FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32 - Page 3

Originally posted by: rucha123

Wonderful start plz continue

Originally posted by: Hetp

loved the start...👏also like the concept...😃eagerly waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: dipsy80

i love it swasthi! 👏 eagerly waiting for the next update! 😃

Originally posted by: Leki

great start Swasthi nd brilliant concept... continue soon

Originally posted by: delsi

very nice concept looking forward for next part

Originally posted by: RachP

Oh I will soo read this soon, Swasthi!

Stratford upon Avon---me likes a dose of Shakespeare! 😳

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Lovely Swasthi👏

An interesting opening chapter. Your knowledge of London is beautifully woven through the story😃

A nice setting and Ahem and Gopi are to be married. It is interesting that Ahem does not yet know the name of the girl he is supposed to marry. Wonder why..

Jigar seems to be our jolly Jigar again and Gopi the timid yet different from Gopi we know in SNS. It is great to see that the cousins work for a good cause.

Both Ahem and Gopi have found something that connects them. For Gopi, she was thinking of Ahem as her future husband but Ahem has no such inkling. What will the day lead to?😛

Will await the next part eagerly😃

Originally posted by: poonamahem

My sentiments exactly ... pls pls continue this

Originally posted by: Savi_S

lovely start. sns in london. wow!😊

update soon.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Swasthi this is an amazing start!!1

You've definitely drawn me in and it is really intriguing to see Gopi and Ahem in a London setting.

This chapter ended way too quick but at least they've met in the first chapter in your FF unlike in someone else's who does not need to be named!!!😆

Love it and I really cannot wait to read the next chapter!! Love the settings and the title is very atmospheric!!