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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Swasthi & Shilpa...just one word "WOW"!!! 👏

Beautifully written with outstanding display of emotions ... It is very real and sweet ... ..the end was ☺️ 😍

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@-Eris-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wow beautifully written shilpa and swasthi 😃. It would be better if cv s can use your os.

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Debalina

@Guggul

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

very emotional and touchy story. swasthi and shilpa, ur joint collaboration alwayz yield amazing stories. continue and keep gifting us beautiful pieces. 👏

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: gina-123
Awesome supper lovely OS..

Thanks Sherry.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: dipsy80
thank you for this beautiful OS! 👏

You are welcome Deepa.

Really glad you have enjoyed the OS.

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Joicej
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Swasthi/Shilpa
At the end of every weekend, I know I have something to look forward to.
That was beautifully written. Ahem was determined throughout and Gopi was hesistant initially. But at the end it all played out perfectly as Ahem had planned.

When she asked him that one question, he already knew the answers she was expecting and the actions she required explainations for. He knew when and how she was hurt.

I also liked how they reasurred each other and promised to say what they felt. This links to Ahem saying that they are similar to each other, so it is important that they both get the communications correct between themselves first.

A wonderful treat that was Swasthi/Shilpa
Thank You.