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This is my version of the story of Anita gopi & Ahem love triangle! in this ahem will slap both Gopi & Anita her Rashi is in league with anita
gopi hears Ahem saying to anita that he did feel she was not the right girl for him. She sits beside her kanhaji &sobs kanha ji the person whom I luv the most doesnot luv me?
"I think u should divorce such a husband" Rashi says & handsover the divorce papers to gopi
"Gopi just think about him! Poor thing he is sustaining this marriage not out of love but out of respect to his mom .U only tell me is this right.Uve tried enough to win him over but uve not succeed .Its better that U move on in life"
Gopi takes the papers from Rashi
GOHEM Room
Ahem is regretting the way he soloded gopi about the party hes pacing up & down the room "I shouldnt have spoken to her like that poor thing!. She was just concerned about mom & Anita thats why she wasnt enjoying the party .Uff I made such a moutain out of a mole hill.I should have understood my Gopi afterall shes my wife! Whenever I want to please I hurt hurt her. AHEM MODI U R THE BIGGEST... "His soliloquy was interrupted by gopis entry into the room she comes lays her bed on the floor "gopi see Im sorry I should not have spoken.."she goes to sleep.Ahem thinks "GOD if she angry with me why is she sleeping on the floor!All the time she keeps things bottled up she can fight with me she has the right shes my wife! ahem dont u know ur wife its not in her nature to fight! OK I will also sleep on the floor as my wife is sleeping on the floor! He lays his bed on the floor to but at a distance.
MM HALL
Gopi goes straight to the hall with her bedding ahem follows her holds her by the arm "Gopi what is this" he says gently " see I said sorry naa.Come on now cheer up . Lets go to our room ". "Our room? its only your room Ahemji Ive no right to call it mine." "Gopi we are husband & Wife & such arguments happen in all couples that doesnt mean..." "We are not like all couples our marrriage is a compromise" "Gopi U are taking this to another extreme I..." "Its not about the party Ahemji u said to anita that Im not the right girl for u".Ahem is shocked "Gopi I said this bcoz I felt like that before but now things have changed"."Nothing has changed ahemji U still love Anita". "Gopi shes my past & u r both my present & future" "No Ahemji ur saying this bcoz u dont want to hurt maaji as Im her choice " "Gopi its not like that at all.." "No it is like that ahemji our marriage means nothing" ahem turns teary he explains " See Gopi calm down... " .Gopi hands over her signed divorce papers to him."Now u r free" Ahem tears away the papers & throws them on her face. He yells "WHAT DO U THINK GOPI MARRIAGE IS A JOKE. BEFORE TAKING SUCH A DRASTIC STEP U SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT ONCE. WE R NOT SEPARATING ONLY DEATH CAN SEPARATE US' .Gopi tunrs towards kanhaji & cries" kahaji why did u do this to me.Ahemji & Anita ben wouldve become one if u wouldve killed me in that accident..."Ahem holds her by the arm turns her towards himself & slaps Gopi very hard across the face TAADAK!!! She falls on the floor holding her cheek & says "AAH"Anita sees this & delights but does not hear the entire conversation "GOPI ENOUGH! "Ahem is shouting & crying bitterly .Gopi is shocked as shes never seen him cry like this before. "DDDO YYU EVEN KNOW WHAT IVE GONE THROUGH DURING THAT TIME.WHEN U WERE IN COMA! He sobs." EACH & EVERY MINUTE GOPI EACH & EVERY MINUTE WAS DEATH FOR ME .EVERYDAY I THANK KANHAJI FOR RETURNING MY GOPI TO ME & U SAID..." He wipes off his tears."U say its all about mom if it had been so I would not have gone against mom for ur education" IT IS BCOZ I LOVE YOU!!! I LOVE YOU!! I LOVE YOU!!! " He shakes her hard. Gopi is stunned & in tears .Shes both happy & sad as she has hurt someone who loves her so much.
"Ahemji.." "Gopi I think we should give each other some space." He goes to his room
Gohem room
Ahem sits on his bed & thinks 'I should not have raised my hand on a woman that too my wife whom I luv so much! I should have controlled myself . This is the second time .OK she had hurt my feelings but Ive also hurt her so many times but she didnt slap me ever .She didnot even raise her voice.She didnt doubt me when I was on the bed with Anita. Her reaction to what I said to Anita was natural as she didnt know I loved her as I never confessed it to her. Shes not at fault shes been an ideal wife the best infact .I dont deserve her!It must have hurt her so much as my hand is paining too. Aww my poor sweet wife...My Gopi...I must go & apologize
In the Hall
Gopis cheek bone is bruised as it has the imprint of the slap.Shes sobbing " kanhaji Ive hurt a person who luvs me so much! Why couldnt I see his love." suddenly she felt a cold sensation on her cheek she turns & sees Ahem with the icepack."U Ahemji Im sorry""shh" he says & wipes her tears "U r not at fault my dear Im sorry .Sorry for every time Ive hurt U " & they hug & cry "Ahemji I LOVE U TOO" " I know that I can see it in ur eyes I promise U Gopi I'll never raise my hand on u " He kisses the slapped cheek" & i'll standby u always" & one more thing & want to say it lovingly I..LOVE...U very much he caresses her checks & kisses her forehead . Saathiya song in the background bye friends its to be continued...
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