OS: Wanting to surprise his love

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi,
The backdrop of the OS is the current track on the show.
Wanting to see such a scene on Monday.
Hope you all like it.

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Gopi hurt by Ahem's teasing thanks to Rashi's words, is in kitchen making green tea for Ahem, as its her duty.
Ahem was thrilled to know from his Kaki that Gopi longed to have chaat... he has a master plan now, the thought of Gopi giving him a blushng smile when she comes to know of the suprise was giving him goose bumps.. he was longing for the moment..while waiting for his Gopi in thier room...

Gopi enters the room with the green tea and a sulken face.. Ahem is a lil disappointed, but pins it to mood swings which his mother educated him abt yesterday.. he tries to touch her fingers while she was giving him the green tea, but she quickly backs off..Ahem tries to hold her hands, but hears a knock on the door & backtracks..

It was his mom at the door.. little did he anticipate that his mom was going to ruin his master plan 😭

Ahem: Mom, kya baat hai ?

Koki: Ahem, mein jaanti hoon ki Gopi vahu tumse chaat kaane ki iccha nahi bataayi hogi. Mein chaahti hoon ki tum mere Gopi bahuko chaat khilaane le chalo.. Saaro Ahem dikra

Ahem is shocked & unhappy, gulps & says, "Ji Mom", looking at Gopi, who is all pride for her Maaji

Koki with her trademark smile of accomplishment leaves from there..

Ahem is no mood to destroy his plan.. his determination to see her eyes with joy at the surprise, gives him a quick idea..

Gopi looks at Ahem longingly, but Ahem is lost in thoughts. Unware of Ahems intentions, she reminsces on rashi's words..
part of her mind is asking her not to beleive it, but circumstances are forcing it..
As it is her maaji's order to go the chaat house, she is willing to oblige, thou she feels uneasy that Ahem is being forced upon to do these things for her & its not due to love..

Gopi: Ahemji, mein thayyar hoke aahoongi..

Ahem: Gopi, ruko, meine majee ke kehne par, naa nahi kar paaya, par ab kaafi raat ho chuki hai, hum chaat kaane kal chalenge.. teek hai ?

Gopi is shocked, how true were her sister raahsi's words.. her eyes are filled with tears..

Ahem chuckles & says to himself: Good job.. dont give up..dont melt due to her tears.. wait for anither 10 mins.. u will see what u want to..

Ahem: Gopi, kya hua, mein teek keh raha hoon na.. kal jaayenge na pls..

Gopi: teek hai Ahemji..
saying so, she turns to leave from there...

Ahem is feeling a lil hurt, but he needs to do it for himself, for the pleaure of seeing her surprised, the pleasure of her giving him a hug just like the other day .. he was determined ... poor lover boy, unaware that his actions are creating furore in his beloved's mind


Ahem quickly calls Dinesh to find if he's on the way to MM. He cant keep his Gopi unhappy for long..
Dinesh updates him that he would reach MM in another 5 mins.

Ahem, quickly freshens up & goes down to receive his precious chaat from Dinesh..

Ahem is all set in his room with his small plan, but Gopi is no where to be seen..
He goes down to the kitchen to see Gopi fiddling with some plates, partly coz she didnt want to turn upto their room early..

Ahem: Gopi, kya kar rahi ho.. kisne kaha tumhe ye sab karne keliye..chalo, aaram kar lo,
to meethi: Meethi, ye sab tum kar lo, teek hai..
Gopi: nahin Ahemji, mei abhi aayi

Ahem: Gopi, kaha naa... ab chalo mere saath..
saying do, he grabs her hand to pull her to the room.
Gopi retracts her hand from his hold & says, teek hai, chaloongi

Ahem understands he has hurt her.. but he says to himself.. only 5 more mins.. so hold on dear

Gopi follows Ahem to their room..
Ahem wait at the door, allows Gopi to enter & turns to lock the door.. Gopi observes this, not happy moves on towards the cupbaord to take her night saree out.

Ahem notices that unlike yesterday Gopi isnt blushing today.. poor guy thinks to himslef..
Am i doing it right? Am I overplaying it ?

Ahem goes close to Gopi, holds her arms... but the warmth he experienced yday is missing today..
nevertheless, he turns her towards him, places a kiss on her forehead asking her lovingly if everything is fine..

Gopi simply nods her head with a forced smile on her lips.

Gopi: Ji mein change karke aathi hoon..
Saying do she goes into the washroom, partly escaping Ahem.

Ahem is now on his task... he unfolds the chaat packet & keeps it ready for her on the small coffe table.. goes near the washroom, waiting for her to comeout.

Gopi is surprised to see Ahem waiting there, but she ignores & moves towards the bed..
Ahem grabs her hand, moves near her, turns her head to show the coffee table
Gopi wonders what was that there..
Ahemji, kya hai?

"Gopi aaho mere saath", leads her to the table while holding her arms from behind..
makes her sit on the chair... Gopi is surprised to see her fav chaat at the table..

Ahem kneels down, picks up the chaat & feeds gopi.. while Gopi is in all tears with joy of love..
Ahem gives his famous reassuring smile .. contented that he could please his Gopi..
Surprise.. surprise.. he gets a lovely kiss on his hands from his love. his Gopi..

Both share a cute eyelock, with the famous SNS BGM..😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was soo cute! Ahem was adorable!! hope that happens in tomorrows episode!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya baat hai bade lover boy ban rahein hain yeh
chalo kuch toh kiya inhone laage rahiye ji

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: famzii05

That was soo cute! Ahem was adorable!! hope that happens in tomorrows episode!


Thanks. Hoping for the same :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

kya baat hai bade lover boy ban rahein hain yeh
chalo kuch toh kiya inhone laage rahiye ji


Thanks Chavvi, we have been waiting to see such a lover boy in Ahem..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the OS, really wonderful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a wonderful OS Veena.

Ahem was willing to bear the few minutes of waiting for his Gopi and he was not short of the joy he received from his Gopi.

I could imagine this scene rolling out in the show as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was sooo sweet...hope it happens

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to all of u for ur wonderful comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice to see and feel.Just love this serial.http://starplus.startv.in

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