her head on the ride. Rashi and jigar take gopi and aradhaya to modi bhavan. Kokila was so happy to see go but gopi was still unconscious. After 3 hours later gopi wakes up and the. She looks around. She is in ahems room and aradhaya and rashi was next to her. She first started to shiver but rashi calmed her down and said you fainted in the park and we had to brink you here since it's near. Gopi says thank you and says she must go however someone says YOU ARE NOT GOING ANYWHERE it was kokila and gopi asked why? Because I told jatin that from now you are living here. Gopi was shocked and asked why. Because we can't live without you. Gopi has teary eyes. However she has to tell someone about her dark past. Only jatin knew. Ahem comes home and surprised to see aradhaya he was about to go up to her however kokila stops her and says this is my daughters child and has nothing to do with you. Ahem is surprised and asked is gopi here? She says yes but not as your wife! Ahem is upset and has to say sorry to gopi. Gopi is in her room slightly crying because she misses jatin. Ahem knocks on the door and said may I come in? She says yes. Ahem says sorry what I have done to you I was just jelouse that you are comfortable with jatin but not with me. I would have been comfortable with you if you hadn't said those words 6 years ago said gopi. I am sorry gopi I was angry that you took care of the whole family and we never get to spend time. And the he asked can we be friends. And she agrees

In the morning rashi wakes up and jigar freaks at looking at her rashi said what is it? Jigar says look at your self! She looks in the mirror and screams! Someone has painted her face as a clown from Halloween! She accuses Samar and sahir but it turns out to be aradhaya! Gopi runs around the house to get aradhaya and she tickles her.


2 weeks later

Kokila is impressed to see ahem and gopis closeness and asked them to remarry
Ahem says yes because he loves gopi however gopi says yes for kokilas happiness. The wedding aradhaya was excited to be in her moms wedding however gopi was scared she was in the mood to cry but she kept quite. After the wedding of gohem gopi was taken to ahems room which was decorated.gopi was scared and really worried and prays to God that please don't let ahemji touch me. Ahem comes 20 minutes later and glares at lost gopi who is getting flashback of her screaming. Ahem goes on the bed and goes close to her but gopi is scared and says gods name in her name. Ahem comes closure to her and suddenly sees gopi shaking and he shouts WHAT IS THIS GOPI,YOU REACT WHEN WE HAD A FIGHT AND TODAY WHEN WE GOT MARRIED AGAIN YOU STILL REACTING! Ahem grabs gopis arm. And says if this keeps carrying on then people will declare you as a massive coward! And he lies does away from her!

Midnight

Gopi wakes up screaming help and ahem wakes up and shout stop it! Gopi comes in sence and goes in the cupboard and gets out depression tablets and swallows it. Ahem is shocked to see gopi on tablets and grabs her out of the bed and takes her downstairs and he tells everyone to wake up. Kokila asks what is it! Luckily kids are asleep. Gopi has to tell the truth today and why she is reacting like that! Everyone begged gopi for the truth and finally gopi spoke up! YOU GUYS KNOW HOW I FEAL AFTER WHAT HAPPEND TO ME? NO YOU DONT! yes somthing had happened to me I GOT RAPED says gopi. Kokila screams NAHI and ahem collapse on the floor hearing it. Yes I got raped. 3 guys raped me. You know why because I was a coward! Then gopi tells them what happened and how. GOPI faints, 12 hours later she wakes up and sees jatin ahem and the whole family next to her. Ahem holds her, and says why didn't you tell us before I could kill the shit out of them!

Part 6 coming tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's nice
..very good to hear a story after sooo long
...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part6
It all turned out as a nightmare, gopi says thank god no
One knows and sees ahem sleeping peacefully besides her. Gopi looked at her clock and sees it 5 am she needs to get ready...

Gopi wears her salwar kameez since she could wear her sari because her scars will show and ahem will find out. She wears duppatta around her kneck so the scratch won't reveal. She gets a phone call from jatin and says that one of the rapist has escaped and is finding you in rajkot. Gopi gets really scared and jatin asks her to never be alone and stay with ahem. Gopi thinks if she will he will Easley find out and she doesn't want to give family the sadness so she tells jatin that she can't and jatin says it's very dangerous! If the rapist sees you he will kill you! Suddenly on the other landline jigar was listening and was crying and gopi caught jigar. Jigar was about to go and tell ahem and kokila and he was saying to gopi that why didn't you tell us! You went in so much pain! Gop says don't tell anyone for her sake and jigar promises he won't and he also says he will be her security don't say no because your life is in danger! She agrees. Aradhaya is seen planning a prank on rashi. She plans to dress as urmilla and go up to her and scare her she knows the plans going to fail so she plans somthing else.

Gohems room

Gopi was lost in her thought and thinks where is the rapist right now while ahem is typing on his computer. Ahem sees gopi lost and feels suspicious and asks her what is happening with you why are you so quiet and why are you always lost don't you have nothing else to do? Soon as gopi is about to reply her phone rings and it was jatin (iPhone not the landline) he said to come court as there is an issue and jigar said me to tell you go downstairs he's waiting. Gopi goes downstairs fast and ahem
Thinks that Gopi is hiding somthing.


Half an hour later

Jigar says what happened? Jatin says that the rapist has tried to rape a girl like you and here she is.

Her name was suman (mahima makwana) she is 19 years old and knows the rapist.
Gopi says suman where is that criminal !
Suman replys rajpal nagar.
Gopi is shocked and urmilla lives there!

Gopi and jigar comes back and ahem asks where did you go for 3 hours! She stubble sand jigar said to the market and kokila asked where's the stuff and he says there nothing good there. Kokila said that we are going to urmillas since its her birthday. Gopi says she can't come she feels dizzy and ahem say wow you weren't dizzy before and ahem makes her come. They all arrive gopi was with jigar and jigar was glaring at her and sees how scared she is. On the other hand ahem stares at gopi angrily for not being next to him and say this is your devar not your pati I'm your pati so stay next to me! Gopi and jigar stares at eachover and says don't worry ill handle everything.. Gopi gives a smile and goes to ahem


Part7 coming out
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saggar888

what about common sence



I mean to say this could have been a better script. Your post is awesome.😃
Edited by sharoon3210 - 9 years ago

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