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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Ahem is rly sick.in d show as well as in this ff he keeps blaming gopi.gopi was caught by shekar n gang.but loved ahem saving gopi n punching them.they r caught by d police.now ahem is shocked 2 know abt gopi's gang rape n he feels guilty.i ope he apologizes 2 her n gives her all d luv she deserves

thanks mate.. Part 9 is out
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
As per the ff and ss, part 9 should bring the Gohem close.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
gopi decided 2 leave ahem so that he wont b ashamed as a rape victim's hus.but ahem caught her at d right time.but he isnt willing 2 admit that he wants her back bcz of luv
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Part 10

The morning strikes and Gopi wakes up she sees her self on ahems shoulder and quickly gets her head up. Ahem wakes up and sees gopi
Starting at him.she smiles and decides to pull gopis legs abit (winding her up! Don't be dirty minded folks)

" I know why you are looking at me because I'm handsome and I have biceps and triceps and 6 pack abs."

Gopi: "no, your looking at me because I'm pretty and you must have been staring at me when I was a sleep"

Ahem " I was kidding" ahem feels defeated


Ahem asks gopi which hotel you would be staying at, then gopi replies why would she stay in a hotel when she has a house and she lived there for 4 years, you can stay with us if you like. Ahem agrees.

They arrived home and ahem was stunned to see how much effort gopi done... The house looked warm and comfy to stay in..
Gopi shows her their room and ahem is happy that gopi said their.

Ahem goes to aradhayas room and sees a picture of salman Khan. He looks at salmans biceps and looks at his and looks at his muscles and looks at salmans and says mother daughter want a guy with salman khans body and smiles. He also sees a picture of
Gopi tickling Aru and he smiles but is sad because he thinks he wish he never broke ties before and he would get to see baby aradhaya and nothing would happen to Gopi. He takes the blame for everything.

At night gopi started screaming... Ahem wakes up and consoles gopi and takes gopi out the bed and says That I love you! And I can't live without you and aradhaya. Gopi gets happy that ahem still cares for him and forgives him. In the morning aradhaya wakes ahem up while gopi is in her mini mandhir. Aradhaya asks she needs help.why?. Because the neighbor jaynti aunti (deepmala from 2025) and her husband (same couple from the show) is doing my heading and I need help to prank her. Gopi hears it and said no you may not prank the poor women. Remember what you done last time? Ahem asks what she done?. She painted her face as a clown when she was a sleep. Ahem laughs and gopi said what's so funny and ahem replies she's so me. Gopi smiles and say yeh whatever and goes.

Modi bhavan

Kokila cries at aradhayas and gopis pic and says comes back soon.

Gopis house

Gopi hugs ahem and says thank you for getting rid of my nightmares and ahem is really happy that gopis changing back to old gopi

Part 11 is on Its way
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
gohem in gopi's house now.ahem caring n comforting her.so gopi 4gave him.they r very happy now.hope it continues
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Interesting story
Continue soon, I think gopi nd ahem should stay away and spend some quality time together as a family
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Part 11

Aradhayas bedroom

Aradhaya is in her room and Is doing her homework. And ahem comes in.
What are you upto? She then replies she's doing her maths homework and he offers her help? She then replies yes and there both there studying while Gopi is smiling at them.

3 hours later...

Gopi gets a phone call from aradhayas teacher and says she must attend the parent competition tonight it would be great full. Gopi asks ahem and ahem agrees.


Next morning...

At school the head teacher introduces the activities there are going to do:
Which parent can cook best for the kid...
Which parent can find their kid while blind folded?
And more.

Cooking competition...
Ahem says we should make salad which is healthy. NO said Gopi we shall make chocolate pastries since its aradhaya favourite and they both argue what to make until aradhaya interrupts and says make Sunday's special chocolate brownies. Ahem and gopi glares at eachover and starts laughing.

The time has finished and teachers loved gohems brownies and praises them.
After it was the blindfold competition. They blindfolded ahem and the kids spreads out. Ahem luckily finds aradhaya and the competition end and gohem won.

Ahem says that he organised a modi family picnic where all the family will come and spend 2 days there. Gopi agrees and they all arrive at rajkot. Kokila hugged both and then hugged aradhaya tight. Rashi was also pleased to see Gopi and jigar was happy that gopi has changed.

A couple of days after it was the picnic day. Kokila and chirag and hetal and chirag was together in the car and and jigar and his family was in a separate car so was ahems mini family was separated.
Urmillas family also joined the picnic.

They arrived at the location.
Every couple had a separate bungalow with 2 bedrooms 1 for the couple and for the kid.
Gohem arrived at there bungalow and their bedroom was decorated as suhaag raat decor. Ahem worries hows Gopi might of reacting however Gopi is smiling and then ahem smiles and asks I thought you were scared of these kind of stuff.and gopi replies since we got close I got no fear and the only fear is that what if you leave me again. And ahem replies this will never happen. They hear a knock on the door it was aradhaya and she says that dadi wants all to come outside.

Everyone comes outside and kokila says that we all will go shopping tomorrow and then stay up at night and guess what instead of 2 days let's make it up for a week so this holiday would be memorable. Everyone smiles specially rashi since no house work for a week.

Everybody was enjoying the evening:
Parag was saying is poem
Samir and sahir moon walking
Aradhaya playing sharades and it was easy to defeat rashi.
Then they all start singing. And night came so quickly. Everyone started to go to their bungalow. Gopi was trying to get aradhaya to sleep but aradhaya got Gopi to sleep and Aru has drawn a mustache on Gopi. Ahem comes to see where's Gopi and sees her sleeping with aradhaya however he started laughing which woke Gopi up and she says why are you laughing! He then replies look at yourself and she goes to look at her self and is shocked that Aradhaya has done it to her aswell. And calls her mischief like her dad and then aradhaya speaks up while her eyes are closed and no she's mischief like her mother she says and gopi says that she is a double mischief and then aradhaya wants Gopi and ahem together to make her asleep and then they agree.

Aradhaya falls asleep and ahem is still lost looking at Gopi and so is Gopi lost as she's looking at ahem. They hear aradhaya snore and there eyelock stops and gopi is about to stand up but ahem stops her and he stands up and he picks up Gopi and takes Gopi to their bedroom. He then puts her on the bed and closes the door.

Later...
The lights are off and the clothes were on the floor and ahem and gopi was sleeping hugging tight and ahem was shirtless. And Gopi bare kneck and arm were shown.

It was morning ahem went to a meeting while Gopi was talking to aradhaya.

Then aradhaya started playing tag with Samir sahir.

Part 12 is coming up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
updated so quickly.thx.gohem took part in aradhya's school competition n won.they were interesting.gohem n modis on picnic.gohem got intimate after a long time.gopi is out if fear due 2 ahem's luv.nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

gohem in gopi's house now.ahem caring n comforting her.so gopi 4gave him.they r very happy now.hope it continues



That's what I said. Part 9 will bring gohem close & part 10 has done that.

@sagar: Don't stop. Please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
I won't be able to update today because I have to do my homework for food technology so tomorrow I will definitely update it.

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